“A Tale of Time City” is one of Jones’s best, and therefore about as good as it gets in children’s (YA? the heroine is 11) fantasy. Or possibly science fiction, because as the title suggests, it’s a time travel book: Time City is located, if not outside of time, then at least outside of the Earth’s time. Jones does an excellent job with the mechanics of time travel, taking a quite original approach to a well-worn plot device. For one thing, she discards the usual questions about whether or not time travel can change history, because time travel is no longer just a way to get from one time to another and history is not just what happened in the past. Instead, time travel is also, in a way, a place, Time City — all time travel starts in Time City, even if subsequent hops go from one moment in time to another — and from its point of view, history is Earth’s entire timeline, with Earth’s future and past existing simultaneously. Nonetheless, it is the case that some parts of history, the Unstable Eras, are always liable to change (it’s never explained why: this is just how things are). The First Unstable Era includes the twentieth century, as Jones immediately hints when we meet Vivian, our heroine, as she is being evacuated from London along with a trainload of other children in the early stages of WWII. Attentive and historically-minded readers will realize that something is up on the very first page of the book, when Jones tells us that this is happening in September 1939. But it’s not simply a question of dates changing: Jones will repeatedly return to the scene of children disembarking from the evacuation train to graphically illustrate just how unstable an Unstable Era can be. By contrast to the fluidity of history, Time City appears to be fixed, simply because it becomes Vivian’s, and so also the reader’s, frame of reference. Also, there are the time ghosts, which are ghosts, but not necessarily of dead people. Time ghosts can be formed simply by repetition — do the same thing at the same time of day often enough in Time City, and a ghost of you will do it at that time forever — but also sometimes by a single event of extreme emotion or importance. Crucially, the latter type of time ghost can be formed by an event that is still in Time City’s future: the ability to see previews of events which are yet to come makes that future seem to be stable. This remains the case even though the actions of the time ghosts themselves don’t come close to giving away the plot: neither the characters or the reader can understand what the scenes mean ahead of time. Which means that the history of Time City (and the plot of the novel) is unstable (as is explained later in the book) in one respect, namely that nobody knows what’s going to happen next.
Nonetheless, the fact that she switches to Time City’s view of history is key to Jones avoiding a classic portal fantasy trap — even if the portal here is a time gate maintained by a Time Patrol, the novel still has the bones of a portal fantasy — in which the fantasy world that the protagonist visits ends up being, like Narnia, merely a play-world in which nothing genuinely meaningful happens. In this novel, it’s quite the opposite: as England in 1939 accumulates changes which make it less and less like the historical one, or even the not-quite-historical version that Vivian is used to, it starts to seem much less real than Time City does. Vivian’s quest is to save Time City, of course, but that’s not because the world she comes from doesn’t need saving, or is too real for a child to save: instead, it’s because her world is beyond saving, with the book’s final visit to England in 1939 revealing a scene that Vivian finds only barely recognizable. Which might be too much for a child to handle, except that Vivian is already primed for this, in a way. After all, the setting that Jones keeps returning to is not Vivian’s home in London, but a strange town in the country that she’s never been to before. Even before the story proper starts, Vivian is perfectly well aware that it’s quite possible that she will never see her home again: she’s being sent away from it so that she can escape even if it’s destroyed. In a sense, then, the rest of the novel simply extends her original journey: she goes much further than she originally planned, but the first step is not through the portal but simply onto the train.
Her flight from home also furnishes an excellent pretext for her presence in Time City: she claims to be Jonathan’s cousin, conveniently also named Vivian — Jonathan being the boy whose mistaken intervention is the reason she ends up there in the first place — a girl whose parents are posted to Vivian’s time to keep an eye on developments in the Unstable Era, and who is, like the natives, now being evacuated thanks to the start of the war. The resulting scene, in which Vivian lies as little as possible while also never telling the truth, is one of many brilliant scenes in the book. Her discomfort at telling all those lies, and her conviction that they are nonetheless necessary, are beautifully depicted, and will win the reader over to her side, assuming that hasn’t happened already. Jonathan is also quite sympathetic, his tendency to create problems thanks to overconfidence notwithstanding. And Jones is very good at showing why the children feel that it is necessary to band together to keep their secret from the adults, even though the adults are friendly, well-meaning, and generally understanding. The plot itself seems to be a classic search for the magic thingummies that will save the day — there are four of them, each in an Unstable Era, so the search takes the children to various points in history, mainly in our future — but Jones throws in a twist here: the search keeps failing. To be precise, it is forestalled: others are also searching, and doing a better job of it. It’s clear that those others must be the bad guys, but not clear who they are until the end, when all is revealed in the highly suspenseful last few chapters and it turns out that the important clues were in the lectures that Vivian received from her tutor (one accepted as a Time Cityite, she is naturally immediately enrolled in school). In the meantime, the book alternates between adventures in history and a different kind of adventures in Time City, as Vivian attempts to hide who she really is. The result is a novel that’s engrossing and imaginative, and, because it’s Jones, wonderfully written and often quite funny.