So, I enjoyed this book. But not form the vey beginning.
But as the once famous Jack the Ripper said, let's go by parts.
After a prologue (which I will get into later) the book starts in medias res and we are, along with the MC, suddenly in the body of this Jay Wulf who is about to get his head blown off by some bandits in the desert. This is good because it gives us lots of questions that will hook us into the book: Why are we about to die? Where are we? Why are we here?
But all this questions could be answered with this one: Who is Jay Wulf?
(Now this is where I get to talk about the characters...)
So, Jay Wulf seems to be a complete bastard. He drinks, fucks, kills and just about seems to spend his life living one day at a time but he is nowhere to be found. And here lays one of the complains that I have with the book, Jay Wulf isn't really a character. At least not since the mindswap. The thing is that the mind of our MC comes from our Earth (or at least a version of it) and has replaced the OG Jay Wulf, altering both minds in the process.
Now, Set Styles here tells us that the mindswap has caused that the MC neither has clarity on his own previous life or OG Jay's because the two of them are "merging". That is good and all, but I think here the author has lost a potential point of drama and developing both Jays, because with this solution we don't get neither a character developmente from:
New Jay: he does not get to long for his lost life. Hell he doesn't even get to remember his name. I get what he was going for but I don't think it was a good decision.
OG Jay: He doesn't even stick around in the mind, the process only left a remnant of who he was but nothing that actually proactive for him to manifest himself, no thoughts left. Only memories (barely accesible), and that isn't enough for me to feel a character.
Which leaves us with the Jay Wulf that we have. Now I don't think he is a bad character, he has a personality; he is funny, cocky, horny as fuck, sometimes insecure about what has happened to him... And he has meaningful relationships with the people he is with. But I think a lot of potential has been lost for further enjoying him.
The other main problem I have with him is his inconsistence. I know what the author went for: because he is two different persons he has moments where he can be more OG or MC Jay, but it felt lees organic and more a tool for what the author felt like he should be acting. Nonetheless, it's a really difficult idea and I praise him for what he weas trying to go for.
What I can't praise is the next character.
Savvi: Now, I play around with her. I didn't like her, she is cocky, ironic, sarcastic and mean. And I grew tired of her the fifth time she answered the same way, insulting and always abrasive to the other character. And that's it, that's her for like 70% of the book. Now does she have anything that justifies it? Yes, a little cliché but I don't mind, I like that one where someone has gone through hell when younger and now is releasing all the hatred to the world. With her, though, felt obvious and didn't really justify her being a dick throughout the book.
Now, she did grow a little bit on me towards the end, when she had more going for her than just being abrasive to every one.
But I have one more complain of her, that permeates through the book. Sexuality.
So I think that one of the first things that we get to know of her is the shape of her boobs and her ass, (I don't even think that is until the third part that we get a chapter where her body is described to the reader) and that is not a thing exclusive to this character, every other female character is described with an inherent focus on her body while no male characters get the same treatment.
Now I know this could be explained because we see through Jay eyes and he is a horny motherfucker, but when the other female characters that are not integral to the history are hookers or get fucked by the MC. Well, then I don't know anymore beacause then we have a character that describes himself as nonbinary and hermaphrodite... And then a scene in which the MC starts to analize his penis (which can fucking bend??) and WTF is going on. I don't know, I can't wrap my head around this issue, I would need to keep reading more books of his to figure out this issue. But as of now I will consider it an issue.
Then we have Alexia.
The romantic interest of Jay Wulf doesn't have much going for her. It is, by no means, a bad character. But I think she needs to get more fleshed out (hope she just doesn't get to be the damsel in distress, because on the note of how the book ended maybe that's the path for her) given that the only major point she gets in the story is the death of her father and nothing much comes out of it.
As for the story, it ain't nothing new, doesn't reinvent the wheel. But it's fun and reads really well.
Now two more things to add:
I really enjoyed all the idea behind the cave, with the first inhabitants of the world and the lore. Really felt as something real and I loved that part.
I also missed some more description (I really loved the p
urple sky and the aesthetic it would give) of the world and the cultures, how the buildings are...
All around I think it's a good book with really promising concepts that could go really far, but some things prevent it from higher levels. I hope to keep reading and seeing the author improve.
Over all: 3.75.