Inhibited sex, Love triangle, brothers rivalry, Battle for dominance, animalistic passion and Game of lies - this story has it all.
Daniel, the quintessential small town boy with the perfect “good boy” image is eager to start a new life after landing a job in the city.
Henry, the successful owner of a popular news channel (and Daniel’s new boss) is about to find himself taking on much more than an ambitious new employee.
Daniel’s working for Henry, but will Henry work for Daniel?...and what happens when Henry’s twin Theo becomes an enticing new addition to their story?
I made it through 3 pages of cringe before I started skimming. Then outright skipped to the "steamy" bits. This book needs an editor. It feels like it was written in a foreign language and translated with Google Translate.
Please, for the love of the craft, take some pride in your work and give this book the love it deserves.
The story concept is interesting, and I tried to push through, but the editing (or lackthereof) kept tripping me up. I got to 25% before I had to put the book down. It was hard...I really wanted to get to know the characters and watch their relationship bloom, but I'm one of those unfortunate readers who gets lost when there are issues with grammar and sentence structure.
At the end of the book, it says to be continued. I will not be looking for the sequel. I found myself speed reading through this one. I just about gave up at the beginning but I figured if I skimmed maybe I would find a story. I give the author credit for being creative. Not my cup of tea
I really loved the story but it's obviously not written by a native English speaker or it's a poorly done translation which feels clumsy and frustrating at times. Having said that I plan to read the continuation as the storyline great.
I'm assuming this is the work of some Beta AI writer. In no way did a human read this even once and get through more than 2 sentences without running into major grammatical errors. I couldn't make it to 10% before I had to DNF.