This was not entirely to my liking. First of all, each chapter was told by one of the two main protagonists, which, apart from the fact that I do not generally like stories narrated in the 1st person singular, interrupted the flow of the narration. You had Meg and her telling of what was happening, and her thoughts, then new chapter, and Stratton going on with a completely different angle. It always took me a couple of lines to catch on, although I saw it was the other person narrating now, so it did take quite a chunk out of my reading pleasure. As for first person singular: what difference would it have made to have an unseen narrator tell the story, from the viewpoint of either Meg or Stratton? I personally think it would have been a bonus to this book.
Then: the protagists and side characters - all of the with quite a burden from the past, but all of them, to me at least, seemed a bit artificial, in lack of a better word. It's as if the author took a pinch of this character type, a grain of that, and a drop of something else, and stirred to have Mr or Mrs Perfect - despite the characters themselves denying they were perfect. They did not have personalities, if that makes sense.
The story itself, like a fairytale, Cinderella in this case, but again, even parts of the plot seemed to be superfluous (what did Stratton's differently coloured eyes have to do with anything, and why point them out ever so often? Why on earth was this email Meg sent mentioned so often, as I do not think it had such a great influence on the story, really.)
The narration as such was good (with the exception of the aforementioned chapter breaks in narrator), very fluent, good choice of words; pity the author ruined this for me by choosing the style she did.
All in all, it was okay to read, I would even tend to "likeable", but nothing that would entice me to get more of this author, or in this series.