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Unchained Hearts

Captive Witch

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A Dark Paranormal Romance

A captive heart is the worst kind of prison…

DELLA

I fell for Victor Montalban the night I was hired to kill him. When I let him go, he walked away with my reputation, my family’s trust, and my heart. Now he’s here in front of me once more, his eyes angry and mistrustful. What he doesn’t know is that he’s in danger, and this time I’m here to save his life. I have to make him believe me… just for tonight—that will be long enough to ensure that he lives. I thought I would die when I let him go before, and now all I want is to see him walk away again.

VICTOR

The light went out of my life the night Della Thoreaux decided to let me live. She’s a deadly assassin in addition to being a powerful witch, and yet, somehow I survived. She left me with a scar on my neck, a target on my back, and a chain around my heart. She fooled me once and it nearly cost me everything. Now she’s back, trying to convince me she’s the only one I can trust. Do I listen to my heart and put my life in the hands of the woman who tried to kill me?

Scroll up and one-click this steamy standalone novella and let the Paranormal underworld take you captive.

68 pages, Kindle Edition

Published February 10, 2020

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Fiona Starr

40 books1,297 followers
Fiona Starr is a USA Today Bestselling Author of Paranormal Romance. She writes everything from Reverse Harem to M/F, as long as it has magic, shifters, and other creatures! She loves fated mates and enemies to lovers romance, even better when it's set in a gripping mystery. Actually, most tropes are fair game, as long as we get to the HEA (which we always do!). She lives her happily ever after in the mountains of Colorado with her hunky husband and their fleet of fur babies.

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Profile Image for Nikki Landis.
Author 139 books2,107 followers
March 2, 2020
Victor and Della have great chemistry. It's been 6 months of denial until they're thrust back into each other's lives and faced with danger. Quick read!
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7,177 reviews71 followers
February 14, 2020
ONE ACTION PACKED ADVENTURE!!!
Explosive! Fiona launches one explosive spin, tapping all the emotions running rampant, throwing this bad boy into a tizzy with one life altering, mind-blowing culmination. Twixt and twined and put through the paces with a bevy of inexplicable events and unintentional circumstances, blasting this bad boy to life brilliantly. One non-stop, action packed, hard hitting, pulse racing, heart pounding, nailbiting, page flipping bombshell, fusing this baby together piece by piece. Add drama, intrigue, turmoil, unnerving and mounting suspense along with a boatload of danger while dodging dark menacing threats, makes for one block busting adventure. Highlighting impressive scenario's, that punch dead center, ramping up the zeal and delight with such intensity and precision, tempting our characters in ways they never saw coming. The attraction and chemistry sizzles from the pages alluring and mesmerizing, until you feel the electrifying hum, running through your veins. with depth and qualities that make it easy to relate. The scenes and personalities are well balanced and blended as they flow smoothly, playing off one another perfectly. Remarkable job Fiona, thanks for sharing this bad boy with us.
1,190 reviews9 followers
February 7, 2020
Della is still dealing with the fall out from her failed attempt to kill Victor Montalban. When she meant him, she had feelings for right off, they ended up spending time together. She left him and has not seen in months. Della has heard that there is another threat against his life again. Della will go to Victor to safe his life.
The meeting doesn't go as she hoped it would. The words and his action has proved to her that whatever they shared is over. Della doesn't care if he cares for her or not. As she realizes that she still has feeling for him. She will not let any hurt him.
Della will do whatever she can to save his life, but at what cost. There is something things Della was not expecting to uncover. When it is all said and done will Della and Victor come together or will their pride have them go separate ways

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158 reviews6 followers
February 22, 2020
A good little story about Della, the High Priestess of her coven, and Victor her soulmate and a target of an assassination contract. This coven is very different from the the usual witch coven. They are escorts and high paid assassins with their services for sale. Della almost killed Victor six months ago because of a contract but at the last minute realized what she was feeling was a soulmate connection. They had hours together until words separated them possibly forever. When Della gets word of another assassination attempt she rushes to his side to warn and protect him.

These two need will face danger and need to figure many things out before they can open their hearts and find the way to their HEA.

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Profile Image for Caroline Doig.
5,457 reviews49 followers
February 12, 2020
I love this whole Unchained Hearts series and this is another fantastic addition to this series. Della is a witch and a assassin she was contracted to kill Victor Montalban who’s very much involved in organised crime but she couldn’t do it now he’s the mayor and going to be the next governor. There is another hit on him one Della has to stop but he hates her because the night she left Della left a scar on his throat and a scar in his heart. I loved this story it’s a fantastic read and I highly recommend this book it’s definitely well worth the read.
I bought a copy of this book because like I said I love this series.
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20.8k reviews360 followers
February 14, 2020
Della Thoreaux, a deadly assassin and powerful witch, fell for Victor Montalban the night she was hired to kill him but instead let him go. Now he is in danger again, and she has to convince him she is on his side and trying to save his life. But he no longer trusts her and has a scar to remind him. Will he give her a second chance to prove herself to him? Or will he let his mistrust turn him away from the woman who still loves him?

Secrets, danger, betrayal, and passion, this heart pounding story has it all and then some. The paranormal players also drew me in and made it more exciting. Grab your copy and see if Victor and Della can find a HEA for themselves.
29 reviews
February 8, 2020
As I read the novella and discovered that the H was a Mafia boss and h was a leader of an escort agency I wasn't sure if I would enjoy this, as I prefer more traditionally 'good guys'. However, both characters had many positive features and I was pleased to find they got their HEA, although I'm not converted to bad guys. The background was sufficiently filled in by memories of the characters to allow for a more complete and entertaining story than the page length might otherwise allow.

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Profile Image for Sassy Angel.
2,900 reviews
February 14, 2020
I love this series and I really enjoyed this story by Fiona Starr. I couldn’t put it down. I was swept into the action from the first page.

Della is High Priestess of her coven and they have a special skill. That all changed when she took the contract to kill Victor. There was some thing about him that drew her to him. Victor is a former mob boss turned mayor. She couldn’t kill him then but won’t let anything happen to him now. Will she be able to keep him safe this time around?

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2,383 reviews
February 14, 2020
Della was the head of a witch coven. Victor was the head of the mob turned good. She was contracted to kill him. But fate intervened and it was instant love. Then immediate loathing and personal hurt. She had that one night with him and lost everything but her coven. Several months later she finds out the hit is still on him and happening. Can she save him? Can they put the past behind them and admit their secret love for the other? Exciting and interesting story

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Profile Image for Mari (Mystics & Metaphysics Book Blog).
7,751 reviews169 followers
February 13, 2020
I was captivated and held captive myself while reading this. Della and Victor have to count on each other but they're both so mistrustful, especially Victor after the first time they met. But it's a second chance story as well and all it takes is that pull the heart has towards your one and only and it's hard to resist. I enjoyed this so much.

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6,140 reviews17 followers
February 24, 2020
I enjoyed this new "Unchained Hearts" dark paranormal read. It's a fairly quick read that keeps you hooked from the very beginning. This is one fast paced and heart pounding read. Della, a witch and deadly assassin, was sent to kill Victor, but instead releases him. No Victor, the mob boss who went good, gave his heart to Della. Now he is in danger. This is a nicely written and developed story with some danger, steam, secrets, betrayal and great twists and turns.
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2,778 reviews7 followers
March 3, 2020
This is less then a hour read. We have Della who is a assassin witch. We have Victor who is mayor and dirty. When Della is commissioned to kill Victor she can't. What will the coven think of her? Will she lose everything? Will they not trust her? Victor can not forget Della. He is fighting his feelings for her? When they meet again what will happen?

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19.2k reviews8 followers
February 13, 2020
Another great well written short story in the Unchained Hearts series. This is Della Thoreaux and Victor Montalban and the story of their love from the moment they meet when she tries to kill him, until their happy ending. I hope there is moire to come in this series. I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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7,445 reviews52 followers
February 13, 2020
Captive Witch by Fiona Starr was a story that I have really loved reading. I loved this story and can not get enough from this author. I love reading about witches and magic in my stories. I highly recomemnd this story to everyone who loves reading about dark and paranormal romances.

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10.8k reviews125 followers
February 17, 2020
I've read several books written by Fiona Starr; she has done a great job at writing a good book; she is becoming one of my favorite authors. I can’t wait to read more of books her books.

The story line caught my attention at the very beginning and kept me interested throughout the entire book.

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10.7k reviews28 followers
February 17, 2020
Captive Witch is a quick, steamy romance between Della a powerful witch/assassin who was hired to kill Victor a former mob boss but instead of killing him she let him go. From the unexpected twists, magic, mystery, danger, betrayal and romance these two go through so much in this book. I look forward to reading more books in the Unchained series. I voluntarily reviewed a copy of this book.
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927 reviews8 followers
February 26, 2020
This was an intense paranormal love story about second chances, and missed opportunities.
This was a great heart pounding read. The story was very well written with great characters. The story drew me in and I had it finished in one sitting. I would highly recommend this read.

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6,577 reviews35 followers
March 4, 2020
A quick, easy, and enjoyable second chance romance! The story-line is drama-filled, well written, well developed, and emotionally deep with ups and downs, suspense, betrayal, and twists and turns. The characters are likeable; the chemistry between them is off the charts! Definitely recommended!

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3,411 reviews1 follower
March 15, 2020
I am not sure that I even know where to begin writing a review for this because it is truly an awesome experience.

I loved everything about it - the characters, the plot, the emotion, the writing.
The author had a tremendous ability in telling the story that had me wanting this book to go on and on.

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2,894 reviews
March 16, 2020
Reading this short story was very enjoyable.
Interesting storyline and characters with sizzling chemistry.
Well, she is assassin and a witch. The first time she supposed to kill him, second time she is his protector.
Will she protect her heart?

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552 reviews2 followers
February 8, 2020
A captive heart is the worst kind of prison. Captive Witch was quite good. Complete with romance, steam, chemistry, angst, twists and turns, magic, and double crossing.

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6,484 reviews22 followers
February 14, 2020
This is a captivating read about an assassin and witch. This is a very entertaining novella that is very intriguing.I really liked the chemistry, steam, magic, romance and twists.

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552 reviews7 followers
February 17, 2020
This was a fast-paced, steamy story involving trust issues, broken hearts, betrayal, witchcraft, etc. I liked the characters, though perhaps the villain’s motivations felt a little forced.

I received a free copy of Captive Witch, but that did not affect my review.
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16.4k reviews217 followers
March 15, 2020
A well written book with an interesting story line. The characters are strong and the story flows quickly and smoothly. I enjoyed reading this story.

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7,813 reviews65 followers
March 15, 2020
I love this book and especially the great characters with that are well developed and engaging and have plenty of chemistry to keep me entertained. The storyline flowed smoothly.

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1,845 reviews6 followers
February 13, 2020
This was a blast of a book. I thought it was completely entertaining. I voluntarily read and reviewed this book in exchange for a free copy.
2,402 reviews13 followers
February 14, 2020
Delia and Victor had great chemistry and the book was full of action, suspense and romance. I received a free copy of this book. This review was posted voluntarily.
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3,827 reviews34 followers
February 14, 2020
This story had it all. Witches magic, thrilling characters that only leaving you wanting more. Each page was so interesting and really pulls you in. An outstanding story!
1,641 reviews6 followers
March 7, 2020
Della and Victor's story was so good. I really enjoyed these two a lot. Could not put down and was just so interested the entire time with this one.
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