I was disappointed to see that the actual "surviving" portion of the book was basically one big adrenaline/cortisol jolt after another, with more and more ridiculous twists and turns. I thought nowadays we were trying to be kind to our bodies by not *intentionally* triggering flight-or-fight state?? No? I dunno, this intentional cortisol-spiking doesn't feel like a healthy thing to encourage our elementary-aged kids to do to themselves.
By way of comparison, the I Survived 9/11 book from eight years earlier (2012) has much fewer high adrenaline moments because the MC is witnessing the attacks, partially firsthand and partially on TV, but *mostly* not needing to *survive* them (minus one scene near the end where he's exposed to substances that are definitely cancer-causing — makes the "I Survived" title a lot more dubious). The kids in the California Wildfires book are definitely in imminent danger of death, to a level that feels very unnecessary, especially for a child audience. If the MC in the 9/11 book were escaping from inside one of the Towers, that would be more akin to the kids in the California book.
After the unnecessary wildlife (non!)encounter, suspension of disbelief was kind of not working by the time he burns his arm/fingers...nevermind the ancient zipline miraculously still working and not sending them flying into the burning bushes; one Heimlich in the middle of the river magically resuscitating her completely; and him being able to swim/walk them both out of a strong river, despite him not being a trained lifeguard-type swimmer.
I get that this is a kids' book, but the idea that the very-nearby house magically survives, totally unscathed — not even smoke damaged, because it's obviously still habitable in the flash-forward 3 weeks later — feels extremely unrealistic. Just how far did an 11-year-old kid run in 5-10 minutes' time, that there was still space for the (apparently very fast) fire to "turn away" from the house, thanks to a "last-minute" change in the Santa Ana winds after 5 min?? The fire existing there at all is one big "last minute"! Yes, it is POSSIBLE, but it is highly IMPROBABLE, especially without a proper fire break, and especially without resulting smoke/utilities damage to the home! What, is the house built out of plot-armorinium??
There are ways to write this where the house survives, realistically, and the kids are still needing to "survive" (as per the title) without giving them insane levels of physical injury and psychological trauma, just for the "drama" of it. This just isn't it.