Age-gap, any form of boyfriends dad, friends dad, dad’s best friend, it’s my all time favorite trope. I no doubt have some daddy issues but whatever. So that’s obviously what drew me in but this one ...
The girl is too immature, she acts babyish and lacks any other form of personality. The guy is a carbon copy of every dad’s best friend, with nothing else to describe him.
The affection they have for one another is stilted and unbelievable. And than when they both express love for one another, I don’t buy it. Not one bit!
The only thing that can save this novella is good sex. And they can’t even admit they want each other. Even though not a week prior she opened her robe for you and left her dirty panties under your pillow. What do you want a goddam embossed invitation?
OMFG just spit it out. God, this is getting tedious. I mean holy crap you took her to your apartment. Either lead, follow or get the hell out of the way! 🤦🏼♀️
How convenient that you fell in love with her on her eighteenth birthday. Give me a break.
After page after page of kissing and utter bs ... I’m calling it. DNF 49%