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Writerly Ambitions
Years after his initial arrival in the original tale, Mr. Bingley finally takes up residence at Netherfield. His close friend, Mr. Darcy, has spent these intervening years in a relentless quest for the ideal wife, gracing every ball and partaking in every dance of the Season. Yet, each potential match he encounters lacks a certain je ne sais quoi. His friends have grown skeptical of his insistence that he intends to enter matrimony.
Elizabeth Bennet, on the other hand, has carved out a life of independence following an unfortunate incident that led to her exile to London. She turned to writing novels, which to her delight, garnered popularity and provided her with a modest income. Now, she is fiercely determined to rely on no one but herself.
When Elizabeth and Darcy meet at the assembly ball, they strike up an unlikely friendship. Elizabeth finds amusement in Darcy's arrogance, while he is captivated by her wit and mischievous charm. However, Elizabeth falls short of Darcy's stringent list of wife-worthy qualities, and she herself is steadfast in her resolve to remain unwed.
This tale is a delightful blend of romance, humor, and a touch of angst, spanning a length of 65,000 words. Will Darcy and Elizabeth overcome their self-imposed barriers to discover a love that defies their expectations?
Elizabeth Bennet, on the other hand, has carved out a life of independence following an unfortunate incident that led to her exile to London. She turned to writing novels, which to her delight, garnered popularity and provided her with a modest income. Now, she is fiercely determined to rely on no one but herself.
When Elizabeth and Darcy meet at the assembly ball, they strike up an unlikely friendship. Elizabeth finds amusement in Darcy's arrogance, while he is captivated by her wit and mischievous charm. However, Elizabeth falls short of Darcy's stringent list of wife-worthy qualities, and she herself is steadfast in her resolve to remain unwed.
This tale is a delightful blend of romance, humor, and a touch of angst, spanning a length of 65,000 words. Will Darcy and Elizabeth overcome their self-imposed barriers to discover a love that defies their expectations?
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Published December 15, 2019
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October 13, 2025
I love writing. I love the swirl and swing of words as they tangle with human emotions. ~ James Michener
“Writerly Ambitions” begins in 1820 – years after the events in canon Pride & Prejudice.
The evening before his planned trip to inspect Netherfield Park, Charles Bingley met an angel. So enchanted was he with his Isabel, he remained in London and married. In 1820, his wife died leaving him with 2 children. Darcy has never married but feels the lack of a wife and family. He has his requirements listed and searches for the woman who matches perfectly.
Four of the Bennet daughters are married and settled away from Meryton.
Elizabeth remains a Bennet.
In 1811, she was stranded in a cabin for two days with George Wickham. She allowed no improprieties but the village did not believe in her innocence. She leaves Hertfordshire and now lives in London. She has developed her talent for storytelling and is an established author, earning a modest living from her novels.
To me, the greatest pleasure of writing is not what it's about, but the inner music the words make. ~ Truman Capote
As the story begins, Elizabeth is returning home for the first time since leaving. Except for her parents, no one in Meryton knows of her successful writing career.
Bingley has at last decided to lease Netherfield Park. He and Darcy arrive in time to attend the Meryton Assembly.
After the usual awkward meeting, Darcy and Elizabeth develop an easy friendship. Their interactions are full of good will and humor. The local bookshop owner carries the novels of “A Gentlewoman” but refuses to recommend them to anyone. Georgiana is a fan of the author and Darcy buys the entire collection.
I enjoyed the casual, teasing nature of the Darcy/Elizabeth relationship. In her thoughts, Elizabeth refers to herself in the third person as “the heroine” of her own story.
The book is clean, well-written, and proofread. I would recommend it to anyone who enjoys JAFF.
The story I am writing exists, written in absolutely perfect fashion, some place, in the air. All I must do is find it, and copy it. ~ Jules Renard
“Writerly Ambitions” begins in 1820 – years after the events in canon Pride & Prejudice.
The evening before his planned trip to inspect Netherfield Park, Charles Bingley met an angel. So enchanted was he with his Isabel, he remained in London and married. In 1820, his wife died leaving him with 2 children. Darcy has never married but feels the lack of a wife and family. He has his requirements listed and searches for the woman who matches perfectly.
Four of the Bennet daughters are married and settled away from Meryton.
Elizabeth remains a Bennet.
In 1811, she was stranded in a cabin for two days with George Wickham. She allowed no improprieties but the village did not believe in her innocence. She leaves Hertfordshire and now lives in London. She has developed her talent for storytelling and is an established author, earning a modest living from her novels.
To me, the greatest pleasure of writing is not what it's about, but the inner music the words make. ~ Truman Capote
As the story begins, Elizabeth is returning home for the first time since leaving. Except for her parents, no one in Meryton knows of her successful writing career.
Bingley has at last decided to lease Netherfield Park. He and Darcy arrive in time to attend the Meryton Assembly.
After the usual awkward meeting, Darcy and Elizabeth develop an easy friendship. Their interactions are full of good will and humor. The local bookshop owner carries the novels of “A Gentlewoman” but refuses to recommend them to anyone. Georgiana is a fan of the author and Darcy buys the entire collection.
I enjoyed the casual, teasing nature of the Darcy/Elizabeth relationship. In her thoughts, Elizabeth refers to herself in the third person as “the heroine” of her own story.
The book is clean, well-written, and proofread. I would recommend it to anyone who enjoys JAFF.
The story I am writing exists, written in absolutely perfect fashion, some place, in the air. All I must do is find it, and copy it. ~ Jules Renard
December 29, 2019
Debbie B. remarked how she loved this story and so I had to read it. This author is one I have read before and I always admire his words at the end of his story about supporting Doctors Without Borders or other charities.
The author's blurb tells the story well. Elizabeth has been cast out of Longbourn for 7 years and even her sister, Jane, has cut her. Elizabeth is sent to London to live with her aunt and uncle. Little is said about that family connection. Elizabeth becomes an author and does well at it. She meets many others from the world of arts and finds her independence with that circle of acquaintances.
Her four sisters marry, but not well, and then she is called back to Longbourn. Bingley, a widower with 2 children, leases Netherfield and brings his friend, Darcy, with him. Darcy is seriously looking for a wife and has a long list of qualifications that lady must meet. Bingley first dances with Elizabeth at the Assembly. He and she have a discussion and while they decide that they will not do for each other, Bingley tells Elizabeth about his friend. Darcy next dances with her. He has overheard the gossip about her downfall and that, on top of being without a dowry and having no connections, etc., has marked her as unsuitable for marrying. However as they dance and talk, he finds her honesty and frankness refreshing. She makes no qualms about how she would never suit him and, besides, she plans to never marry. They meet often and decide that they can be friends.
Elizabeth's life experiences have molded her into the woman she is. She trusts no one. She clings to her independence tightly. And in this story it is her books that afford an opening to make friends with some. Few know that she writes those popular novels. However, discussions about her plots and the similar fate her heroines find seem to reflect Elizabeth's choices for her own life.
This book kept my interest and had that angst I love to read. Can/Will Darcy throw away his list? Will Elizabeth put her trust in a friend enough to let go of that total independence she so values?
I highly recommend this book.
The author's blurb tells the story well. Elizabeth has been cast out of Longbourn for 7 years and even her sister, Jane, has cut her. Elizabeth is sent to London to live with her aunt and uncle. Little is said about that family connection. Elizabeth becomes an author and does well at it. She meets many others from the world of arts and finds her independence with that circle of acquaintances.
Her four sisters marry, but not well, and then she is called back to Longbourn. Bingley, a widower with 2 children, leases Netherfield and brings his friend, Darcy, with him. Darcy is seriously looking for a wife and has a long list of qualifications that lady must meet. Bingley first dances with Elizabeth at the Assembly. He and she have a discussion and while they decide that they will not do for each other, Bingley tells Elizabeth about his friend. Darcy next dances with her. He has overheard the gossip about her downfall and that, on top of being without a dowry and having no connections, etc., has marked her as unsuitable for marrying. However as they dance and talk, he finds her honesty and frankness refreshing. She makes no qualms about how she would never suit him and, besides, she plans to never marry. They meet often and decide that they can be friends.
Elizabeth's life experiences have molded her into the woman she is. She trusts no one. She clings to her independence tightly. And in this story it is her books that afford an opening to make friends with some. Few know that she writes those popular novels. However, discussions about her plots and the similar fate her heroines find seem to reflect Elizabeth's choices for her own life.
This book kept my interest and had that angst I love to read. Can/Will Darcy throw away his list? Will Elizabeth put her trust in a friend enough to let go of that total independence she so values?
I highly recommend this book.
December 20, 2019
And now for something completely different
Clever. Clever conversations within a clever, original plot. Mr. Underwood gives us a completely plausible delayed story where Elizabeth has been banished from Meryton due to a compromising situation with everyone's most likely rake. We learn quickly what has happened and how she has dealt with the situation that occurred seven years prior to the beginning of this book. Darcy and Bingley arrive in Hertfordshire at the same time Elizabeth is given leave to return home. The romance that ensues is far more adult and hesitant between this more mature and skeptical pair than most other renditions in JAFFland. I breezed through this short novel nonstop, except for careful reading of Tim's ever improving, excellent prose. If you don't require another canon re-hash, I highly recommend this book.
Clever. Clever conversations within a clever, original plot. Mr. Underwood gives us a completely plausible delayed story where Elizabeth has been banished from Meryton due to a compromising situation with everyone's most likely rake. We learn quickly what has happened and how she has dealt with the situation that occurred seven years prior to the beginning of this book. Darcy and Bingley arrive in Hertfordshire at the same time Elizabeth is given leave to return home. The romance that ensues is far more adult and hesitant between this more mature and skeptical pair than most other renditions in JAFFland. I breezed through this short novel nonstop, except for careful reading of Tim's ever improving, excellent prose. If you don't require another canon re-hash, I highly recommend this book.
May 9, 2025
I so enjoy this author’s stories. In this JAFF Elizabeth is determinedly independent and shoulders the responsibility of financially supporting her family in the future with her writing. She does not really trust anyone to be there for her, as she has not had anyone, even Jane, to support her in her darkest hour.
Darcy has created a very detailed list of the qualifications for the perfect wife for the Master of Pemberley. Elizabeth meets very few of these. But, Darcy and Elizabeth like each other and their conversations, so they determine to become just friends. Bingley and Mrs. Bennet have other ideas. Is just friendship in the cards for ODC?
In many ways this is a humorous and light hearted story, yet Elizabeth struggles with the issue many women experience when considering marriage: can I trust the man I marry to support the person I am and need to become? In addition, can she trust him to trust her after a serious scandal?
Very well written with charmingly flawed characters whose expectations of their future lives are turned on their heads. Well done, Timothy Underwood. I look forward to your next.
Darcy has created a very detailed list of the qualifications for the perfect wife for the Master of Pemberley. Elizabeth meets very few of these. But, Darcy and Elizabeth like each other and their conversations, so they determine to become just friends. Bingley and Mrs. Bennet have other ideas. Is just friendship in the cards for ODC?
In many ways this is a humorous and light hearted story, yet Elizabeth struggles with the issue many women experience when considering marriage: can I trust the man I marry to support the person I am and need to become? In addition, can she trust him to trust her after a serious scandal?
Very well written with charmingly flawed characters whose expectations of their future lives are turned on their heads. Well done, Timothy Underwood. I look forward to your next.
April 26, 2022
Lizzie is a writer
The description of how she writes a book is detailed enough to makes us wonder if it is similar to the author’s writing experience. The book is full of angst and there quite a few scenes where Lizzy is bitter. She doesn’t take say much her part in making the mistake to be out with Wickham without a chaperone or wandering unaccompanied in the paths around here home without a companion, especially with the militia being encamped relatively close by. But she does have every right to be bitter that in her society everyone believes Wickham’s lies instead of her truths.
The book is compelling and hard tp ou down, I recommend it highly.
The description of how she writes a book is detailed enough to makes us wonder if it is similar to the author’s writing experience. The book is full of angst and there quite a few scenes where Lizzy is bitter. She doesn’t take say much her part in making the mistake to be out with Wickham without a chaperone or wandering unaccompanied in the paths around here home without a companion, especially with the militia being encamped relatively close by. But she does have every right to be bitter that in her society everyone believes Wickham’s lies instead of her truths.
The book is compelling and hard tp ou down, I recommend it highly.
May 13, 2025
Elizabeth is the only Bennet daughter who has not married. Her reputation suffered unfairly from a scandal largely engineered by George Wickham. Now she makes some money as an authoress. Bingley is widowed. Darcy comes to visit.
I enjoyed the story.
I enjoyed the story.
April 1, 2025
Very Good Read
March 18, 2025 - Audiobook
Upgraded to five stars for the audiobook version. Stevie Zimmerman’s Darcy is one of my favourite voices, so when he partakes in teasing Elizabeth back, it’s thoroughly delightful to me. I read the book some time ago, and had forgotten how much I enjoyed this story. I really loved these portrayals, including the widower, Bingley, who serves Darcy well as a great friend in this book. Really enjoyed it. I’m so glad to see even more of Underwood’s books coming to audio.
Reviewed in Canada on January 7, 2020
I enjoyed this book. I have to admit I had to reread some paragraphs, as I sometimes got lost in some of the dialogue; perhaps the result of the author’s “effort to stick lots of “alliteration and polyptotons” into the text, and which is why I likely lost my way and couldn’t quite give it a 5 rating. When I read his Afterword mentioning that, I realized perhaps that was the problem with this book I couldn’t quite put my finger on while reading the story. Maybe less is more?... without a gimmick? Maybe some of those alliterations and polyptotons just went over my head? I don’t know. I do love a book with lots of dialogue, however, and in that regard, it does not disappoint. I loved how ODC’s relationship developed and their frankness of speech throughout. Their frequent misunderstandings, usually a characteristic of my favorite couple in many variations, were absent in this story, much to my delight. I wasn’t surprised that Darcy believed the lie of the scandal, and I appreciated Elizabeth’s reason for not telling him the truth of it. She eventually does of course. I enjoyed it. Do read it.
Note: While Wickham is mentioned, he doesn’t appear in the book, which is why it’s on my ‘no Wickham’ shelf.
March 18, 2025 - Audiobook
Upgraded to five stars for the audiobook version. Stevie Zimmerman’s Darcy is one of my favourite voices, so when he partakes in teasing Elizabeth back, it’s thoroughly delightful to me. I read the book some time ago, and had forgotten how much I enjoyed this story. I really loved these portrayals, including the widower, Bingley, who serves Darcy well as a great friend in this book. Really enjoyed it. I’m so glad to see even more of Underwood’s books coming to audio.
Reviewed in Canada on January 7, 2020
I enjoyed this book. I have to admit I had to reread some paragraphs, as I sometimes got lost in some of the dialogue; perhaps the result of the author’s “effort to stick lots of “alliteration and polyptotons” into the text, and which is why I likely lost my way and couldn’t quite give it a 5 rating. When I read his Afterword mentioning that, I realized perhaps that was the problem with this book I couldn’t quite put my finger on while reading the story. Maybe less is more?... without a gimmick? Maybe some of those alliterations and polyptotons just went over my head? I don’t know. I do love a book with lots of dialogue, however, and in that regard, it does not disappoint. I loved how ODC’s relationship developed and their frankness of speech throughout. Their frequent misunderstandings, usually a characteristic of my favorite couple in many variations, were absent in this story, much to my delight. I wasn’t surprised that Darcy believed the lie of the scandal, and I appreciated Elizabeth’s reason for not telling him the truth of it. She eventually does of course. I enjoyed it. Do read it.
Note: While Wickham is mentioned, he doesn’t appear in the book, which is why it’s on my ‘no Wickham’ shelf.
March 9, 2020
Compelling read
Light and airy read with a dark ambience that held my attention from start to finish.
The banter was excellently written and kept this book on the comedic side despite the dire back story.
Rated: Chaste
Our dear couple were slightly more mature in this story set in 1820.
Elizabeth had suffered a compromising situation with (Mr) Wickham and as a result, had been disgraced in the Meryton society. She had removed to London to live with her Gardiner relations, supporting herself as an author and she had not been back in Meryton for seven years when this book begins.
Darcy had been looking for a wife for years and had adopted a rather imposing (ridiculous) list of requirements of his future spouse (paragon of virtue).
I loved how the story drew me in from the start and how the relationship of ODC developed.
Heartily recommend this book!
Light and airy read with a dark ambience that held my attention from start to finish.
The banter was excellently written and kept this book on the comedic side despite the dire back story.
Rated: Chaste
Our dear couple were slightly more mature in this story set in 1820.
Elizabeth had suffered a compromising situation with (Mr) Wickham and as a result, had been disgraced in the Meryton society. She had removed to London to live with her Gardiner relations, supporting herself as an author and she had not been back in Meryton for seven years when this book begins.
Darcy had been looking for a wife for years and had adopted a rather imposing (ridiculous) list of requirements of his future spouse (paragon of virtue).
I loved how the story drew me in from the start and how the relationship of ODC developed.
Heartily recommend this book!
May 17, 2021
This is a complete remaining rather than variation. All Bennet girls are married with the exception of Elizabeth who was ruined by Wickham. She's made a life and career for herself in London as an author. She returns to Longbourn years later where she encounters Darcy and learns of his 'list' of essential qualities for a wife. This sparks some great banter - they can be friends as clearly Elizabeth is not suitable to be Mrs Darcy. However, being friends with a woman is an usual position for Darcy and he likes it... alot! And once he has made his mind up he cannot be without Elizabeth he becomes a man on a mission to win her!... Problem is... she doesn't want to be won!
This is a good read - the banter between Darcy and Elizabeth is really good... Darcy and laugh at himself and just be himself with Elizabeth.
This is a good read - the banter between Darcy and Elizabeth is really good... Darcy and laugh at himself and just be himself with Elizabeth.
May 16, 2023
I loved this book. This was my second time reading it and I enjoyed it just as much.
He uses a lot of awkward adverbs but that’s my only complaint. Also refers to Anne de Bourgh as Lady Anne which she is not.
He uses a lot of awkward adverbs but that’s my only complaint. Also refers to Anne de Bourgh as Lady Anne which she is not.
January 25, 2022
I liked the premise and the slow growth of D&E relationship from friends to more.
However, reading this authors style of writing gave me a terrible headache.
However, reading this authors style of writing gave me a terrible headache.
January 21, 2020
Our dear couple is older, but are they wiser? Circumstances have forced Elizabeth to be strong and independent to the point of blind self preservation. Darcy has held up his "list" of attributes for the perfect woman. They must each see past what they perceived to be the only way forward to allow themselves to find happiness.
I greatly enjoyed this story. At times, I wanted to hit Elizabeth upside the head, but this version of Darcy saved the day for me.
I greatly enjoyed this story. At times, I wanted to hit Elizabeth upside the head, but this version of Darcy saved the day for me.
July 30, 2021
1820 Seven years have passed since Elizabeth Bennet's actions, her conceited independence, resulted in ruining the prospects of her sisters. All married but not well. But she meets Darcy, a man who thinks so highly of himself that only a perfect lady is good enough for him to marry.
Didn't care for either of their characters. Once again Mary is wrongly described as wearing spectacles.
Unfortunately I didn't find the story that interesting
Didn't care for either of their characters. Once again Mary is wrongly described as wearing spectacles.
Unfortunately I didn't find the story that interesting
February 14, 2020
No thanks
At least one Bulwer-Lytton Fiction Contest-worthy sentence and other questionable English. One very poignant sentence about the perfect mate. Do not care for the writing style, however. And it needs an editor.
At least one Bulwer-Lytton Fiction Contest-worthy sentence and other questionable English. One very poignant sentence about the perfect mate. Do not care for the writing style, however. And it needs an editor.
February 7, 2020
This Pride and Prejudice variation is a solid story, and I loved the story itself and wanted to keep reading. However, there were some awkward sentences that I had to go back and read again, and still had trouble understanding. But they were few, and overall I found this highly entertaining and romantic, with quite a lot of angst thrown in, as well as humor. I really felt for Lizzy in this story. After reading the author's notes at the end, I'm relieved he wasn't harder on her in this story than was the case in the final version.
It's seven years since Charles Bingley first intended to take up residence at Netherfield Park. In this variation he never arrived there, having by chance met a young woman and fallen instantly in love. He married and lived happily until his wife Isabella's untimely recent death at the birth of their daughter, Hannah. Now he's a widower in half-mourning, and he's decided to do what he intended all those years ago and travel to Meryton. He has thought about needing a wife, a mother for his child, but he's not set on that. He's still in love with Isabella. For moral support, he asks Mr. Darcy to go with him.
Mr. Darcy has been attempting for years to find an appropriate woman to marry. He even has a list of attributes his wife must possess, for which Bingley and others have teased him mercilessly. But the staid, proud Darcy remains firm in his intention to find the perfect bride, at least until he attends a public assembly in Meryton. There he meets Elizabeth Bennet.
Elizabeth has had a difficult time since being compromised by George Wickham at twenty. Even though she is innocent and never let the rake touch her, no one believes her. She had gone for a walk with him alone in bad weather, and they'd gotten caught out in a snowstorm and had to take shelter together. Everyone in Meryton believes she is a fallen woman. She had to leave Meryton after a particularly mortifying scene at a public assembly and has lived in London since then, where she has taken up writing novels anonymously, as A Gentlewoman.
Darcy overhears drunken Mr. Reed insulting Miss Bennet at the assembly, before Darcy has even met her, only had a glimpse of her and found her attractive. He almost calls the man out. Instead, he urges Mr. Lucas to take his drunken friend home. Then he realizes that Elizabeth has left the dance floor, and he finds her out on a balcony, upset, basically having an anxiety attack.
Darcy helps her calm down, and the two strike up a conversation. Bingley, who claimed the first dance with her has already informed her jokingly of Mr. Darcy's list of requirements for his perfect wife, and she teases him about it. He asks her to dance. She knows she is not suitable for him, but they agree very quickly to a platonic friendship.
This is an excellent story overall, and I'm very glad I read it. Yes, I have my quibbles, but I won't go into them in any more detail, because I was able to overlook them for the most part, and if I can do that, as nitpicky as I am, they won't likely bother others that much.
It's seven years since Charles Bingley first intended to take up residence at Netherfield Park. In this variation he never arrived there, having by chance met a young woman and fallen instantly in love. He married and lived happily until his wife Isabella's untimely recent death at the birth of their daughter, Hannah. Now he's a widower in half-mourning, and he's decided to do what he intended all those years ago and travel to Meryton. He has thought about needing a wife, a mother for his child, but he's not set on that. He's still in love with Isabella. For moral support, he asks Mr. Darcy to go with him.
Mr. Darcy has been attempting for years to find an appropriate woman to marry. He even has a list of attributes his wife must possess, for which Bingley and others have teased him mercilessly. But the staid, proud Darcy remains firm in his intention to find the perfect bride, at least until he attends a public assembly in Meryton. There he meets Elizabeth Bennet.
Elizabeth has had a difficult time since being compromised by George Wickham at twenty. Even though she is innocent and never let the rake touch her, no one believes her. She had gone for a walk with him alone in bad weather, and they'd gotten caught out in a snowstorm and had to take shelter together. Everyone in Meryton believes she is a fallen woman. She had to leave Meryton after a particularly mortifying scene at a public assembly and has lived in London since then, where she has taken up writing novels anonymously, as A Gentlewoman.
Darcy overhears drunken Mr. Reed insulting Miss Bennet at the assembly, before Darcy has even met her, only had a glimpse of her and found her attractive. He almost calls the man out. Instead, he urges Mr. Lucas to take his drunken friend home. Then he realizes that Elizabeth has left the dance floor, and he finds her out on a balcony, upset, basically having an anxiety attack.
Darcy helps her calm down, and the two strike up a conversation. Bingley, who claimed the first dance with her has already informed her jokingly of Mr. Darcy's list of requirements for his perfect wife, and she teases him about it. He asks her to dance. She knows she is not suitable for him, but they agree very quickly to a platonic friendship.
This is an excellent story overall, and I'm very glad I read it. Yes, I have my quibbles, but I won't go into them in any more detail, because I was able to overlook them for the most part, and if I can do that, as nitpicky as I am, they won't likely bother others that much.
January 6, 2020
Wonderful
Elizabeth and Wickham are the subjects of a scandal, after being trapped together alone during a blizzard. Even though nothing happened, Elizabeth is forced to live in London to separate her family from her shame. She takes up writing novels, and eventually enjoys success, cultivating new acquaintances among writers and artists in London. After seven years she returns to Longbourn, and meets for the first time Mr. Bingley and Mr. Darcy. By this time, all of her sisters are married and gone, but there are still some in the neighborhood who remember her scandalous past.
This book is infused with humor, in spite of the serious subject matter, and the funniest character is Mr. Darcy. The author doesn't hesitate to poke fun at Mr. Darcy's list of qualifications for a wife worthy of someone of his high status in life. Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth become good friends, and Darcy in all seriousness confides in her about his search for the perfect wife and why only the very best will do for him. Although Elizabeth has been hardened by her survival through a scandal of which she is innocent, she retains enough of her own sense of humor and teasing ways to meet Darcy's list with the sarcasm it deserves. The two of them develop a delightful, platonic, friendly relationship that helps them both learn and grow in their self awareness.
I love the slow progression of their interest in each other. They both start out determined to be friends, and nothing more, Elizabeth because she wants never to marry and give up her career and independence, Darcy because Elizabeth clearly does not conform to his list of ideal wife material. They become true and trusted friends, which is ,of course, an excellent foundation for love to blossom.
I deducted a star for the sometimes confusing manner of writing, using extremely long sentences, with entirely too many phrases explaining other phrases, and not always punctuated, either. (kind of like that one!). There were also some words used that I don't believe are proper words. However, the book is well written and well edited. I recommend it highly.
Elizabeth and Wickham are the subjects of a scandal, after being trapped together alone during a blizzard. Even though nothing happened, Elizabeth is forced to live in London to separate her family from her shame. She takes up writing novels, and eventually enjoys success, cultivating new acquaintances among writers and artists in London. After seven years she returns to Longbourn, and meets for the first time Mr. Bingley and Mr. Darcy. By this time, all of her sisters are married and gone, but there are still some in the neighborhood who remember her scandalous past.
This book is infused with humor, in spite of the serious subject matter, and the funniest character is Mr. Darcy. The author doesn't hesitate to poke fun at Mr. Darcy's list of qualifications for a wife worthy of someone of his high status in life. Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth become good friends, and Darcy in all seriousness confides in her about his search for the perfect wife and why only the very best will do for him. Although Elizabeth has been hardened by her survival through a scandal of which she is innocent, she retains enough of her own sense of humor and teasing ways to meet Darcy's list with the sarcasm it deserves. The two of them develop a delightful, platonic, friendly relationship that helps them both learn and grow in their self awareness.
I love the slow progression of their interest in each other. They both start out determined to be friends, and nothing more, Elizabeth because she wants never to marry and give up her career and independence, Darcy because Elizabeth clearly does not conform to his list of ideal wife material. They become true and trusted friends, which is ,of course, an excellent foundation for love to blossom.
I deducted a star for the sometimes confusing manner of writing, using extremely long sentences, with entirely too many phrases explaining other phrases, and not always punctuated, either. (kind of like that one!). There were also some words used that I don't believe are proper words. However, the book is well written and well edited. I recommend it highly.
January 19, 2025
(Edit 2025.01.19) This is still my favorite of this author's books, for the humor and the absolutely delightful writing. I greatly enjoyed the humor in this story - the bantering between Lizzy and Darcy was so much fun. There was just enough angst to offset the humor and lightness.
It takes place 7 years after canon. The day before Bingley was supposed to come look at Netherfield, he fell in love with Isobel and never went to Hertfordshire. He married her and they had 2 children, but she died at the birth of Bingley's heir; some 7 or 9 (?) months prior to this timeframe.
If you haven't read the book yet, please do! And if you find you don't like the Darcy at the beginning, that is one of the main points! Imagine the proud, arrogant and haughty Mr. Darcy from the start of Pride and Prejudice - he was extremely unlikable! When watching the Colin Firth version of P&P, I had not yet read the book (I had heard of it but truly had no idea of the story line) and I could not believe this awful man was the HERO! He was everything dreadful! Now imagine that 7 years have passed where no one took him to task as Elizabeth did at his first proposal; no one had truly pointed out his ridiculousness and hypocrisy. Of course, he's going to be an ass! But really, Darcy was hilarious at the start, claiming to be honest, not vain, arrogant, or excessively prideful, and with his list of the requirements for a wife - hahaha! It was brilliant! But in spite of that, I did feel this Darcy was a bit kinder than canon Darcy would have been, especially once he knew that Elizabeth's disgrace was caused by Wickham. I suppose that was one of the reasons he was nicer to her; he knew what a horrible person Wickham was, and felt some sympathy.
Elizabeth was also a changed person, after having the terrifying experience (7 yrs prior) of being trapped with Mr. Wickham for 2 days in a sudden snowstorm, where she had to fight him off, staying awake for the whole time in order to protect herself from his advances. Then, in revenge at her refusal to have sex with him, he tells lurid stories of her supposed slutty behavior, and the whole neighborhood believes HIM instead of her, cutting her in a traumatic manner and forcing her to go to London. In London she makes friends in the literary/artistic communities and becomes a successful author, though it is not generally known in Meryton that she is the author of the books by "A Gentlewoman". She has returned to Longbourn with mixed feelings: bitterness and resentment towards the supposed friends that abandoned her, even to her father who she felt did not support her as he should. The deepest hurt was that her sister Jane married a clergyman who insisted that she cut her relationship with Elizabeth (we gradually learn more about that). Elizabeth is convinced that there is no one she can trust and is determined to be completely independent.
Darcy and Elizabeth understand right at the beginning of their acquaintance that she is not an eligible match for him, so they are comfortable developing a friendship. They discuss books; he admits to have read a couple of books by "A Gentlewoman" and that is his sister's favorite author. She confides in him that she is the author known as "A Gentlewoman" and he reads all her other books and they often discuss them. He comes to be very impressed with her intelligence and wit, and rather proud, in a way, of her accomplishments as an author. The progression of their friendship was so interesting and fun to watch. Bingley is behind the scenes helping his friend along, distracting Mrs. Bennet's attention away from them, as he knows Darcy's list is crap and that Elizabeth is perfect for Darcy. Mr. Bennet is also running interference with Mrs. Bennet so she doesn't go into extreme matchmaker mode and scare off Darcy.
Much happens, but the upshot is that Darcy (of course) finally realizes what is important in life, and that his list is ridiculous, and wants to marry Elizabeth. She, meanwhile is in love with him but terrified to trust again; to put her happiness in the hands of anyone else. So she rejects him, but he determines that he needs to show her that he is someone upon whom she will always be able to depend.
The discussion between Darcy and Elizabeth when they are finally at the point that she is accepting of his proposal is absolutely swoon-worthy and so romantic.
I highly recommend this book! And thank you, Mr. Underwood for having it on Kindle Unlimited, although I have purchased my own copy.
It takes place 7 years after canon. The day before Bingley was supposed to come look at Netherfield, he fell in love with Isobel and never went to Hertfordshire. He married her and they had 2 children, but she died at the birth of Bingley's heir; some 7 or 9 (?) months prior to this timeframe.
If you haven't read the book yet, please do! And if you find you don't like the Darcy at the beginning, that is one of the main points! Imagine the proud, arrogant and haughty Mr. Darcy from the start of Pride and Prejudice - he was extremely unlikable! When watching the Colin Firth version of P&P, I had not yet read the book (I had heard of it but truly had no idea of the story line) and I could not believe this awful man was the HERO! He was everything dreadful! Now imagine that 7 years have passed where no one took him to task as Elizabeth did at his first proposal; no one had truly pointed out his ridiculousness and hypocrisy. Of course, he's going to be an ass! But really, Darcy was hilarious at the start, claiming to be honest, not vain, arrogant, or excessively prideful, and with his list of the requirements for a wife - hahaha! It was brilliant! But in spite of that, I did feel this Darcy was a bit kinder than canon Darcy would have been, especially once he knew that Elizabeth's disgrace was caused by Wickham. I suppose that was one of the reasons he was nicer to her; he knew what a horrible person Wickham was, and felt some sympathy.
Elizabeth was also a changed person, after having the terrifying experience (7 yrs prior) of being trapped with Mr. Wickham for 2 days in a sudden snowstorm, where she had to fight him off, staying awake for the whole time in order to protect herself from his advances. Then, in revenge at her refusal to have sex with him, he tells lurid stories of her supposed slutty behavior, and the whole neighborhood believes HIM instead of her, cutting her in a traumatic manner and forcing her to go to London. In London she makes friends in the literary/artistic communities and becomes a successful author, though it is not generally known in Meryton that she is the author of the books by "A Gentlewoman". She has returned to Longbourn with mixed feelings: bitterness and resentment towards the supposed friends that abandoned her, even to her father who she felt did not support her as he should. The deepest hurt was that her sister Jane married a clergyman who insisted that she cut her relationship with Elizabeth (we gradually learn more about that). Elizabeth is convinced that there is no one she can trust and is determined to be completely independent.
Darcy and Elizabeth understand right at the beginning of their acquaintance that she is not an eligible match for him, so they are comfortable developing a friendship. They discuss books; he admits to have read a couple of books by "A Gentlewoman" and that is his sister's favorite author. She confides in him that she is the author known as "A Gentlewoman" and he reads all her other books and they often discuss them. He comes to be very impressed with her intelligence and wit, and rather proud, in a way, of her accomplishments as an author. The progression of their friendship was so interesting and fun to watch. Bingley is behind the scenes helping his friend along, distracting Mrs. Bennet's attention away from them, as he knows Darcy's list is crap and that Elizabeth is perfect for Darcy. Mr. Bennet is also running interference with Mrs. Bennet so she doesn't go into extreme matchmaker mode and scare off Darcy.
Much happens, but the upshot is that Darcy (of course) finally realizes what is important in life, and that his list is ridiculous, and wants to marry Elizabeth. She, meanwhile is in love with him but terrified to trust again; to put her happiness in the hands of anyone else. So she rejects him, but he determines that he needs to show her that he is someone upon whom she will always be able to depend.
The discussion between Darcy and Elizabeth when they are finally at the point that she is accepting of his proposal is absolutely swoon-worthy and so romantic.
I highly recommend this book! And thank you, Mr. Underwood for having it on Kindle Unlimited, although I have purchased my own copy.
May 18, 2021
Awesome read!
I found this story to be creative and different from the run of the mill JAFF, it ticks most of my requirements for an awesome P&P variations
A truly delightful Darcy ... though he is usual slightly arrogant, proud and vain self .. he is also kind, empathetic, extremely honourable.. a true feminist with a sense of humour and an ability to laugh at himself 😍
Similarly loveable Elizabeth , though she had good cause to be bitter.. she was surprisingly not so.. admittedly angry and hurt at Jane ‘s betrayal .. but not really bitter.. author really kept her character true to Austen’s “ not made for misery “
Then there enough interactions between the ODC with lots of humorous and witty banter!!
Not many OTT villains in fact as the timeline is 7 years after the original ( though I think 1820 is 9 years after the original but the authors refers 7 years multiple times and Also E is shown to be 27) .. two of the antagonists W and Lady C are already dead and Caroline is married:)
This is just a sweet and often witty story of how D and E get to know each other and overcome their self made obstacles to an HEA with each other
Highly recommend the book 👍
I found this story to be creative and different from the run of the mill JAFF, it ticks most of my requirements for an awesome P&P variations
A truly delightful Darcy ... though he is usual slightly arrogant, proud and vain self .. he is also kind, empathetic, extremely honourable.. a true feminist with a sense of humour and an ability to laugh at himself 😍
Similarly loveable Elizabeth , though she had good cause to be bitter.. she was surprisingly not so.. admittedly angry and hurt at Jane ‘s betrayal .. but not really bitter.. author really kept her character true to Austen’s “ not made for misery “
Then there enough interactions between the ODC with lots of humorous and witty banter!!
Not many OTT villains in fact as the timeline is 7 years after the original ( though I think 1820 is 9 years after the original but the authors refers 7 years multiple times and Also E is shown to be 27) .. two of the antagonists W and Lady C are already dead and Caroline is married:)
This is just a sweet and often witty story of how D and E get to know each other and overcome their self made obstacles to an HEA with each other
Highly recommend the book 👍
October 4, 2021
Overall, the book was just ok. I enjoyed the dialogues and the banter in the beginning but then it got too much and most importantly very much not in line with the time period. In fact, there was absolutely nothing in this book that was even remotely reminiscent of the behaviors and the dialogues of the 1820s period. Now, if the book said it takes place in 1920 (it is a variation, so why not), then the behaviors and the dialogues would have been a lot more believable.
I will give credit to the smart construction of the banter between the various characters. It is not easy. Most authors just skip a lot of talking back and forth. This author embraced it and did a lovely job. But even the first encounter of Elizabeth and Darcy was wildly inappropriate by the rules of 1820s. They were standing by themselves on a pooly lit balcony. Darcy was touching Elizabeth's arm at some point to comfort her. Bingley suggesting being friends with a single woman. And it goes on and on.
But again, it's a variation.
I will give credit to the smart construction of the banter between the various characters. It is not easy. Most authors just skip a lot of talking back and forth. This author embraced it and did a lovely job. But even the first encounter of Elizabeth and Darcy was wildly inappropriate by the rules of 1820s. They were standing by themselves on a pooly lit balcony. Darcy was touching Elizabeth's arm at some point to comfort her. Bingley suggesting being friends with a single woman. And it goes on and on.
But again, it's a variation.
May 2, 2020
Good premise, poorly written
I like the overall content of the book, but I had a hard time with the writing. Many of the sentences were so entirely too long, that by the time I got to the end, I forgot what was happening and had to re-read it. The dialogue was also very stilted, with many starts and stops mid-sentence, repetition of words, and stuttering. It might have made more sense said aloud than read, but it was very awkward. I wanted to like it a lot more than I actually did.
I like the overall content of the book, but I had a hard time with the writing. Many of the sentences were so entirely too long, that by the time I got to the end, I forgot what was happening and had to re-read it. The dialogue was also very stilted, with many starts and stops mid-sentence, repetition of words, and stuttering. It might have made more sense said aloud than read, but it was very awkward. I wanted to like it a lot more than I actually did.
January 17, 2020
3.5
The idea is rather interesting and not overused in JAFF. However, the plot is underdeveloped - at some point, without a particular reason Darcy just had an epiphany and that’s it - no additional info is needed. This makes the last third of the book rather muddled.
The idea is rather interesting and not overused in JAFF. However, the plot is underdeveloped - at some point, without a particular reason Darcy just had an epiphany and that’s it - no additional info is needed. This makes the last third of the book rather muddled.
August 12, 2021
This author’s specialty seems to be devising plots in which Darcy and Elizabeth are faced with very socially challenging situations. In Writerly Ambitions, Elizabeth has been compromised by Wickham and her reputation destroyed as a result. She’s had to go away to make a (successful) life as an independent woman in London for six or seven years. The book begins in 1820, when she has just returned to Longbourn, at the same time that Darcy is visiting Netherfield. For his part, Darcy is on a quest to find a wife who meets the requirements he’s consigned to a list, all of which taken together seem quite ridiculous: . Plausible perhaps for the age, but implausible that a man who’s seen it all like Darcy by this point of his life is holding on to the list still when he meets Elizabeth. Somewhat incongruent, I thought, with a Darcy who we know also seeks cleverness and kindness in a wife. I found it hard to believe that Darcy would be - how likely was that for a gentleman of his time?
I enjoyed the descriptions of Elizabeth’s life as an author. The alliterations were distracting at first and I wasn’t sure if they were written tongue-in-cheek but later it became clear they were. I liked that Elizabeth embodies the possibility of reading serious works alongside lighter ones (like we JAFF readers do ourselves).
All in all an enjoyable read, though not my favorite JAFF. I found that the social challenges in the book, while resolved as part of the plot, are of the kind to always leave a bit of a bitter taste in your mouth irrespective of the author’s reassurances that Darcy really didn’t regret marrying a wife whose reputation was so thoroughly tarnished. I liked Mr. and Mrs. Bennet in this book. I would have enjoyed seeing the secondary characters (Col. Fitzwilliam, Anne) play a more active role. Fleshing out their characters and having them interact with Darcy would have made the argument of the book (about how easily a man like Darcy could unite with a woman in Elizabeth’s circumstances) more persuasive. I agree with other readers that the banter between Darcy and Elizabeth was very good.
I enjoyed the descriptions of Elizabeth’s life as an author. The alliterations were distracting at first and I wasn’t sure if they were written tongue-in-cheek but later it became clear they were. I liked that Elizabeth embodies the possibility of reading serious works alongside lighter ones (like we JAFF readers do ourselves).
All in all an enjoyable read, though not my favorite JAFF. I found that the social challenges in the book, while resolved as part of the plot, are of the kind to always leave a bit of a bitter taste in your mouth irrespective of the author’s reassurances that Darcy really didn’t regret marrying a wife whose reputation was so thoroughly tarnished. I liked Mr. and Mrs. Bennet in this book. I would have enjoyed seeing the secondary characters (Col. Fitzwilliam, Anne) play a more active role. Fleshing out their characters and having them interact with Darcy would have made the argument of the book (about how easily a man like Darcy could unite with a woman in Elizabeth’s circumstances) more persuasive. I agree with other readers that the banter between Darcy and Elizabeth was very good.
December 26, 2025
This was such a sweet, funny and charming book. I was grinning so hard when reading the banter between E&D. I loved how realistic this Darcy and Elizabeth felt. Elizabeth liking Darcy from beginning leads to Elizabeth actually teasing Darcy's faults than thinking worst of them. When some of Darcy's comments hurt Elizabeth, he recognises immediately even without her saying and immediately addresses them. In that way, i loved this Darcy so much actually. Elizabeth also was honestly portrayed very well. Her trust issues come from what she thinks is a betrayal from Jane, and is quick to change that when she realises Jane was also hurt and couldn't do anything because of her husband's nature. Mr. and Mrs Bennet don't change, and even thought hurt by their words, actions, Elizabeth has accepted that, and is doing everything she could do to realistically make changes and i loved that for her. Honestly, so many little things i loved on this.
Even though its a shorter book than normal, i was more satisfied, as the book only focuses on E&D, without any drama from other characters. There is no Wickham or Caroline or Collins or Lady Catherine or Lydia on page. So, it feels like a proper romance book.
Thankfully, this didn't have the type of humor i see in some of this authors other book - where there are so many repeated words, few words paragraphs, characters doing completely idiotic thing. So, i loved this from start to end. Can't wait to reread this soon
Even though its a shorter book than normal, i was more satisfied, as the book only focuses on E&D, without any drama from other characters. There is no Wickham or Caroline or Collins or Lady Catherine or Lydia on page. So, it feels like a proper romance book.
Thankfully, this didn't have the type of humor i see in some of this authors other book - where there are so many repeated words, few words paragraphs, characters doing completely idiotic thing. So, i loved this from start to end. Can't wait to reread this soon
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
March 8, 2021
I quite enjoyed this book. Initially the tone is a bit weird as the author writes Elizabeth’s thoughts as though she were narrating her own novel but this verbose style thankfully tails off and the book is much better for it. The afterword explains the author’s style choices though.
This Pride and Prejudice variation starts 7 years after the original - Bingley is a widower father of two purchasing Netherfield and Darcy is finally searching for a bride, but with a list of impossibly high standards, he’s not having much luck. They arrive in the neighbourhood just as the last unmarried Bennet daughter returns home from a 7 year exile. Elizabeth Bennet suffered a scandal with Wickham and was shunned by Meryton society and so has been living with the Gardiners these past 7 years, channelling her frustration into writing novels under a pseudonym. Darcy and Elizabeth meet and get in well - so well that Darcy is considering throwing away his list...
There was a lot less angst in this than I expected, but I prefer my stories that way. The banter between Elizabeth and Darcy (or just Elizabeth and anyone really) was a lot of fun to read and I loved the literary criticism discussions.
The plot is a really interesting concept that I haven’t read too much of in JAFF so it stands out a bit more.
I think I will be picking up more from this author.
This Pride and Prejudice variation starts 7 years after the original - Bingley is a widower father of two purchasing Netherfield and Darcy is finally searching for a bride, but with a list of impossibly high standards, he’s not having much luck. They arrive in the neighbourhood just as the last unmarried Bennet daughter returns home from a 7 year exile. Elizabeth Bennet suffered a scandal with Wickham and was shunned by Meryton society and so has been living with the Gardiners these past 7 years, channelling her frustration into writing novels under a pseudonym. Darcy and Elizabeth meet and get in well - so well that Darcy is considering throwing away his list...
There was a lot less angst in this than I expected, but I prefer my stories that way. The banter between Elizabeth and Darcy (or just Elizabeth and anyone really) was a lot of fun to read and I loved the literary criticism discussions.
The plot is a really interesting concept that I haven’t read too much of in JAFF so it stands out a bit more.
I think I will be picking up more from this author.
January 20, 2020
Good book for a lazy day
A book that makes the relationship of Elizabeth and Darcy the central theme. While the relationships of E with her father and Jane, the relationship of Darcy and Bingley, and the relationship of Jane and Bingley are important, they provide insights into the characters of E and D.
I smiled through the lighthearted conversations and appreciate the author’s sense of humor. Despite the explanation the author provides in the Afterward, I would have liked to see a bit more attention given to E’s anger and disappointment at the disbelief of her family, especially her father and Jane and to the reconciliation of Jane and Lizzy upon revelation of Jane being the victim of spousal abuse. I realize that the negative gossip and spousal abuse were not uncommon during that period.
This book rated 4 instead of 5 stars for me because one moment the angst was described and in the next paragraph it was gone as if the change was immediate and complete.
A book that makes the relationship of Elizabeth and Darcy the central theme. While the relationships of E with her father and Jane, the relationship of Darcy and Bingley, and the relationship of Jane and Bingley are important, they provide insights into the characters of E and D.
I smiled through the lighthearted conversations and appreciate the author’s sense of humor. Despite the explanation the author provides in the Afterward, I would have liked to see a bit more attention given to E’s anger and disappointment at the disbelief of her family, especially her father and Jane and to the reconciliation of Jane and Lizzy upon revelation of Jane being the victim of spousal abuse. I realize that the negative gossip and spousal abuse were not uncommon during that period.
This book rated 4 instead of 5 stars for me because one moment the angst was described and in the next paragraph it was gone as if the change was immediate and complete.
January 22, 2020
Humor and Hankering
What if...
Darcy and Elizabeth did not meet until five years after the traditional time of P&P. Elizabeth had been falsely accused of improprieties and had to leave home to make her own way. As a result, she had become a very popular, but anonymous author. And then, what if they met as more mature, more experienced adults, complete with all the baggage that comes with dealing with all the challenges of life.
The saving grace of this book is the humor the author is able to infuse into what could have been a very maudlin story. While there are certainly some areas where events or actions do not seem to quite fit into the Regency period, I was able to ignore these slips because in many cases they helped move the story forward. Overall, one of the better Austen fan fiction books I have read recently.
What if...
Darcy and Elizabeth did not meet until five years after the traditional time of P&P. Elizabeth had been falsely accused of improprieties and had to leave home to make her own way. As a result, she had become a very popular, but anonymous author. And then, what if they met as more mature, more experienced adults, complete with all the baggage that comes with dealing with all the challenges of life.
The saving grace of this book is the humor the author is able to infuse into what could have been a very maudlin story. While there are certainly some areas where events or actions do not seem to quite fit into the Regency period, I was able to ignore these slips because in many cases they helped move the story forward. Overall, one of the better Austen fan fiction books I have read recently.
February 18, 2020
Avid Reader
I have read other books where Elizabeth is banished from Longbourn, but this one was the saddest. However, the banter that occurs between Darcy and Elizabeth makes for a lighter tone, and we meet a likeable Darcy who is smitten by Elizabeth the first time that he sees her. Traumatized due to being banished from Longbourn, Elizabeth has a difficult time trusting Darcy, especially since Jane followed her husband 's dictate that she cut Elizabeth from her life. Charlotte, however, finds a way to communicate with Elizabeth in spite of Collins ' disapproval. Elizabeth later discovers that Jane 's husband would beat her if she stood up for her own opinions. We have a HEA. I would have liked an epilogue.
I have read other books where Elizabeth is banished from Longbourn, but this one was the saddest. However, the banter that occurs between Darcy and Elizabeth makes for a lighter tone, and we meet a likeable Darcy who is smitten by Elizabeth the first time that he sees her. Traumatized due to being banished from Longbourn, Elizabeth has a difficult time trusting Darcy, especially since Jane followed her husband 's dictate that she cut Elizabeth from her life. Charlotte, however, finds a way to communicate with Elizabeth in spite of Collins ' disapproval. Elizabeth later discovers that Jane 's husband would beat her if she stood up for her own opinions. We have a HEA. I would have liked an epilogue.
February 16, 2021
Read it on Kindle Unlimited; bought it immediately after
This book is serious, angst-filled and the author creates a very strong and independent Elizabeth. As the story continues, you obtain a deep understanding of who she is and why she is. And Darcy(eyes rolling here) has been searching (and searching, and searching) for a wife, for years. He has a ‘list’ of must have attributes. :-( In addition to the humor (which is quite good) the emotional roller coaster is well done. I don’t think I’ve ever read a book containing such satisfying joy. Good job, Mr. Underwood! I don’t think I’ve reviewed this book before... but this was my third time through.
This book is serious, angst-filled and the author creates a very strong and independent Elizabeth. As the story continues, you obtain a deep understanding of who she is and why she is. And Darcy(eyes rolling here) has been searching (and searching, and searching) for a wife, for years. He has a ‘list’ of must have attributes. :-( In addition to the humor (which is quite good) the emotional roller coaster is well done. I don’t think I’ve ever read a book containing such satisfying joy. Good job, Mr. Underwood! I don’t think I’ve reviewed this book before... but this was my third time through.
May 10, 2021
Elizabeth is falsely accused of being a "fallen woman." That is bad enough, but her sisters have turned against her.
Bingley has married another woman who has passed away.
Everything is different, but everything remains the same, in the fact that Mr. Darcy falls in love with Elizabeth Bennet and does all he can to make her life easier.
Mr. Underwood weaves a remarkable tale. I just wish he could conquer his use of split infinitives: to be strictly enjoined, to not give, to definitely ask, to suddenly say, to constantly busy, to just talk, to also be, to only reply, to not happily bounce, to never marry, to never engage, etc., etc., etc.
Bingley has married another woman who has passed away.
Everything is different, but everything remains the same, in the fact that Mr. Darcy falls in love with Elizabeth Bennet and does all he can to make her life easier.
Mr. Underwood weaves a remarkable tale. I just wish he could conquer his use of split infinitives: to be strictly enjoined, to not give, to definitely ask, to suddenly say, to constantly busy, to just talk, to also be, to only reply, to not happily bounce, to never marry, to never engage, etc., etc., etc.
April 5, 2025
What I liked:
- the way Elizabeth is able to dismantle Darcy’s ridiculous list
- The story of how Elizabeth was forced to leave the country for London, and her reflections from returning 7 years later. These reflections on the traumatic and dreadful moments after the scandal with Wickham were emotional and moving.
- The story of Jane and E’s falling out and reconciliation
What I disliked:
- some things the author insisted on repeating, like “our heroine” and E referring to Wickham as “Wicky” (the latter gave me ear pain)
- Very fluffy banter once E&D are comfortable with each other (spoonfuls of sugar)
- Unrealistic aspects of the story… Darcy is a virgin at 34?
- the way Elizabeth is able to dismantle Darcy’s ridiculous list
- The story of how Elizabeth was forced to leave the country for London, and her reflections from returning 7 years later. These reflections on the traumatic and dreadful moments after the scandal with Wickham were emotional and moving.
- The story of Jane and E’s falling out and reconciliation
What I disliked:
- some things the author insisted on repeating, like “our heroine” and E referring to Wickham as “Wicky” (the latter gave me ear pain)
- Very fluffy banter once E&D are comfortable with each other (spoonfuls of sugar)
- Unrealistic aspects of the story… Darcy is a virgin at 34?
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