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62 pages, Paperback
First published October 19, 2019
“We both knew that it was real. We’d both seen her do things that only magic could have done.”Persephone Aim inherits the house and all the possessions of her deceased grandmother, a former stage magician, a formidable and controlling woman, and a “grubby hoarder”. The giant house is crammed with stuff top to bottom, with junk and creepy doll collection, and what seems to be occasional disembodied pieces of a strange “automaton” and a ghost jar. Persephone’s mother, estranged from the dead grandmother, is written out of the will but clearly is hoping to get something particular out of dead woman’s belongings and will stop at nothing to get what she wants. “Once again, I wondered if I might replace Grandmother as the opponent mother centered her life around.” Plus there are government agents looking for military artifacts.
“What was this house, if not a monument to held regrets? Glitter takes movement. By clutching it so hard, stuffing it into boxes, she’d taken away everything she loved about it.”
“Imagine all the detritus a person creates during a lifetime. I’m not talking about trash—food wrappers and old boxes—but objects that we interact with, that we make: grocery lists and summer postcards, books we scrawl notes in during school, journals and letters and drawings.
And photographs. God, the photographs!”
I sighed. “What do you want, mother?”To maintain the pace and the expectations of well-laid out opening, this book needed about 60-100 more pages to explore the interesting bits it promised. Or maybe the opening should have been axed to a few brief scenes, keeping it consistent with the way it ended, for a lovely short story with hints at a bigger picture. Either way, it would have worked better.
“For you to be happy. When have I wanted anything else?”
“Plenty of times.”
“Object after object, the beginning of the hoarding; the beginning of her guilt eroding the glitter.”But hey, it won the Nebula, which shows how little I know. Apparently there was something I failed to see here. And yes, the writing is quite good, no complaints there. But I stick by my assessment that although this is not a bad story, it’s also not as good as it should have been based on the expectations it sets for itself in its first half, and the rushed ending makes it underwhelming.