First, let me preface this by saying that this is the same book/story as the one that is titled "Daughter #13" by the same author that is listed as the last book of the Bad Babygirls Series. It's a good thing she changed the title because "Daughter #13" makes you think that someone in the story either has 13 daughters...OR that someone has 13 women who are his Submissives who call him "Father" (or in Devon's case, "Daddy")...neither of which is correct. Now, with that being said, I'll now go on to my review.
I really don't know wtf I just read, but it was no romance. This book was written entirely around the idea that the heroine (?), Devon Chase, was a hacker that hacked the wrong people and got discovered. Instead of allowing the FBI and/or CIA, and/or law enforcement to get ahold of her, the "hero", Reid Harrington, AKA "Father", who had been "stalking" her for weeks, breaks into her apartment and basically stages her "death", then proceeded to drug her, kidnap her, and then he makes her his "13th daughter" at his hidden military compound, where he and 12 other girls live and carry out questionable "missions" for the FBI, CIA, as well as private clientele who are willing to pay astronomical amounts of money to "one up" each other in whatever field or industry they work...from which it is said by one of the girls that some of them sometimes don't come back from alive. Each new girl is forcibly tattooed with their new name, which happens to be whatever number they are assigned, hence the number 13 for Devon's new name. None of the girls are allowed to keep the name they were born with. They are also forced into medical exams, they have their hair drastically cut short, etc. Anything that was identifiable before their kidnapping, they were no longer able to keep. They are then each trained for whatever special task they are good at (i.e., Devon being a hacker, another girl being an assassin, etc.), and self-defense. (For the record, let it be noted here that the author did have Reid, in a moment of introspection, say in his head, that there were also men at the compound, but that at one point he realized that women were more intelligent and/or easier to take and train in the ways he wanted. However, the one other man that was mentioned at the compound didn't go by a number. He actually had the name "Brad". So the men didn't seem to lose as much of their identity as the women when they were taken. This didn't seem quite right to me, but that's probably just me...right?)
What pissed me off the most about this book wasn't the fact that it wasn't a true
What pissed me off the most about this book wasn't the fact that it wasn't a true romance novella. No, that would have been fine...IF the author had done things a bit differently than what was written. What got me all up in arms was the fact that Reid Harrington, AKA "Father" or "Daddy" literally kidnapped Devon Chase, AKA 13, from her home, staged her death, and forced her to become part of his "daughters"...and then his submissive. If the author had allowed the heroine to make a choice as to whether or not she wanted to participate as one of his "recruits", then that might have made the story more palatable. But the fact that she did NOT write it that way, made it more like Stockholm syndrome than any true feelings or romance. Devon was forced into the lifestyle, forced into being a recruit and, although all of the sex was consensual, it was not truly romantic, especially the first time. Reid was sort of a rapey older man (15 years older than Devon) who didn't truly give her a choice in anything. (This is where the dub-con comes in. Although Devon seemed to want him, at that point, did she really have a choice in the matter, or had she just given in after all of the "training" she had been put through?)
Definitely NOT my cuppa tea. I was greatly disappointed in this author and this novella.