2 stars ⭐⭐
This was… fine? But mostly boring. And unfortunately, the entire plot hinges on one massive misunderstanding that could have been cleared up with a single honest conversation.
The FMC is a spinster by choice. She stayed home to care for her father (a pastor) and her sister, who are genuinely good people, in their small farming community. She believes Will (the OM) has feelings for her but is too shy to act on them. So, being practical and logical, she comes up with a plan to be “caught” with him in a compromising situation to force a proposal.
Except… it’s not Will who finds her.
It’s the MMC.
The MMC is a moonshiner who sells whiskey illegally and isn’t respected in the community because of it. When they’re discovered together, marriage becomes the only option. Neither of them is thrilled at first, but both are willing to make it work. He’s hardworking and attractive; she’s capable, sensible, and very much a homemaker. There’s potential there.
And then… the misunderstanding happens.
The MMC overhears a conversation between the FMC and her sister about her having future children with the MMC. However, he misinterprets it completely and becomes convinced that she was already pregnant by another man and tricked him into marriage to cover it up.
Instead of asking a direct question, he withdraws. He feels betrayed and struggles with the idea of raising another man’s child. He grows cold and distant.
Meanwhile, the FMC is completely confused by his sudden change in behavior.
At one point, they do attempt to address it, but only in vague, indirect statements. The MMC says something like, “I know why you married me,” thinking about the supposed pregnancy. The FMC assumes he means her original plan to trap Will and replies along the lines of, “I’m sorry, but I had to.” They’re essentially having two entirely different conversations. For him, it confirms she was pregnant. For her, it confirms he’s angry about being her unintended choice.
And this goes on. And on. And on.
The misunderstanding drags until around 70-80% of the book.
On top of that, the FMC doesn’t know about the MMC’s illegal whiskey business, and he’s also being pursued by the authorities. When the pregnancy misunderstanding is finally cleared up, she then discovers his moonshining and leaves him over that.
They don’t truly reconcile until about 95–98% of the book. By then, I honestly didn’t care anymore. The emotional tension had been stretched too thin, and instead of angst, it just felt repetitive.
There was potential here, forced marriage, small-town judgment, moral conflict, but relying so heavily on miscommunication made the story frustrating rather than compelling.