2,50 Not quite a telenevola stars
Sigh. I think it's official, I'm in no condition to really appreciate anything I am reading right now.. Especially after Ruick and Melanthe. Maybe I shouldn't write reviews in this state, but here I am.
I got a free copy of this book via Instafreebie and it's not influencing my rating.
The premises were too good to resist: a family feud, a couple from opposite sides, cowboy, horses. Who could resist, right? Well, apparently...me. I'm not angry at the story, I wanted something fluffy. With its high count of tropes, non-sensical reactions, perfect smutty and tender moments, it turned out to be both cute and OTT, telenovela style at moments. Mind you, I grew up with South-American telenovelas, I know drama, I LUUUUUURVE drama, but it has to convince me, you need to sweep me away. Destined for love coasted mild, unoriginal waters despite including so many explosive elements. Even if this can read as a standalone, there was the info-dumping effect anyway, what with all the Braden siblings and other couples coming from previous books. Quite some recaps on everyone.
Too much was explained, told, and in a way that was distracting from real feelings rather than unducing them. At the beginning there was too much eye-fucking and immediate, unreal extreme body reactions between the leads Rex and Jade. Their dialogues and reactions to each others often reminded me of teen-agers rather than people in their thirties. It was odd. If you're using the card that they had been secretly in love with each others since school but avoided each others due to their families' problems, you have to play it right. I want to see meaningful, poignant flashbacks from that period to illustrate their secret attraction, make it palpable after all these years yet, let the reader truly experience it with them, with the guilt and shame that came with it. The turn towards fated lovers was, in this lacking context, much less believable and even forced, especially with the added almost supernatural element The sexual pull between them, their need for closeness, was believably rendered, the falling in love felt kinda rushed even if inevitable. Rex was quite an ass at the beginning, some of his thoughts about men and women were so alpha at times they seemed out of place with the character, then he would say and do just the mooooooost romantic stuff. It did worry me to read that he initially thought he could never love outside of his family, it certainly didn't make him appear love-worthy, but you know, long-hidden fated love and all conquers every doubt. Not a perfect balance. Jade was also a mixed bag and in the end, much less verbally open about her feelings than Rex. I didn't like the author dropping the element of her stalkerish ex without really working it meaninfully in the story, why mention it at all, just to explain why she came back to Weston? Not necessary. What I most loved about them, apart from how they wanted each others, was their caring and deep-seated love for animals, horses in particular. No scene with them bored me. Good thing, considering one of the main characters is a horse, with a human soul.
The sex scenes were good enough,sometimes the prose was killing it instead of selling it, passionate without monster cocks and dedicated, unabashed lovers, but nothing out of the ordinary. I liked Jade being more sexually forward than Rex. The family feud and the conflicts in loyalties were the main obstacle thoughout the book, one with a ripple effect in many other areas between the families of lost friends. I felt like it was handled well, weighed too much, dragged a bit too long at the same time. At times both leads seemed too psychologically dependants on their fathers. Like I said before, the drama elements were all there, starting from the loss of Rex's mother during his childhood, but the execution was not deep enough, the writing didn't support it. I am sure the connection with the dead mother would equally bring some to tears and others to disbelieving laughter.
I couldn't suspend my desbelief all the time, no matter how good-looking the cowboys were and how much the story wanted me to believe in fate. For anyone into enemy-to lovers, Romeo and Juliet scenarios, this could work pretty well.