Jack LaCroix breaks out of prison to prove he is innocent and was set-up by known criminal Cyrus Duke for the murder of his cop partner Evan McAllister. He heads straight to the house of Landis McAllister, Evan's sister, and the woman Jack once loved, insisting that she help him.
Oh, this was just terrible! Like many in this genre, the plotting is very thin. Very, very, very thin! I know the romance is supposed to be the focus, but I also like for there to be something actually going on, especially if the book is going to label itself as romantic suspense! Or at least for the emotional tension between H and h to make just a little bit of sense!
Not so here. Jack shows up at Landis' house demanding she help him clear his name and she's all "No, you killed my brother!" and he's all, "You're the only one who can help me." After 100 pages or so, this changes to him being all, "I can't put you at risk. You have to leave me alone," and she's all like, "No, I must help you! Don't shut me out!" Jack continues to come up with new plans in her presence, and when she insists on helping, he refuses. Rinse and repeat! By this stage, I was thinking - if you don't want her involved, Jack, why the everloving fuck did you go straight to her house when you broke out of prison?!? And if you don't want her to take part in your plans, why do you keep on telling them to her?!?
It just gets better. Realising she's nearing the end of her word count, Linda Castillo has Jack handily reveal he was pals with Duke's IT guy on the inside, and this guy told Jack all of the master passwords and codes for Duke's home systems.
Really, Jack? REEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAALLLLLLLLLYYYYYYYYY? You've had that knowledge with you THIS WHOLE TIME??? Landis even asks him about this, but he doesn't reply, presumably because Linda Castillo can't conceive of a believable way to make this plot contrivance not sound as utterly fucking stupid as it actually is!
So there you have it. I don't mind a slow-burn romantic suspense story. But when the character's actions make no sense and the plot is riddled with giant, stupid plot holes, I tend to get distracted by all the negatives.
It's hard to believe from this junk that Linda Castillo went on to write the Kate Burkholder crime books.