While I did enjoy the read, I felt the women's fiction story could have been so much better if better written. The author has done plenty of research into emotional issues reflected in the book, but none into photography. Unfortunately her writing style has 'it-itis' - six its in the first page of the prologue, it frequently beginning paragraphs or sentences. And where one it is used, more appear. Plenty of theres as well.
"It had been several weeks since the accident, but it still all felt so raw. May had arrived along with the first swifts, the apple tree had burst into blossom and the woods had turned hazy with bluebells. Luke cursed it all because Helen wasn’t there to see it."
Victoria Connelly. TheBeautyOfBrokenThings (Kindle Locations 259-261). Kindle Edition.
"There was also a tiny chest of drawers in there. It was the only place Helen could have put the vase, Luke thought. Sure enough, as he entered the room, he saw it. He walked towards it, picking it up carefully"
Victoria Connelly. TheBeautyOfBrokenThings (Kindle Locations 322-323). Kindle Edition.
The author could do herself a favour, in my opinion, by getting an editor who will help her to improve her writing. Or just doing a search in Word for it and there, and removing almost all instances. Find a noun to do the heavy lifting. It, and there was, are lazy and weak.
A widowed man - we first get to meet his pleasant and creative wife, so we share his loss - puts aside his building work and goes off to find a seaside castle house where he believes a reclusive photographer lives. This lady was the online friend of his late wife. The English class system has left marks so when the new owner of the castle doesn't want company, the gardener just gets on with work for years without seeing her. The scene does feel stretched, but maybe the Suffolk coast works this way.
I thought the builder sitting outside in his van for so long wasn't realistic - he would have said his mission from outside the door, not expected to be invited into the house. And why would the recluse not have called the police? Otherwise the tale moves on smoothly with both broken individuals finding some relaxation from company and an easing of internal tensions.
Some nice scenes are included, and we get a deep understanding of social anxiety, agoraphobia and what has caused them. I like the inclusion of gardening as relaxation and therapy.
Photographers talk and think about their camera makes and what lenses they use, the aperture, f-stop, exposure time and ISO. They don't just point and take. Well, sometimes they do, but they've picked up the right equipment in the first place. They use light meters and light baffles or reflectors. They talk about the air being clean, hazy or dusty, depth of field, and neutral density filters. They crop for different versions. They run a shot through Lightroom before sending it to the Web. Not in this story, they don't. This photographer is just arty. And self-obsessed.
I was sent an ARC by Fresh Fiction. This is an unbiased review.