The Church in the Woods

by Seith Vale [Vngel]

A technician is sent to assist a client at an old church deep in the woods.

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Seith Vale, also known by the screen name Vngel W. is an author inspired to craft stories to fully immerse readers into another world. His favorite genres include Science Fiction, Horror, and Adventure.

Expect to see many world-building tales intertwined among the mentioned fields, and hopefully, you’ll wish to explore them with him.

So, relax, open your mind, and drift away from this world into another.

Genres: Horror, Audiobook, Horror Thriller

119 pages, ebook

First published January 1, 2019

Reviews

[Jack · Rating 2 out of 5]

At the time of posting, this has 11 ratings, with an average rating of 3.09 stars. As I contribute my rating of 2 stars, I single-handedly lower the overall rating to 2.99 stars.

Kings crave and gods covet this kind of power.

Listened to this via Creepcast. Story was sufficiently weird (good) but still done in an overwhelmingly predictable way (bad).
The 13 year olds who write these stories really need to stop making the same writing mistakes and start making new ones.

[♡•☆Mint☆•♡ · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.75⭐️
Pretty interesting. Lots of twits and turns. The ending was so unexpected and the way it all came together wow

[Taylor Seiverd · Rating 2 out of 5]

i listened to this through CreepCast with Papa Meat & Wendigoon.

there is a lot to unpack here. it was…. okay. the beginning was good, the set up was good. but the execution… not good. it’s below average for a horror short story.

also, 50 as elderly??? how old was the writer?😂

i think the premise was good. the author has a great idea for a plots i just believe if certain aspects of the story was altered, it would be so much better

[Ruth Bryant · Rating 3 out of 5]

I liked the idea, the writing style was good, but overall I think me having read so many wood horror stories kind of made me a little exhausted after reading this. It was good, but not really for me. Would def recommend though.

[Zander · Rating 1 out of 5]

The first part was really good and the set up was there, everything after that was a complete downward spiral that was overly predictable.

[Phyllis · Rating 5 out of 5]

This is a very good book. I usually do not care for horror, but since this was a free audio book thought I’d give it a listen and am glad I did. Plenty of twists make this book an excellent read or listen. I was rapt at attention to the end. Take a listen here: https://podcasts.apple.com/us/podcast...

[Ryan Shaw · Rating 3 out of 5]

There’s a good skeleton to this story, but it needed several additional drafts in order for it to truly shine. It sounds like the author was in high school when he wrote this so I’m sure he’s improved his craft since then.

[Eurydactyl · Rating 3 out of 5]

A great setup and a great concept, but the ending left me unsatisfied. I’d love to read a reimagining of this story, it is so dreamy and suspenseful, very gothic themes, and yet there’s something sci-fi about it all too.

[mabez · Rating 2 out of 5]

CreepCast listen!

So why was the pregnant lady British?

[Courtney · Rating 2 out of 5]

Really interesting ideas, but needed to be fleshed out more with a stronger ending.

[Katie White · Rating 1 out of 5]

This started well/ had potential then went straight into a train wreck.