this was a pleasant enough read - a few too many weird characters, but, hey, I'm on holiday and I can suspend disbelief sometimes, and then I read this:
Sliding his fingers to frame her jaw, Jared deepened the contact, asking for the next step, the gentleness before the lust, permission before the taking. (with me so far? he is NOT forcing himself on her, and it's pretty clear that if she pulls away he will take it as a 'no' and then this happens....) She returned his kiss with more than interest, with a hungry need that shook him and pushed him faster than he'd anticipated. When she parted her lips on an exhalation of pleasure, he rejoiced and took possession of her mouth.
Cleo bit his tongue. Hard.
WTF HAPPENED?? I mean - wtf???? SHE WANTED HIM
WHAT an utter B!£&H. She led him on and then she bites his tongue?? And please don't give me that crap about her being psychologically damaged, blah, blah, blah it doesn't wash. She gave him permission. She could have pulled away but oh no -- She fecking well bites his tongue.
God give me strength. I have had enough of stupid, idiotic abusive women who seem to think its okay to treat a man like shit, but will running crying for the police as soon as a man even looks sideways at her.
This demeans women.
DNF at 27%
What a load of ...................