p.44 "...creative listening...can attain a measure of understanding of what a composer is saying about the world." I think this is nonsense. Composers write music; they do not (necessarily) "say things" about the world. To expect them to is to brutally narrow the scope of what music is.
p.45 "The ‘randomness’ idea is a familiar weapon of the bourgeois ideologists to divert the consciousness of the masses from the real laws (laws and randomness are counterposed) underlying the development of the world and human society." The author sadly displays an intense lack of scientific understanding of the world and the role of randomness in it. I wonder if Cardew ever studied probability, or statistics, or chaos.
p.46 "The articles above and the talk on Stockhausen that follows depict this servile role quite starkly and show it as an objective fact, whatever protestations the composers themselves may make to the contrary." What an odd thing to say. Any author that claims that their opinions are "objective" facts should not to be taken seriously.
p.60 "Fourthly: what is the material of a composition? It’s not just notes and rests, and it’s not just a beautiful idea that originates in the unique mind of a genius. It’s ideas derived from experience, from social relations, and what the composer does is to transform these ideas into configurations of sound that evoke a corresponding response in the listener." This shows the authors extremely narrow view of what music composition is.
p.64 "As Mao Tsetung says, ‘There is no such thing as art that is detached from or independent of politics.’ " I hear this a lot, but I think it is either bullshit (there is a lot of art that is independent of politics), circular (anything that is independent of politics is not art, so...), or trivial (*everything* humans do is connected to politics, just as no art is independent of breathing).
p.84 "Let’s start with the idea very widespread in the avant garde and implicit in the score of Treatise that anything can be transformed into anything else. Now everybody knows (not only Marxists and farmers) that a stone, no matter how much heat you apply to it, will never hatch into a chicken. And that even an egg won’t hatch into a chicken without the right external conditions. And yet in Cage’s work Atlas Eclipticalis patterns of stars in a star atlas are transformed into a jumble of electronic squeals and groans. This transformation is carried out through a system of notation (a logic) that has no connection with astronomy and only a very sketchy connection with music." Again, the author displays a sadly narrow conception of what composition can encompass: Cage *did* transform a pattern of stars into a composition. Cardew sounds like a prig. (As far as transforming anything into anything else, I would, if I could, suggest he read about the Banach-Tarki paradox, just for fun.)
p.85 "Change is absolute, there is nothing that does not change." The ratio of a circle's circumference to its diameter does not change, and there will always be exactly 5 algebraic groups of order 8. He is speaking about thing too narrowly, again.
This all makes me sad. Cardew sounds like a person who was genuinely interested in social revolution, and this kind of all-too-common nitpicking, holier-than-thou, you're-counter-revolutionary-no-you're-counter-revolutionary stuff is part of the huge pile of things that make revolution less likely, it seems to me.