To be totally honest, I considered giving this one star. By the end of this book, I was very much over it, but it started off ok, and I wasn’t actively unhappy while reading most of it, so... two stars. However, I have a few strong complaints about this book.
First, the author seems more interested in world building than story telling, and the entirety of this fictional universe hinges upon a sort of utopian, zen-hippie, freelove philosophy, which is delivered in such a way to be more narratorial than a natural extension of the plot. This also causes the story to exhibit an unusual preoccupation with sex that is totally devoid of sexiness or significance. For example, the female goddess appears to each and every adult at one point in their lives to...sleep with them. Even worse, the (ahem) climax of the book includes a time traveling vision quest in which the main character lovingly watches his parents conceive him...to conclusion...
This universe also presents an outdated and thus unsatisfying form of feminism/equality, including such gems as societally required procreation (which is both regardless of sexual orientation and unfair to women who must carry to term twice whereas men must just “perform” once) and a world in which women alone wield Fire, or true magic, and are unrestrained by gender norms, yet the hero is still a man who somehow accesses this and has more power than any of them.
This book also seems to share a flaw with the last fantasy novel I read, His Majesty’s Dragon by Naomi Novik, in that the protagonist doesn’t face any true obstacles—neither of these main characters is an underdog, there are no real villains, and all hardships are quickly overcome. I will say that part of this problem was exacerbated by Duane’s writing style, which rarely allows for the building of tension, drama, or even expectations. Often, battles and feats of magic are effortlessly achieved by Herewiss on the first try with little explanation and only after the fact are readers informed that this was a particularly difficult or dangerous task.
Lastly, the emotional tones of this book were off for me. Only rarely does Herewiss have reactions that aren’t conscientious and empathetic (he’s very... evolved?), and when he does have an outburst of emotion it comes off as melodramatic because there was no foundation built for it. For example, two times Herewiss seemingly out of the blue considers suicide, with no build up and no fallout afterwards. The klaxon-like refrain of LOVE LOVE LOVE throughout the whole novel was particularly saccharine and self-important. While other reviewers have described this a “almost too sweet,” I would go a little further and say that it is cloying and childish.
As you can see...this was almost a 1 star for me.