4 / 5 Stars
This book holds a special place in my heart as it is written by my favorite wattpad author, Knightsrachel, whose real name is Rachel Meinke. I enjoyed reading this published version and seeing how much I remember from when I read it on Wattpad, years ago. Even though I couldn't remember it much, I still loved this book and could not put it down. I finished it within 24 hours, only stopping to sleep and do school.
This book took place over Connor Jackson, the main character’s older brother, and his tour with the opening bands, Skyline which the main character is obsessed with, and another person. The story also incorporates the main character, Katelyn’s, passion for soccer. In the beginning, there was soccer through here and there, and about halfway through, the main focus turned to soccer and her experience with the world tour.
I enjoyed this, but at the same time, almost felt like I was reading a different book halfway through. When the Connor Jackson Live Tour was happening, there wasn't much action about performing and concerts. I thought Rachel did a great job of sharing what the tour is like without feeling like it was overwhelming. However, I did not feel this way about soccer. I felt like there was too much. This could be because I don't understand technical terms, but I did not enjoy the soccer action. I did love reading about the awards she won and the bonding she did with the other teammates.
I also enjoyed how each chapter followed a new location, whether it was for the Conner Jackson Live Tour, or the World Soccer Tour, and the location was placed almost as a chapter title. I also loved how I wanted to keep a memento from each stop of the tour. These things ranged from tacky tourist items - her description - to special moments from hanging out with her family, friends, and the band.
This brought up a lot of cute moments with Katelyn and her love interest, the lead singer of Skyline. First, when she shows him her keepsakes she mentioned how she didn't get one from Portland because she was too caught up on her morning run. The lead singer, Zach, wasted no time stepping outside and picking up a rock from their current location and wrote “Portland” on it, and joked that he remembered getting it when they were there.
Also when Katelyn was off doing her World Soccer Tour, she missed the midwest part of the tour. Zach took it upon himself to pick up items from each of the stops, so she could fulfill her collection. I loved how much he cared about her and wanted her to have pieces of the tour, even if she missed it.
Another cute moment between them is the fact that he wrote a song about her! And of course, it was the cliche moment where she was oblivious to the fact that the song was about her. He even gave her a necklace for good luck on her soccer world tour as he wasn't able to come with her. Another major swoon moment! And they weren't even dating at this point! He told her about the song in a very cute moment that ended with them kissing for the first time! A major swoon-worthy moment.
Once their relationship progressed, they had a lot of time kissing. It did feel like it happened a lot, but it was also adorable reading about their lazy dates of lounging around eating takeout and binge-watching television. My favorite kind of date.
One of my favorite things about reading Rachel’s books, or knightsrachel as I always will think of her, is that she includes serious physical or mental health issues. This book tackled epilepsy and even included an epileptic seizure. I thought this was written well and didn't feel too much like teaching the readers about it. It fits in well with the story.
As mentioned before, despite this book being about tours and performing, there was a lot of mention of the locations and bonding with the band, friends, and family. I wish these moments were expanded but thought they were good. I just loved these moments and wished I could have kept reading all the cute moments with the love interest. I was living through her on the trips to London and France, and all around the US.
The book ended in the most perfect way. Talked about all the members of the opening bands separately and how much they meant to Katelyn. Especially Zach Matthews, the lead singer of Skyline, and her boyfriend. It even ended with the band announcing they have signed to a record label and will be moving to LA! Meaning Katelyn and Jackson are not just a summer fling, but can be a real relationship. And of course, my absolute favorite way to end a book, by factoring in the book title.
However, there are a few more things I wish had been added or mentioned more.
First, halfway through there was a mention of a Gossip Channel called Drama Llama. I thought this was adorable and loved it. But I wish it was mentioned earlier on as it seemed like a big deal to Katelyn and even wanted to use it to announce her relationship with Zach to the world.
Second, there was constant talk about the big secret conversation that caused Connor, her older brother, to sign an NDA with his ex-girlfriend and cease all contact. Even to the point where the girlfriend was going to do a live stream about their relationship. It caused a lot of stress for Connor and the family. However, the secret was shared with his sister in a nice personal moment. I just felt like the big reveal didn't lead up to the suspense. Though I understand wanting only to tell the family about something as personal as sexuality.
Thirdly, when Katelyn was going around talking about how much everybody meant to her, one of the reviews didn't seem as accurate to the story. I loved how she ended up feeling like Mackenzie, the other opener, was a close friend to her. But I didn't see much of that in the story. I wish this could have been shared more.
Overall, I absolutely loved this book and am so proud of Rachel for having her debut novel, I just wish things were expanded on and shared more than told. This is why my rating for this book is 4/5 stars.