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Rule #10- Remember, Daddy knows best.
194 pages, ebook
First published July 22, 2019
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Zero stars, why goodreads?
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I don’t want to be mean but really, this was like a 𝙗𝙖𝙙 fan-fiction. And I say bad because I have read some good ones.
Some of the things that irked me, so you can judge, were:
⌧The first chapters we get bombed with endless secondary characters’ names. Like a lot names. I know this is a series but this is supposed to be a standalone, why would I have to know these guys? You lost me there.
⌧In this surreal planet everyone was happy and expecting or already had kids. 𝙀𝙫𝙚𝙧𝙮𝙤𝙣𝙚.
⌧The protagonists have more conversations with themselves than with others. It’s an endless internal dialogue.
⌧There was a lot of describing. And let’s no talk when the problem is choosing clothes or makeup. It was unnecessary.
⌧Blake is 29 and River 26, but he calls him a kid when they meet. ❔
⌧I have nothing against gays wanting to be “girly” but I’m getting annoyed that people portray gays just like that, like this is the only way gays are supposed to be. 𝘐𝘵’𝘴 𝘨𝘦𝘵𝘵𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘰𝘭𝘥. If I didn’t know this was MM, I’d have thought River was a woman.
⌧Another stereotype I hate is that 𝘢𝘭𝘭 𝘨𝘢𝘺𝘴 𝘢𝘳𝘦 𝘱𝘳𝘰𝘮𝘪𝘴𝘤𝘶𝘰𝘶𝘴. They can enjoy their sex life however they want like everyone else, but it seems MM books (at least the ones I have read lately) tend to portray them like starved sex animals deliberately or not. He was just what I was in the mood for. A muscle bear of a man with dark hair and a close-cut beard. Yummy.
⌧And finally, this was too cliché for my liking. It was almost a teenage drama.I bit my lower lip and ran my eyes up and down his body. “It’s Blake right?” I asked in my sultriest tone.