More of the same
There's nothing inherently wrong with the book. The story is fine, the pacing is good, and the grammar and spelling are on point. I just don't really care for Vall's writing style. Lots of repeat phrases, repeat concepts, repeat actions. If we were to remove the repeats and callbacks, the story would be a good 10% shorter.
As for this story itself, it was fine. MC added a new woman to his 'collection' and the rebuilding if the city continues. I was a little disappointed at how straightforward and obvious some of the story points were, but I'm invested at this point, so I will continue reading the series.