Grave Descend is a fast, easygoing read that delivers a decent amount of fun without asking too much in return. John Lange (which at this point everyone knows was an early pseudonym for Michael Crichton as he was writing pulp to pay his way through med school) clearly knows how to move a story along, and he wastes no time dropping the reader into a breezy tropical setting full of shady characters, suspicious motives, and underwater mysteries. The initial setup which involves investigating a recently sunken yacht under suspicious circumstances, is engaging and full of promise.
The writing style is straightforward and punchy, which makes it really easy to fly through in just a few sittings. It’s sardonic and to the point as Lange has a knack for keeping the action clear and the stakes understandable without getting bogged down in unnecessary detail. There’s also a nice sense of atmosphere throughout; the Caribbean backdrop feels real enough to picture without ever slowing the pace, but doesn’t get too weighted down with over-complicated descriptions.
However, despite the strong start, the story starts to lose some of its spark around the three-quarters mark. What initially feels like a slightly offbeat and clever mystery ends up turning into a very by-the-numbers pulp adventure. Plot developments become predictable, characters flatten out a bit, and it starts feeling like the story is just ticking off familiar genre boxes rather than building to something genuinely surprising or satisfying. Even the big reveal of the antagonist is more like a rip-off James Bond villain, though not quite as complex or interesting.
And speaking of characters, our main protagonist, McGregor, is likable enough, but doesn’t have much depth, and most of the supporting cast falls into fairly standard archetypes — the femme fatale, the shady employer, the tough-talking locals. There’s a feeling that the book could have done a little more with its premise if it had taken a few more risks, but then again, this wasn’t meant to be a novel that set the world on fire, and as one of Lange’s first novels, it’s to be expected.
Grave Descend is a solid choice. It’s a fun snapshot of early Crichton experimenting with pulp storytelling, even if it doesn’t fully capitalize on the potential it sets up. Just go in expecting a quick ride rather than something truly memorable.