This almost became a DNF by the end of part 1...I am glad I finished it for two reasons. First, it got much better in parts 2 and 3. Second, it gave me more fodder for the coming rant (see #5 below).
Reasons I love Patterson books:
1. Well edited
2. Likable main characters
3. Interesting, well thought out plot lines
4. Short chapters and quick to read
Unfortunately, this book had little of the above.
So...reasons this book should not be a Patterson book...
1) NARRATION - 2 stars
Shifting first person point of view between four characters was confusing, especially in part 1. I had to keep going back to see who "I" was in many of the chapters. I like the Women's Murder Club because Boxer gets to be the "I" and the others are told in 3rd person. It is interesting and easy to follow. All the switching in this one just didn't work for me. The book would have had more flow in third person or done like Women's Murder Club.
2) PLOT LINE - 2.5 stars
Convuluted plot line that jumps back and forth between present and past in Part 1...I had to keep going back, not only to see who was speaking at the moment, but also to see what the setting was. The timeline was hard to follow and to swallow. I have to admit it got much better in parts 2 and 3.
3) CHARACTERS - 2 stars
Characters were not likable. I think the goal was to keep us guessing who was good and who was bad. But pretty much everyone came across as "bad" except maybe Aunt Lindsay and Doris. They are the heros of this book, IMHO. Even Det. Haagen came across as unlikable and mean. By the time we find out who did what and why, it helped redeem some characters, but I found I just didn't care that much, and at that point, just wanted to finish the book to see how they ended it (I will give the ending 4 stars).
4) BIG EDITING MISTAKE - ratings for me always drop a star (or more) when editing is poor.
Homeless man found "knifed to death" (p. 107) then...cause of death? "...someone beat him real bad. Then...they dropped a cinder block on his head." (p. 109) WHAT??? That should have been caught during editing...pretty obvious miss.
5) LACK OF RESEARCH - THIS MAKES ME CRAZY!!!!
And, the biggest problem...(which unfortunately happens all the time in books and movies, but this one had to be the "winner" for being wrong and stupid)...If you are going to make one of the main characters have diabetes, GET THE DISEASE RIGHT!!!! I have two close friends who are type 1, a friend whose son is type 1, a former student who is type 1, and several friends who are type 2. I still googled some info to be sure I was not wrong...it took about 5 minutes. Writers...This is a common disease...DO YOUR RESEARCH!
(here goes rant...and a few spoilers)
p. 14 - Sarah wakes up after being asleep/unconscious for at least 8 hours and the first thing she says is that she needs insulin, but then promptly forgets about it (due to the murdered man). After all of those hours, a diabetic would likely need FOOD over insulin as blood sugar would have dropped over that many hours.
p. 56 - Sarah goes to her Aunt Lindsay (a nurse who should know better), still not having eaten...more time has gone by...and the first thing she wants is insulin. Her aunt has an emergency kit and gives Sarah 15 units. WRONG! The first thing is to take her blood to see what correction she needs (probably none considering how long it has been since she has eaten), then to add whatever carb ratio her food (YES she would need some food) would add. The only time my husband has taken 15 units was with dinner and a large Dunford donut shake from Arctic Circle. THEN, they proceed to clean her wound and waste time before finally getting some stew (which would NOT warrant 15 units).
p. 66 After Aunt Lindsay gets a visit from Sarah's abusive cop husband, they notice the insulin kit is gone, and they know he took it. Sarah now has NO insulin. (keep this in mind for future reference)
p. 93 Sarah then goes on the run after stopping for a latte and two pieces of lemon pound cake. She likely would have needed some insulin with her food, but alas she doesn't have any...she probably should have taken her blood then too.
p. 97 Sarah then proceeds to drive 18 hours, only stopping for gas and to clean her wound...never mentioning eating anything, and the diabetes problem seems to have disappeared.
p. 162 Sarah spends a few days in jail. I can only hope she got some insulin while here because of what happens in a few pages. Of course, it isn't mentioned at all...remember when it disappeared from the book 70 pages ago?
p. 170 Sarah visits a friend for a couple of days. They drink and eat and party...no mention of the mysterious disease that has disappeared.
p. 218 Before we get to this page, Sarah has driven for hours, run through a forest, crawled through a tunnel, rescued two people, shot a man, and driven some more (exercise and stress/adrenelin will lower blood sugar). When the women arrive at their destination, their car is searched and the insulin kit is found (hopefully from when she was in jail because otherwise where did it come from?). She decides this is a great time to prove she is a diabetic by taking a dose of...another 15 units of insulin!!!
"I'm due a dose. It's been a busy day. I forgot to inject myself, and I'm starting to feel a little woozy."
Okay...seriously...That likely would have dropped her sugar levels so low, she would have ended up in a diabetic coma. The student I taught a few years ago hit a low of 48 once. She was definitely woozy. Guess what? She needed 2 juice boxes, a granola bar, and some fruit snacks...NOT a dose of insulin.
Frankly, James Patterson should know better.
One last note, the bookshot Come and Get Us at the back of the book was much better than the full novel. I should have just read that one. (Reviewed separately)