A well-written book with quirky, interesting characters.
“St. Claire’s Blues” by Ili Mais relates multiple stories involving a boatload of quirky and interesting characters – a scheming cleaning woman and her pet pig, a confused and lost young man trying to find meaning in life, an aging hippie determined to speak to God, a clique of teenage bullies and the bike-riding misfits (the “Children of the Corn”) they delight in harassing, the long-serving sheriff and his fawning deputy, and a huge, deformed bear, just to name a few. Even the town of St. Claire, PA, is a well-written character in this engaging tale.
Initially, the book unfolds as a whodunit mystery involving the death of the town’s wealthiest resident, old man McKennen. As the characters were introduced randomly in chapter after chapter, I thought they were all supposed to be murder suspects. However, while McKennen serves as a thread to tie some of the stories together, investigating and solving a murder is not the point at all. I didn’t really get drawn in until I realized that the diverse characters are the heart and soul of the book, but once I got to that point, I could not put it down.
There is only one reason I didn’t give it a five-star rating, and that relates to uneven writing. Many passages are beautifully written, but the overall effort is marred by periodic typos and odd sentence structure. English is clearly not the author’s first language, and in telling the story she has a tendency to revert to an eastern European style of English in which articles (particularly that annoying word “the”) are omitted. The characters also frequently revert to a similar style of speaking. As one of many examples, the same woman who says, “Are you trying to correct our mistakes? … Is that what it’s all about?” immediately follows with “… you think we just gonna get …” While it’s not really fair to find fault with the author’s use of language in this way, her flawless writing throughout most of the book makes it clear that these lapses are either a conscious choice or a result of incomplete editing. Like it or not, indie writers are responsible for the entirety of their product, and if they choose not to engage professional editors, they bear the responsibility for editing lapses. (One final note relates to the name of the town. Is St. Claire a fictionalized version of the real town of St. Clair, PA, or is that another editing issue?)
All things considered, this is an excellent book and well worth a read. I highly recommend it.