In all of my years of reading, this is only the second book I was unable to finish. I honestly tried, got as far as page 406, and then just couldn't go any further.
I am quite surprised, as this book got lots of high star reviews. But yeah, what can I say. This is the third book in the series, but I don't think I'm missing any of the story line by not having read any of the previous two books. I'm guessing that Jade, Maggie, Lucien etc must be the characters from the first two books as they jumped into the story pretty fully formed. That being said, there have been other characters in the book who get a disproportionate level of background info (for want of a better term) for relatively inconsequential roles in the plot/story line.
As for the plot. The first half wasn't too bad. It was a bit irritating that Jordan would keep chasing after a mysterious masked figure, thinking it was her cousin. We can maybe forgive her the first time (even if is idiotic, given the number of characters in the same costume. A fact she is repeatedly made aware of), but then she keeps on doing it... And then she keeps running off by herself, each time being chased/frightened/scared out of her fantastic sounding attire. Enough already!
Not every character I read is going to be perfect. In fact, some of the most enjoyably memorable characters are those who act in a totally different way than I would if I was in the same situation. The escapism is part of the reason why I love to read! But in this case it was just irritating. The character did not evolve, and just came across as flat. Given her career, I would have expected some spark. The supporting characters just felt tacked on, and didn't really add any voice. Admittedly things may all come together in the conclusion of the book, but if so nuts to that. Give me interesting characters with personalities throughout the whole book.
By the time I got to the second half of the book I found that the story loses all cohesion. We have these random info-dumps, primarily in the form of historical flashbacks. These were, quite frankly, confusing as all heck. They were these massive sections of text apparently randomly inserted in the book. And in at least one case it appeared that we were reading historical bit A, then historical bit B, then back to historical bit A. All of this with no warning. Now I'm all for interesting back story, but it need to be done in such a way that it fits IN with the current story line, not takes over. And it needs to be done so that we, the reader, knows what's happening. Give us small tidbits, not an entirely new storyline. And yes, there are a lot of successful stories which have alternating timelines/plot lines, but this isn't, and shouldn't be, one of those novels.
Now this could be a editing fail, and the punctuation and grammatical errors would certainly support this, but it still leaves me with a story I just could not finish.
So yes, this is a scathing (for me) review. Part of it is because this is written in anger after putting this book down unfinished. I don't like leaving things unfinished. But I also know that time is short, I don't get as much time to read these days as I used to, so the little time I have free to read will be better served being given to books that bring me enjoyment when I read. Raaah!