Distance

by In_Dreams

She's a novice Unspeakable trying to earn her stripes. He's a shafted Auror desperate to prove himself. When they end up forced together on a shared assignment, neither is willing to back down. But when the mission pulls them into an ancient world of mystery and adventure, they find themselves depending on each other in a race against time. EWE Dramione.

Genres: Fan Fiction

324 pages, fanfiction

Published November 19, 2018

About the author

Also goes by In Dreams on FFn.

Reviews

[Aviva’s Library]

Dnfing 37%

[Emma Wood · Rating 3 out of 5]

If you’re a Dramione girlie who also grew up with a weird history fixation - this is 100% for you. It’s a 60-40 split between plot and fluff and never too much of one or the other. The storyline is great, it’s clever, well thought out, it’s tense enough you can’t stop reading and is paced really well. The enemies portion is amusing bickering and the fluff has just the right balance between romantic and truly meaningful. A great read if you want a little adventure with your romance.

[Yuliya · Rating 3 out of 5]

The plot of the story is really interesting and enticing. It encourages to read more and more to know what will happen next. It's really amazing that its baseline was created on a true story.
My yearly dream of being an archeologist and discovering ancient civilazions sprang to life again, and I lived vicariously through the characters and their adventures.
I guess, it was difficult with the given clues to understand what was behind the events of the plot. And I would like the story more if there were a bit more suspense. The climax was a bit anticlimatic.
But overall, it was a great read: characters were true to themselves, the pace of the story was lagom, not too fast and not too slow.

[Erin T · Rating 4 out of 5]

Dramione with a side of mystery and done very well!

Younger version of these characters than I'm used to reading lately, but written old enough for the story to make sense and not feel icky. I always appreciate when Harry/Ron/Hermione aren't put in these unrealistic positions of power right after Hogwarts. Yes they are war heroes, but that doesn't make them qualified to run the country.

Enemies to lovers was done well, with enough 'enemies' to make it fit the sub-genre.

[maité · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5 ⭐
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absolutely great enemies to lovers and slow burn but the finding of the cure was a bitunderwhelming. I mean almost dying isn't very fun but there was such a build-up without an appropriate end.
loved the history parts of the story though.

[Eleonora · Rating 5 out of 5]

Azione

[Kathryn · Rating 3 out of 5]

I felt a distance from this one. Lol.

Writing was somewhat dry, and the dialogue in the final chapters was so repetitive. I never had any feels. Give me feels.

[storybooksara · Rating 4 out of 5]

3.75 stars. Good plot, but the murder mystery illness dragged too long

[Kristin · Rating 2 out of 5]

DnF at chapter 26. Just personally couldnt get into the mystery.

[Danica]

I wish I dnf’ed

[Cassandra Masters · Rating 4 out of 5]

Very good. Long slightly boring in places but such a good story

[Mansi · Rating 2 out of 5]

Interesting world building but not so interesting character writing. I didn't feel drawn in the way I wanted to. The Indian connection made me stick longer than I wanted to..

[Trina · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5 ⭐️
This was well written and the plot was so greatly thought out. You can tell some research was done for the writing of this. Unfortunately, I've realised that adventurous fics aren't my cup of tea.