I stopped reading at 40%. The very short paragraphs, consisting of one or two sentences, made the writing feel choppy. It's a stylistic choice, one that Lucy Monroe also prefers (Monroe writes for Harlequin) and sometimes it works for me, sometimes it doesn't. In this case, it didn't because the writing also seemed disjointed. The dialogue didn't flow well. I've not read anything else by Maya Nicole, so I'm not sure if this is her typical style of writing.
The plot moved at an odd pace, and was too strange. Camellia wants to live, then she wants to die -- this is something one of the guys commented on, and it's true. She's inconsistent. They find out about her spiders, and then Luc says, "You were supposed to be dead. How did you survive that?" and I don't know what he's talking about. Did he make some sort of move? He's pressing her against a wall with a blade to her neck as he says this, but it didn't seem like he had tried to slash her jugular, so what is he referring to?
Then the guys say they'll help Camellia figure things out, but there are chapters where a whole lot of nothing happens, except that Ric is staying in her apartment, and Luc takes a job as a security guard at her place of work to watch her while she's at work. I couldn't tell if they were watching her for her protection or because they thought she might run off, or they expected her spiders to appear and attack randomly. At first, it seems to be that they didn't want her to run off, but later they appear to trust her, yet the arrangements continue.
It was annoying that they don't let Camellia explain herself -- never once did I hear her tell them that the spiders only attack married men who cheat. Perhaps that would be pertinent? She is a meh kind of heroine, not having any particular personality traits that stand out, except for the desire not to kill any more people. The men are meh too -- Ric, who is more like a puppy dog than an alpha wolf shifter; Lucifer, who is more grumpy than scary and certainly doesn't exude power; and Kai, who is a fallen angel with a very uninteresting story: he fell because he kept trying to visit his family after he died, which was forbidden for a guardian angel to do. ::rolleyes::
The story is not interesting enough to keep me reading. There isn't even much chemistry between the guys and Camellia. Most of the story so far has been from her POV with just one chapter from Lucifer's POV. She thinks they're handsome and hot, but I'm not seeing a great deal of attraction or connection between her and any of them. Certainly, after she puts a dog collar on wolfy Ric and walks him to the park and plays fetch the ball with him, it's hard to imagine him as a love interest. I am not attracted to guys who act like puppy dogs. And he looks at other women while they're at Kai's bar with her -- this is such a no-no, and also doesn't convince me that he wants her at all.
I like paranormal romance because the male leads are usually possessive and protective, but here all the guys are beta, as one of the other reviewers said. And it is a huge let-down. It's not what I expect at all, especially in an RH.