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Fallen World
Xavier’s world burns. Separated from friends and family, he is rescued by a mysterious special forces team. However, as events unfold and factions start to reveal themselves, Xavier learns the war he has become caught up in is not as simple as he first thought.
One family. Three sides. Bloodshed born from a secret that could topple empires.
One family. Three sides. Bloodshed born from a secret that could topple empires.
240 pages, Kindle Edition
Published July 17, 2019
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August 16, 2019
When I started reading this book I got frustrated. The book needs a line editor! Grammatical issues, word repetitions, pronoun confusion, all of those things made it hard to read and took me right out of the story. I’d often have to track back and re-read a section in order to understand what the hell happened.
However, somewhere around 20% into the book, I got totally lost in the story. So, either the grammar improved or I stopped noticing it. The next time I noticed the little percentage on the Kindle was when I was 74% done.
Overall, the story is good, the characters are decent, the world is relatively interesting, and it is an easy read. However, there are issues with grammar, a few story point, and action scenes. So I guess I’ll have to give it a “Meh”.
However, somewhere around 20% into the book, I got totally lost in the story. So, either the grammar improved or I stopped noticing it. The next time I noticed the little percentage on the Kindle was when I was 74% done.
Overall, the story is good, the characters are decent, the world is relatively interesting, and it is an easy read. However, there are issues with grammar, a few story point, and action scenes. So I guess I’ll have to give it a “Meh”.
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