I can't give more than 2.5 stars. The last half of a star is just because she's Nalini.
You see, if you're a long-term Nalini Singh fan - like a lot of us here - you'd understand that she could do it. She could deliver a book that is fresh and original and new. Even though we already know the plot and the happy ending it has, we still enjoy how Nalini gets there.
But this whole Trinity thing has been weak.
First, I feel like Nalini should apologize - and I don't even know to whom should she apologize first, but I guess it's gotta be Russia, first and foremost. Why?
Plenty of reasons. First, the landscape. None of Russia's landmarks or popular places made it into the novel. Second, Nalini's bastardized Russian was grating on the last of my Slavic nerve. So, maybe a person named Selenka could be called Selya in Russia. But I doubt it. Why did Selya grate on my Slavic nerves? Because we have a word "selyak" that is a derogatory term that means villager (sort of like the American term "redneck"). It's a derogatory term for someone who is uneducated, relies on brawn, and generally has zero common sense, most of the time being an asshole to other people and generally a bad person with no "culture." And yes, Selya could be the female version of selyak. And if you don't believe me, check it on google translate. Selya translates as "mudflow" when written in latin script, and "village" when written in Cyrillic.
If Nalini were to read my real name, she'd probably give me the most ridiculous nickname. Also, just because you added a k to Selena, it doesn't change the fact that your heroine was supposedly Russian but she had a ridiculous name that not only wasn't Russian, it was barely - barely - English too (apologies to any people named Selenka out there). The only Russian thing that she nailed was babushka and dedushka, and that was it. All the nicknames for the other people felt wrong, and not just in how they were spelled. Some of them didn't even make sense.
And I just can't get over this, because I trusted Nalini with my international cultural integration and I thought that she was doing a good job, but now I doubt it. If anyone asked me about an author that writes truly internationally, I would have said Nalini. However, the problems in Silver Silence with the Russian names and the Russian packs and the lack of Russian landscape were still present here, and for the life of me, I cannot decide why Nalini has decided to set two of her novels there, where she obviously only visited as a tourist and was probably not impressed much, because none of the landscape or the people or the culture made it into the novel. And while I'm all - ALL - for de-USA-ing novels and literature, I'm all for books set in Europe, Asia, and anywhere else in the world that is not the US (since we've had too much of America already, especially these days), but I wish Nalini had either given them international names without the stupid nicknaming, or done her research properly, not just talked with a few Russian people and then decided to go her own way anyway, as to how it sounded in her head. So, Selenka became selya - a brash villager with no decorum.
Additionally, she gave some characters Russian names, while others had international ones. And then she named Selenka's father Kiev.
As if Kiev belongs to Russia? As if Kiev is a Russian name and not the name of the capital of Ukraine? (Admittedly, sometimes it's spelled Kyiv, so maybe that got Nalini confused?)
Now, I'm the LAST person to care about being PC or whatever. As a writer, I feel like these days, you gotta be inclusive, you gotta be PC, and you gotta have two foreign characters, three African Americans, a redhead, a blonde, a gay, a trans-person, a lesbian, and a nonbinary one too, just so your novel doesn't get attacked by all the different groups who will feel not represented in your novel (as if each and every group should be in there by default). It's IMPOSSIBLE to please everyone. However. And, I'm not Ukranian. But I don't have to be to understand that there's still an underlying conflict between the two nations. And now, Nalini gave the name of their capital...to a Russian character. It grates on the nerves. Also, the most common Russian name in every bit of western literature is Yuri. Kiev is just as uncreative and boring as Yuri, and it seems like Nalini was at a loss as to how to name Selenka's father (because she already has a Yuri), so she went with the first thing that sounded vaguely Russian in her mind, Kiev.
Next, let's talk about the writing. More excerpts from Wild Woman that grated on the last of my feminist nerves. Look, when you say that a (changeling) woman will gut you with her claws if you piss her off, you insult the whole female kind, but you also insulted your main character too, who was supposed to deal with excessive anger issues (spoiler alert, unlike Zaira, Selenka never gets to do this).
At one point, barely fifteen pages into the book, Selenka calls Ethan "the Arrow who was hers."
Said the Arrow who was hers. Not, for example, her arrow. It's not purple enough.
In the business of writing, this is what we call padding to get to a certain word count. And usually, writers are supposed to cut away all of these things, so that the resulting book doesn't become a doorstop. If you had to pad your prose to ensure that you have a certain amount of words, it just means that your story maybe needs to be reworked or rewritten. Not padded.
And there was a lot of padding. And I can't handle Nalini's lilac prose (lilac because it's not that purple), especially when sentences like the one above tell me that Nalini's way too much in love with her own words (never a good sign. A writer who is constantly focused on improvement can barely handle reading their own sentences, because they constantly want to fix them and make them better. Nalini posts pictures of herself reading her old novels in the P-C series for "research." She even put the quotes around it. As in research, but actually, for enjoyment).
Nalini should also apologize to poets. This is a supposed poem called "Alpha" from an Anonymous person in the PC universe:
An alpha's word is law
An alpha's heart is pack
An alpha's tears are unseen
Alpha mine, my life is yours
AND HOW CHEESY IS THAT? Was it written by Ben from the SnowDancers?
Look, Nalini should apologize to the Mercants too. Here's a poem by Adina Mercant, called "Love Song."
A sharp blade
Thrust deep
Bloody droplets in the snow
I am not even going to comment. I am not, although I'm DYING to do so.
Listen, Nalini may write lilac prose, but she ain't no poet. She's way too in love with her own words to be one.
But you know what? None of it would have mattered if it had been backed up - or describing - a good story. A good overall story. But Nalini failed at that; hard.
And you know what the problem is?
Nalini fixed the worldwide problem - the conflict between the Psy, Humans, Changelings, and Forgotten (although it seems Nalini totally forgot about them, more on that later) - is over. Now they're working together. Selenka is among the last of the world leaders that we've met that hasn't had a story.
And she still doesn't. Selenka wasn't even important enough in Ethan's journey. And now this is gonna be full of spoilers.
Back in Visions of Heat, when Faith was struggling with the dark visions and was awash in dark psychic energy, her bond with Vaughn helped her handle it, helped her send it through the bond to him, where his changeling nature dealt with it. I could accept that. It's a good precedent.
But it wasn't used as THE THING THAT HELPS ETHAN. No, it was - SASCHA AGAIN - who helped.
If you didn't understand how and why Selenka and Ethan mate in the first two chapters of the novel, here's the non-lilac-purple-prose version: Ethan was going to kill himself. Not in the sense that he was going to literally kill himself, but he was about to throw his mind away and give in to what he believed to be Scarab (because Sudden Power Overflow Syndrome probably did not feel cheesy enough). Selenka's wolf, who recognized Ethan as mate (which, you know, was kinda lovely, because the only other person we saw that with was Riaz, and his story with Adria was made better for it). Anyway, when Selenka's wolf sensed this in Ethan, it pounced on him to keep him alive and sane because mate - and they ended up with a murky bond, in a similar way that Judd was blocking the mating bond with Brenna way back when the novels were great.
And that's all well and good. The path, now, was supposed to be about these two becoming mates in truth, however, the problem was - there was no problem.
None of Selenka's wolves were wary of this dark, dark Psy among them. In fact, changelings are so fucking open minded and flawless that they accept Ethan immediately. Changelings are the fucking Mary Sue of Nalini's world, especially the changeling packs that we're visiting in the novel. However, while that worked when the world was shit and full of psychopath Psy who were running the world (the Psy Council), now it just grates on the nerves because everyone is good. Human Alliance? Run by good people. The packs in Russia? Run by good people. Trinity? Run by good people.
And I'm supposed to believe that the Architect - who is slowly becoming more funny as a villain rather than scary - is going to be important. As if. If Scarab patients die or go mad, then the Architect barely has any time to put any of her schemes in order before it happens to her too. Giving your villain a supposedly deadly ailment with a death timeframe is not a good idea, especially when said villain has world domination plans. And we finally learn - that the Architect is female. Let the speculation begin! Oh wait, most of the psychos are dead, Nikita is in a secret relationship with Anthony, so of course, she's not the one, Tatiana is fading away in Kaleb's old bunker, which leaves only Ming and Shoshanna as possible culprits, and now, maybe Ming is having a midlife crisis combined with some gender dysphoria, but the bets now fall on Shoshanna.
Booooring.
So, in Shards of Hope, Zaira had to deal with anger-induced madness, and by the end of the novel, Zaira manages to do this spectacularly well. Selenka never had to deal with hers, at least, never outwardly. Sure, she had some pack problems, but she was never pushed into maddening rage.
And Ethan. Oh, Ethan, if you were only presented a little differently. Just like Silver's brother was obviously an empath, it was obvious that Ethan was one too.
I'm sick and tired of the empath story. I'm sick and tired of seeing Sascha in every damn novel. The whole plot was ridiculous:
Ethan: I'm a deadly light-bender. Really deadly. Oh, a puppy. I'll give him some food. Also, I am going to go mad, I have Scarab.
Sascha and Memory: Listen, you don't have Scarab.
Ethan: No, I do! I do! If I let down my shields, you will see.
Sascha and Memory: Okay, let them down then.
Ethan: What, do you mean, like right now? We need to get close to the ending of the book first.
Spoiler alert: they do get to the ending of the book before it's "revealed" that Ethan is just another E. What actually pissed me off was that we don't even learn what kind of abilities he actually has. Sure, he has something similar to Memory on the PsyNet, but we never actually see him use his "active field" empathy power, only his passive one - wherein he knows when people are in a relationship or related.
I can do that too, does that mean I'm also an empath? Am I also related to Ethan and Memory (as if their familial relationship came as a surprise later on!)
Meanwhile, Selenka really had no role in Ethan's development. That guy needed therapy first, and anything else second. Similarly to Memory, Ethan has already shrugged off everything and just wants to die as a result of his trauma and inability to feel anything. Literally. Reading his passages was like being submerged in tepid water - not even icy water - because I literally felt nothing. He touched Selenka and I felt nothing. Nalini made the same mistake as she did with Memory: failed to consult a proper psychologist or a therapist for the issues that Ethan was having. Of course, Nalini reiterates in this book that Memory survived due to being an empath and wanting to spite the guy who imprisoned her. Slapping all the people who suffer from PTSD and other issues in the face: you're not psychic, hahaha, nanana. And you don't want to spite the people who hurt you, that's why you're not sane. IT'S INSANE. HOW DID THIS GET PAST AN EDITOR? Oh, that's right, because Nalini is an established sale, so she can do whatever she wants now.
Ethan is just plain old suicidal, and the Arrows have failed to see this? Good job being an Alpha Aden.
And now, let's talk about the overall plot. There's someone in Selenka's pack that has betrayed her. Of course it's the father that feels sidelined for not being an Alpha. Of course it was. Was this supposed to be a twist or a shock? It was telegraphed the first time Kiev appeared in the novel.
Case closed, page ten.
Second. The PsyNet is breaking apart. No one talked to Sophia because they're stupid. Is there an effect on the PsyNet from Ethan mating with an alpha changeling? Who knows, who gives a shit, was this supposed to be important?
More importantly, no one talked to Dev Santos and the Forgotten. Kaleb didn't even think to ask Dev if, maybe, can we please, can we join your net so we don't die? It'll also bring the Silence story full circle? Yes, no, what're you saying?
Also, no one thought to ask Dev how they created their net, because maybe, maybe, we've seen other nets before (the SnowDancer web), the DarkRiver/SnowDancer cluster of webs, and we've seen Katya Haas actually living in the ShadowNet.
Aden and Kaleb breaking the net in pieces is the LAST THING they could have thought of, yet they did it first thing. And no, spoiler alert, they didn't talk to Dev.
And that's the problem. Nalini created this world, and it's a fun world, an exciting world. You can play in that world. Not every book needs to push the overall plot forward. Take Max and Sophia's book - they were dealing with a human serial killer and I loved it. But when you do write a novel that is supposed to deal with the worldwide problems, you gotta use all the assets you've created. Otherwise, you have holes in your story. And Trinity is a big hole.
Nalini should end Trinity, age Naya, Kit, Jules, and Roman, Ben, Marlee, and the other children, and start on Psy-Changeling the New Age. It would probably go down better than this.