I wasn't happy with this story at all. It started sweet, but someone's first time should be sweeter than that. Especially when there is true/forever love involved. I felt the sex was all about the topper and didn't concern himself with making it even comfortable for him, never mind good. Don't get me wrong, I love insta-love stories, but I was brought right out of the story when he told him that "foreplay was for chicks". What?! I felt a connection starting between the characters until that scene. Maybe it was just me, but it didn't work for me.