This was the first completed fic by Diasterisms that I read. I liked it, but I must say, there's two different levels to my review.
The first is reviewing this as a fanfiction. Now, I'm not overly into things like AUs that stray so far from the canon universe--after all, why not just make it an original book then? I feel like this is somewhat in that category; sure, the names are Star Wars and the archetypes are broadly there, but this is far from the universe of lightsabers and the Force. So as a fanfic, this is eh for me.
But, second, there's considering this as a *story*. And as a story, I believe this works VERY well. It's a tale of old and new Hollywood, of grappling with fame and consequences, of dealing with family legacy--and it does that all in a gripping fashion that had me finish it basically in one sitting. Adding greatly to this is the fact that the author CLEARLY knows her Old Hollywood stuff; I LOVED all the references!
So, if you want a nice romance about Hollywood old and new, READ THIS. Even if you don't like Star Wars you'll like it; as I said, it is basically completely disconnected from Star Wars so you can more or less ignore it.