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When A Woman's Fed Up Box Set: Complete Series
The moment Mia met the infamous Seantrel she felt as though her life was now finally complete. He came along and smoothly swept her off of her feet as if he was a broom made of love. In her heart and mind she was convinced that no woman could ask for a better man to spend the rest of their life with. His charm was irresistible, some would say hypnotizing. Simply put he was the man of her dreams. However; Mia was soon in for the rudest of awakenings when her life began to speed down the highway to hell with no rear view mirror. It was one horrible heart break after another. She didn't think things could get any worse until she was betrayed by the one person that she would have done anything for. The lies, secrets and deception became too much. Will Mia forgive and forget or will she seek out revenge for her broken heart? See what happens when one woman has reached her breaking point. The complete series of When A Woman’s Fed Up.
483 pages, Kindle Edition
Published June 15, 2019
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November 14, 2020
I liked the characters in the book and the storyline. The parts I did not like -- (1) there were to many grammatical errors; and (2) the sex scenes were starting to repeat themselves. I think the writer should definitely focus more on the storyline and not so much on the sex. It made Mia appear to be somewhat whorish, which I do not was the writer's intentions. Other than that it was a good read. I was done with Tony, he turned out to be a creep and Donovan what was wrong with him. He was totally stalking Mia; however, I think Mia should have told him, she did not like the way he pleased her sexually. I hope the writer's proofreader will do a better job.
September 8, 2024
This series was so damn good, it had me on an emotional rollercoaster from chapter one! Mia had me deep in my feelings, and I was rooting for things to get better for her the whole time, but it seemed like life just kept "life-ing." She just couldn't catch a break!
Sentrel, though? He was the definition of an F-boy—there’s no way any D could be that good to have these women acting like this! His character really tested my patience.
The ending? Wow. It was nothing like I expected, but I’m honestly pleased with how it all turned out. This series kept me hooked from start to finish! Reading for the next series!
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September 8, 2024
Buckle Up this one is a wild ride
This series was so damn good, it had me on an emotional rollercoaster from chapter one! Mia had me deep in my feelings, and I was rooting for things to get better for her the whole time, but it seemed like life just kept "life-ing." She just couldn't catch a break!
Sentrel, though? He was the definition of an F-boy—there’s no way any D could be that good to have these women acting like this! His character really tested my patience.
The ending? Wow. It was nothing like I expected, but I’m honestly pleased with how it all turned out. This series kept me hooked from start to finish!
This series was so damn good, it had me on an emotional rollercoaster from chapter one! Mia had me deep in my feelings, and I was rooting for things to get better for her the whole time, but it seemed like life just kept "life-ing." She just couldn't catch a break!
Sentrel, though? He was the definition of an F-boy—there’s no way any D could be that good to have these women acting like this! His character really tested my patience.
The ending? Wow. It was nothing like I expected, but I’m honestly pleased with how it all turned out. This series kept me hooked from start to finish!
March 26, 2024
Errors
The story line was good but the grammatical errors, typographical errors, and just the multiple mistakes made it very hard to read. For example, in one line "they are going to the Bahamas for their honeymoon" and the next line "they are going to Hawaii". In the same sentence a person is called 2 different names. There is no evidence of an editor or simple proof reading before publishing. This could have been a great read but became tedious because of the numerous errors.
The story line was good but the grammatical errors, typographical errors, and just the multiple mistakes made it very hard to read. For example, in one line "they are going to the Bahamas for their honeymoon" and the next line "they are going to Hawaii". In the same sentence a person is called 2 different names. There is no evidence of an editor or simple proof reading before publishing. This could have been a great read but became tedious because of the numerous errors.
March 2, 2020
Book Was Good Grammar was horrible
The book was really good and I’m no English teacher but the grammar was nerve wrecking. Almost hard to enjoy when every other word is wrong and character names change... This is poor quality for me. I’m not reading Isaiah story and Dante name changed to Corey then back to Dante... To me when writing I understand grammatical error but the entire book was full of it... This needs work but story line was good
The book was really good and I’m no English teacher but the grammar was nerve wrecking. Almost hard to enjoy when every other word is wrong and character names change... This is poor quality for me. I’m not reading Isaiah story and Dante name changed to Corey then back to Dante... To me when writing I understand grammatical error but the entire book was full of it... This needs work but story line was good
March 8, 2020
Good Storyline
This book or rather the series has the potential to be great. However, the editor did a piss poor job. Incorrect spelling, poor grammar wrong phrasing using the wrong characters names in most cases. In addition I have a per piece with writers using so much profanity when your vocabulary should be extensive. Overall if you like ghetto drama the storyline is great and this is the book for you.
This book or rather the series has the potential to be great. However, the editor did a piss poor job. Incorrect spelling, poor grammar wrong phrasing using the wrong characters names in most cases. In addition I have a per piece with writers using so much profanity when your vocabulary should be extensive. Overall if you like ghetto drama the storyline is great and this is the book for you.
March 26, 2020
One of the worst book/series I've ever wasted my time reading.
To release such a poorly edited book is a shame and an embarrassment. The premise started out well, but by the second or third chapter it fell apart. Misspelled words throughout, character names incorrect. Hire someone or ask a friend or relative to read your work before you out it out there. The only saving grace for me is that this series was FREE!
To release such a poorly edited book is a shame and an embarrassment. The premise started out well, but by the second or third chapter it fell apart. Misspelled words throughout, character names incorrect. Hire someone or ask a friend or relative to read your work before you out it out there. The only saving grace for me is that this series was FREE!
December 31, 2020
This was a good series
I really enjoyed reading a just Mia and her many men. She was just like lost women liking for her king she just was so in love with love she allowed things that she should have been running from. Sad that she had to suffer before getting to her place of joy but that life isn't it? The only thing that was really annoying were the many typos and grammatical errors that just fkd up the flow of the story. Other than that tha was a good read !
Happy reading
I really enjoyed reading a just Mia and her many men. She was just like lost women liking for her king she just was so in love with love she allowed things that she should have been running from. Sad that she had to suffer before getting to her place of joy but that life isn't it? The only thing that was really annoying were the many typos and grammatical errors that just fkd up the flow of the story. Other than that tha was a good read !
Happy reading
March 13, 2021
Great book but...
This book is a greatttt book. Excellent read will keep you engaged. I’m soooo disappointed in all the typo mistakes. Too me it was pretty bad. Some things I couldn’t figure out and in a few chapters they were talking about Dante but was using Donavan name. As and artist you have to critique your work. But I’m on to the next book. Like I said it’s and excellent read and you are a great Author 👍🏾
This book is a greatttt book. Excellent read will keep you engaged. I’m soooo disappointed in all the typo mistakes. Too me it was pretty bad. Some things I couldn’t figure out and in a few chapters they were talking about Dante but was using Donavan name. As and artist you have to critique your work. But I’m on to the next book. Like I said it’s and excellent read and you are a great Author 👍🏾
June 8, 2021
This series was amazing. Always kept me guessing . I would've never thought Mia would have had to kill Donovan, but at the same time he just couldn't get it through his head that Mia didnt want him. I feel that Donovan would have killed me or worse everyone that she truelly loved. Just because she dont want him. I hate Mia had to go through all that drama and the car wreck. That was the saddest part of the book to me.
September 26, 2021
A lot of ups & downs
This series was good seanrele was a straight up hoe is didn't ever think Mia was go find her way back to Dente I thought he was go be a problem for her instead of Donovan. Donovan was just plain thirsty desperate & sick in the head. I know Lashon wasn't about sit from the start. I also thought honey was going to be stalking Mia also. The end blew me away with Isaiah past catching up to him. I can't wait to read this & Mianica's story
This series was good seanrele was a straight up hoe is didn't ever think Mia was go find her way back to Dente I thought he was go be a problem for her instead of Donovan. Donovan was just plain thirsty desperate & sick in the head. I know Lashon wasn't about sit from the start. I also thought honey was going to be stalking Mia also. The end blew me away with Isaiah past catching up to him. I can't wait to read this & Mianica's story
January 11, 2023
enjoyed this series! Seantrel was a straight sex addict in my opinion! That’s all he did! His mistresses made life hell for Mia because of him! It’s always the ones closest to you that hurt you! I would never have thought that Donovan and Tony would turn out to be the way they were! Dante got his girl back in the end! Karma was served well! I look forward to reading more by this author! A new fan!
January 11, 2020
Very good read. Kept my attention. Read whole series in less than a week.
Again very good book. But spell check grammar and consistency needed. I was so much into the story line I over looked it. Tony was Toby from one sentence to the next. Gone was used as “go on” throughout the entire book. Words misspelt or completely left out.
Again very good book. But spell check grammar and consistency needed. I was so much into the story line I over looked it. Tony was Toby from one sentence to the next. Gone was used as “go on” throughout the entire book. Words misspelt or completely left out.
June 12, 2020
Potential
First of all this book has really good points. It's a good read. I gave 2 stars because of the grammar issues and the words used. I knew what the author ment but it was still nerve wrecking. Some name changed. It was just a mess. Get a proofreading done before you put another book out
First of all this book has really good points. It's a good read. I gave 2 stars because of the grammar issues and the words used. I knew what the author ment but it was still nerve wrecking. Some name changed. It was just a mess. Get a proofreading done before you put another book out
August 5, 2020
Suspense at its best
This book had me on the edge of my seat beginning to end!!! It was well put together and I could visualize the story in my mind. My only critique would be that sometimes the wrong names were written so I had to re-read some parts to make It make sense. But I would definitely read it again!!!!
This book had me on the edge of my seat beginning to end!!! It was well put together and I could visualize the story in my mind. My only critique would be that sometimes the wrong names were written so I had to re-read some parts to make It make sense. But I would definitely read it again!!!!
May 10, 2021
Please get a proofreader !
The story was ok, what ruined it for me was the writer’s misuse and misspelling of so many words. The writer also seemed to forget which character was named what, for example when Mia shot Donovan dead, the next two sentences had Donovan sitting on the couch with her, she meant Dante. I am seriously thinking about getting a refund for this title.
The story was ok, what ruined it for me was the writer’s misuse and misspelling of so many words. The writer also seemed to forget which character was named what, for example when Mia shot Donovan dead, the next two sentences had Donovan sitting on the couch with her, she meant Dante. I am seriously thinking about getting a refund for this title.
April 2, 2022
When A Woman’s Fed Up Box Set: Complete Series
This book was a very good read. You had a lot of drama, excitement, and love scenes in your book. I did not find a dull moment in this book. You wrote about real life situations. This book kept my attention the entire time I started to read. There was a lot of grammar errors in the book but the storyline was awesome…
This book was a very good read. You had a lot of drama, excitement, and love scenes in your book. I did not find a dull moment in this book. You wrote about real life situations. This book kept my attention the entire time I started to read. There was a lot of grammar errors in the book but the storyline was awesome…
January 8, 2020
When a woman’s Fed Up Box Set: Complete Series
Wow wow what a great story. Loved it from start to finish. Now I can’t wait for the next series. Thank you. It was my first time reading your books and I loved it.
Wow wow what a great story. Loved it from start to finish. Now I can’t wait for the next series. Thank you. It was my first time reading your books and I loved it.
May 13, 2020
When a woman is fed up
Mia went threw a lot. I fell in love with her I am glad she ended up with her man. Them silly crazy chicks need to go threw what they did, can not let a man drive you crazy.
Mia went threw a lot. I fell in love with her I am glad she ended up with her man. Them silly crazy chicks need to go threw what they did, can not let a man drive you crazy.
June 1, 2020
Good story line.
However it was way too many grammatical errors for a published book series. It was definitely difficult to read. I would like to read more books by this author so that I can create a more positive opinion.
However it was way too many grammatical errors for a published book series. It was definitely difficult to read. I would like to read more books by this author so that I can create a more positive opinion.
June 21, 2020
JUICY!
Mia definitely deserved some happiness. Her husband Seantrel was the worst white ever. He was so disrespectful. Her boyfriend after The Doctor was a good guy until he was not. Dante good for him. Oh but what the real tea is Mianca and Donovan.
Mia definitely deserved some happiness. Her husband Seantrel was the worst white ever. He was so disrespectful. Her boyfriend after The Doctor was a good guy until he was not. Dante good for him. Oh but what the real tea is Mianca and Donovan.
December 31, 2020
Errors!!
This book could of been a 5 star if it didn't have so many errors. Names of characters are mixed up alot and you have to try to determine what name should be there. It took away from the book.
This book could of been a 5 star if it didn't have so many errors. Names of characters are mixed up alot and you have to try to determine what name should be there. It took away from the book.
April 30, 2021
Wow
Wow wow what a crazy and loving set of books. It’s crazy how it takes you going through hell and back to find your way back to the arms of your first love. I’m so happy Mia is finally happy and with someone that really loves her.
Wow wow what a crazy and loving set of books. It’s crazy how it takes you going through hell and back to find your way back to the arms of your first love. I’m so happy Mia is finally happy and with someone that really loves her.
June 4, 2021
Great read
I loved this series and the book was good from beginning to the very end. However I only gave 4 stars due to all the errors that annoyed the hell out of me other than all the errors (and there were a lot) the book was good
I loved this series and the book was good from beginning to the very end. However I only gave 4 stars due to all the errors that annoyed the hell out of me other than all the errors (and there were a lot) the book was good
July 19, 2021
Good Read
I really enjoyed this series and was going to give it a 5 star ⭐️ because it’s my first read with this young lady. Part 3 girlfriend someone forgot to proof read that one for you. A lot of mistakes. But GOOD READ JUST WATCH THE TYPOS IN 3 😎
I really enjoyed this series and was going to give it a 5 star ⭐️ because it’s my first read with this young lady. Part 3 girlfriend someone forgot to proof read that one for you. A lot of mistakes. But GOOD READ JUST WATCH THE TYPOS IN 3 😎
February 25, 2022
The grammatical errors are horrendous! I’m on page 84 and CANNOT- smh
Sis, get a professional editor/proofreader, because your storyline is excellent and you’re really talented. It shouldn’t be this hard to get through a good book!
Sis, get a professional editor/proofreader, because your storyline is excellent and you’re really talented. It shouldn’t be this hard to get through a good book!
April 2, 2023
One night
I was in the process of reading part one last night thru this morning I completed the series. Loved the story & the conclusion and lead in to the next story. Only complaint part three could have been edited better.
I was in the process of reading part one last night thru this morning I completed the series. Loved the story & the conclusion and lead in to the next story. Only complaint part three could have been edited better.
July 21, 2024
It was ok.....
The story was decent.
It would have been better if it SAS condensed into fewer books.
Also slightly confusing due to the time!INE in the books going back and forth.
The story was decent.
It would have been better if it SAS condensed into fewer books.
Also slightly confusing due to the time!INE in the books going back and forth.
November 26, 2024
The storyline was good
This could have been a best seller but there were too many grammatical errors, which almost made it a tough read. But again, a good storyline just hire an editor....
This could have been a best seller but there were too many grammatical errors, which almost made it a tough read. But again, a good storyline just hire an editor....
February 21, 2020
Great read good story line loved how the women all came to find themselves.
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