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Escape From Happy Palace: A Malaysian Murder Mystery
Mei Mei is a runaway masseuse in Kuala Lumpur’s gritty underbelly of Chow Kit. Once the rising star of Happy Palace, she now has nothing but the clothes on her back and her side of a story: one that involves a massage parlor trick called The Leap Of The Dragon...
…and a dead man on her massage bed.
The news reaches sharp-tongued trans prostitute Joy and short-tempered hawker Longkang Loga through an unlikely messenger, and the race to save a fellow citizen of the streets begins. But before they can free Mei Mei from a fate she doesn’t deserve, they first need to free themselves of their fears.
…and a dead man on her massage bed.
The news reaches sharp-tongued trans prostitute Joy and short-tempered hawker Longkang Loga through an unlikely messenger, and the race to save a fellow citizen of the streets begins. But before they can free Mei Mei from a fate she doesn’t deserve, they first need to free themselves of their fears.
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Published March 1, 2020
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June 5, 2020
I think the storyline is too loose and very simple for something major about to happen with a little twist of comedy. For some reason after finished the book, I think perhaps there's a continuation based on the flashback?
But as for now, I would like to see more action put into the scene. Make it a bit exaggerating. Give it a little out of a box. What another possibility that could occur after the fled? What happens to the body? Do the cops not followed up on the case? Do they close up and get on with it just like it never happens. There are so many things to question. Because judging from the title, escape should imply something big.
Well, what the author intends to do is not what I imagine but I'll take that as it is.
So when a group of normal people, like you and me, combines their energy to undertake the police job definitely worth something to applause. Because it takes guts to do the right thing and by bringing forwards things that don't usually receive much cover make it more exciting. Just because it happens in a place that had bad names doesn't mean that it's alright to disperse the matter. And that teamwork without prejudice is what we all need to build.
However, there are things I don't find comfortable as it distracts me from focusing. I dislike the choice of words as it could be too vulgar and the number of inside jokes, and what I particularly dislike is, ‘get a room'. That could go straight to my hateful phrase ever! Why? Because I can't consider it as a small light matter. If it's directed to a proper husband and wife, then it's okay to giggle but it's not. But yes, I could understand it if the purpose was to make it tally with the place setting. It's just me being uncomfortable.
Still, I feel that the author is doing a cool job and could create more awesomeness in the future, as it's too early to decide since it's only his first book. So keep on writing!
But as for now, I would like to see more action put into the scene. Make it a bit exaggerating. Give it a little out of a box. What another possibility that could occur after the fled? What happens to the body? Do the cops not followed up on the case? Do they close up and get on with it just like it never happens. There are so many things to question. Because judging from the title, escape should imply something big.
Well, what the author intends to do is not what I imagine but I'll take that as it is.
So when a group of normal people, like you and me, combines their energy to undertake the police job definitely worth something to applause. Because it takes guts to do the right thing and by bringing forwards things that don't usually receive much cover make it more exciting. Just because it happens in a place that had bad names doesn't mean that it's alright to disperse the matter. And that teamwork without prejudice is what we all need to build.
However, there are things I don't find comfortable as it distracts me from focusing. I dislike the choice of words as it could be too vulgar and the number of inside jokes, and what I particularly dislike is, ‘get a room'. That could go straight to my hateful phrase ever! Why? Because I can't consider it as a small light matter. If it's directed to a proper husband and wife, then it's okay to giggle but it's not. But yes, I could understand it if the purpose was to make it tally with the place setting. It's just me being uncomfortable.
Still, I feel that the author is doing a cool job and could create more awesomeness in the future, as it's too early to decide since it's only his first book. So keep on writing!
May 29, 2020
The plot is very simple. Too simple. There is one problem and it is solved. Not a complex problem. Maybe I am used to read psychogical thriller. To be honest, if minus the 18sx. It is a simple read for teens. An hour read for me.
May 29, 2020
Actual rating: 3.5 stars
Escape From Happy Palace is a short story about a Murder Mystery that happened in my country, Malaysia. I understand that this is a very short story about murder, there’s not a lot of events happened. As a mystery/thriller book lover I could say that the author did a good job on writing this book.
The plot is simple and easy to follow. The dates stated on every chapter made it easy to understand what’s going on. As I said because of this book is like a short story, there’s a less on backstory of the characters. I always loved that in books. I also liked the settings and the places mentioned in this book. The usage of Malaysian slang is relatable.
I liked all characters especially Joy. I don’t know why but I felt like her attitude is relatable. The instant love between Mei Mei and Adil happened too fast but I wasn’t giving enough attention on their relationship anyway. I enjoyed reading about Joy mostly in this book but other characters were playing their own purposes very well.
The only character that I can relate to in this book is Loga. Loga is struggling with his business. It reminded me the days when my father was selling nasi lemak to provide for our family. I empathy with Loga and this particular scene really made me feel like crying because I can relate to it so much.
I hope the author will write a better story about murders and perhaps make it a bit longer than this.
Thank you Jai Patel for sending a copy of Escape from Happy Palace in return for an honest review.
Escape From Happy Palace is a short story about a Murder Mystery that happened in my country, Malaysia. I understand that this is a very short story about murder, there’s not a lot of events happened. As a mystery/thriller book lover I could say that the author did a good job on writing this book.
The plot is simple and easy to follow. The dates stated on every chapter made it easy to understand what’s going on. As I said because of this book is like a short story, there’s a less on backstory of the characters. I always loved that in books. I also liked the settings and the places mentioned in this book. The usage of Malaysian slang is relatable.
I liked all characters especially Joy. I don’t know why but I felt like her attitude is relatable. The instant love between Mei Mei and Adil happened too fast but I wasn’t giving enough attention on their relationship anyway. I enjoyed reading about Joy mostly in this book but other characters were playing their own purposes very well.
The only character that I can relate to in this book is Loga. Loga is struggling with his business. It reminded me the days when my father was selling nasi lemak to provide for our family. I empathy with Loga and this particular scene really made me feel like crying because I can relate to it so much.
I hope the author will write a better story about murders and perhaps make it a bit longer than this.
Thank you Jai Patel for sending a copy of Escape from Happy Palace in return for an honest review.
May 24, 2020
I finished this book in only few hours and the pacing was good as well. A book that one can easily finish in one sitting. But I must say that it is too short to be a murder mystery book. It’s too simple and there were plot holes here and there. A lot of events or occurrences were just too convenient. I expect more from a mystery book.
Writing style wise, as a debut novel, I think lots could be improved. The chapters were dated nicely but it didn’t feel like the story was moving smoothly. I also didn’t like the insta-love between Mei Mei and Adil. It happens too fast. If there were some backstory to how Adil fell in love with Mei Mei, it’d be nice.
However, I do like the characters. They are very real and they have distinct personality. I love Joy the most because of her attitude. I also like Loga Longkang because back in Uni days, I used to eat at this makan place called Longkang too in Cheras. Idk if this is the same longkang the author is referring to but knowing Loga brings back memories.
I adore that the author emphasizes on hardships and struggles faced by Malaysians of lower SES. For instance, Joy who struggles to get her hormone supply and how being a transgender is not easy for her. Meanwhile, Loga’s business is barely helping him to survive from day to day.
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Writing style wise, as a debut novel, I think lots could be improved. The chapters were dated nicely but it didn’t feel like the story was moving smoothly. I also didn’t like the insta-love between Mei Mei and Adil. It happens too fast. If there were some backstory to how Adil fell in love with Mei Mei, it’d be nice.
However, I do like the characters. They are very real and they have distinct personality. I love Joy the most because of her attitude. I also like Loga Longkang because back in Uni days, I used to eat at this makan place called Longkang too in Cheras. Idk if this is the same longkang the author is referring to but knowing Loga brings back memories.
I adore that the author emphasizes on hardships and struggles faced by Malaysians of lower SES. For instance, Joy who struggles to get her hormone supply and how being a transgender is not easy for her. Meanwhile, Loga’s business is barely helping him to survive from day to day.
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June 9, 2020
This was just too simple and straightforward. I feel like there was not enough time for me to get connected to the characters and they were pretty shallow and I felt that they didn't have distinguishable personalities. The mystery itself was honestly really simple and easy and I would have liked a few twists and reveals because I guess that's what a murder mystery is. I am interested to check out more from this author as I enjoyed the writing.
June 1, 2020
3.5 Stars!
A light and fast-paced read. What a great way to start my reading in June!
The plot is simple, characters are likeable. The chapters are timelines. My favourite character would be Joy, a witty trans with a sense of fun. Sets in Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia. I am always in love with any stories sets in my country!
It all started one day, on Mei Mei's turn to massage a regular customer named Samson. Ah Weng, her boss, called her downstairs to double-checked the logbook. Then, something unexpectable and horrible thing happened when she went back to the room.
Thats when she became a runaway masseuse, with nothing but the clothes on her back and her side of a story. An investigating team was formed - TEH TARIK TEAM! What a name 🤣
My favourite scene is that when Shan is calling Adil "Marie Kondo" out of irritation of Adil's reaction towards his messy place. The strongest value in the story would be FRIENDSHIP. TEH TARIK TEAM! Its a heart-warming one.
This is a good book for a debut. Well done Jai Patel! Looking forward to read you next book! I am expecting to see more plots added. I love your writing style nonetheless.
-Heads up for some obscene words and jokes.
A light and fast-paced read. What a great way to start my reading in June!
The plot is simple, characters are likeable. The chapters are timelines. My favourite character would be Joy, a witty trans with a sense of fun. Sets in Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia. I am always in love with any stories sets in my country!
It all started one day, on Mei Mei's turn to massage a regular customer named Samson. Ah Weng, her boss, called her downstairs to double-checked the logbook. Then, something unexpectable and horrible thing happened when she went back to the room.
Thats when she became a runaway masseuse, with nothing but the clothes on her back and her side of a story. An investigating team was formed - TEH TARIK TEAM! What a name 🤣
My favourite scene is that when Shan is calling Adil "Marie Kondo" out of irritation of Adil's reaction towards his messy place. The strongest value in the story would be FRIENDSHIP. TEH TARIK TEAM! Its a heart-warming one.
This is a good book for a debut. Well done Jai Patel! Looking forward to read you next book! I am expecting to see more plots added. I love your writing style nonetheless.
-Heads up for some obscene words and jokes.
June 10, 2020
Firstly, congratulations Jai Patel for publishing his debut novel, Escape from Happy Palace! Publishing a book during the Movement Control Order period is definitely tough, so please show some support to Jai!
This novel is a short one, fast pace, straightforward and so full of Malaysian flavor. Jai uses a lot of Malaysian slang and terms used in our normal day conversation throughout the story. This book also reflects the shady part of Kuala Lumpur i.e. Chow Kit. The tough life of masseurs and transgender prostitutes in Kuala Lumpur are also portrayed in this book via the characters of Mei Mei and Joy. However, I personally think that Jai can explore further on the character development of Mei Mei and Joy from this aspect. This would give more depth to this book.
Since this book is branded as "A Malaysian Murder Mystery", I would also expect some complexity and twists regarding the plot of the story. The plot or rather, the murder mystery, seems a little simple to me. The suspense element is a little lacking to me. While Jai manage to create some mysterious aura in this book, I think more can be done on this aspect as well.
All in all, this is a 3/5 star read for me. If you prefer a short and straightforward read, Escape From Happy Palace may be the right book for you!
This novel is a short one, fast pace, straightforward and so full of Malaysian flavor. Jai uses a lot of Malaysian slang and terms used in our normal day conversation throughout the story. This book also reflects the shady part of Kuala Lumpur i.e. Chow Kit. The tough life of masseurs and transgender prostitutes in Kuala Lumpur are also portrayed in this book via the characters of Mei Mei and Joy. However, I personally think that Jai can explore further on the character development of Mei Mei and Joy from this aspect. This would give more depth to this book.
Since this book is branded as "A Malaysian Murder Mystery", I would also expect some complexity and twists regarding the plot of the story. The plot or rather, the murder mystery, seems a little simple to me. The suspense element is a little lacking to me. While Jai manage to create some mysterious aura in this book, I think more can be done on this aspect as well.
All in all, this is a 3/5 star read for me. If you prefer a short and straightforward read, Escape From Happy Palace may be the right book for you!
June 8, 2020
2.5 🌟.
I can say this is a very very simple crime, mystery thriller book without any complex or challenges. If you are new to crimes and thriller genre or you wish to read in one sitting, this might be suitable for you. Other than that, I really like the author's writing, especially with the dialogues (its the combination between Malay and English mixed together). They makes me feel like I'm in the book with them and I miss my colleagues so so much! Besides, it happens in Malaysia and I can absolutely picture every single places the author have mentioned.
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There are a few points I think the author can improve more in the future. One of them is there are no chemistry between the characters. I cannot connect myself with their thoughts and feelings. I find the relationship and friendships are so sudden and forced. There's no history background of how they are bond together and develop their friendships or relationship. Other than that, as a mystery and thriller lover, I find the plot is too simple and straightforward. I would love to see it a bit complicated, challenging and suspense to keep me thinking of who's the actual criminal.
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But overall, the author did a very good job with his first book. Hope to see more books written by him. Good luck! ☺
I can say this is a very very simple crime, mystery thriller book without any complex or challenges. If you are new to crimes and thriller genre or you wish to read in one sitting, this might be suitable for you. Other than that, I really like the author's writing, especially with the dialogues (its the combination between Malay and English mixed together). They makes me feel like I'm in the book with them and I miss my colleagues so so much! Besides, it happens in Malaysia and I can absolutely picture every single places the author have mentioned.
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There are a few points I think the author can improve more in the future. One of them is there are no chemistry between the characters. I cannot connect myself with their thoughts and feelings. I find the relationship and friendships are so sudden and forced. There's no history background of how they are bond together and develop their friendships or relationship. Other than that, as a mystery and thriller lover, I find the plot is too simple and straightforward. I would love to see it a bit complicated, challenging and suspense to keep me thinking of who's the actual criminal.
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But overall, the author did a very good job with his first book. Hope to see more books written by him. Good luck! ☺
May 29, 2020
A very short novel, easy read and everything is too direct. Poor characterization. I don't feel attached to any of the characters. Too much of dialogues than the descriptives itself. Fast paced book. Its a very basic or I would say beginning to a thriller story that don't even kept me thinking, guessing or suspect who the killer was.
The one thing I liked about this novel is the familiarity of the malaysian slangs and places mentioned in this book. I didn't sense any racism in this book for being a malaysian author which is veryyyyy good. Overall, this book was just okay okay only and obviously not my cup of tea.
2 🌟🌟
The one thing I liked about this novel is the familiarity of the malaysian slangs and places mentioned in this book. I didn't sense any racism in this book for being a malaysian author which is veryyyyy good. Overall, this book was just okay okay only and obviously not my cup of tea.
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June 6, 2020
First of all it's a debut novel which the setting in Kuala Lumpur so i'm excited to see some familiar set and places mention. It feels close to heart that you can relate to the culture and language use in the book. Come to the storyline, i find it too simple yet straight to the point for a murder mystery novel. There's still room for improvement on the writing style.
I was expecting some detective mode on when i'm reading this book but it's just easy attempt on the answer. Also i find it uncommon to have the characters who is strangers but willing to work together to solve the murder mystery. Usually we will see characters that somehow related to each other and the characters development just lacking.
I do have a favourite character in the book which is Joy. She brings out the humor side of the story which a plus point for me to the book. Overall i enjoy reading the book and looking forward to the author 2nd novel, Eight-Eight Foodcourt which will be published in early 2021.
Thank you Jai Patel for sending this book in exchange for an honest review. If you wish to support this book, go check out Escape from Happy Palace on @jaipatelauthor ‘s website!
I was expecting some detective mode on when i'm reading this book but it's just easy attempt on the answer. Also i find it uncommon to have the characters who is strangers but willing to work together to solve the murder mystery. Usually we will see characters that somehow related to each other and the characters development just lacking.
I do have a favourite character in the book which is Joy. She brings out the humor side of the story which a plus point for me to the book. Overall i enjoy reading the book and looking forward to the author 2nd novel, Eight-Eight Foodcourt which will be published in early 2021.
Thank you Jai Patel for sending this book in exchange for an honest review. If you wish to support this book, go check out Escape from Happy Palace on @jaipatelauthor ‘s website!
June 15, 2020
My thoughts on Escape from Happy Palace
Let’s start from the story-line as a whole and the settings that took place in this book. I pretty much think the story-line was somehow fresh for a debut novel, a plus point that it was locally written. Well, the main plot is pretty much refreshing to me because I think it is new to read something that people experience in their daily life and being turned into a work of fiction. It was interesting to see the author had brought this element together (set in a massage parlor) and gave it a twist by involving the elements of murder and mysteries.
Regards to the setting itself, in my opinion it was not really detailed described, aside from the timeline stated above every chapter and also the usage of social media platforms making it seem more modernized. I felt it does not really emphasize and add up enough to be convinced that the setting was in the late 2000’s. In fact, I imagine the setting was set in the late 90’s instead. Also, the atmosphere of the scenes such as the roads, the coffee shops, the layout of the place and even the massage parlor itself gives you the feeling of vibes that were very old, dark and antic.
Moving forward, the plot. I was actually expecting a little more, giving some guess and possibilities – being the Sherlock while reading this book and figuring out who was the killer behind the murder case. I have to say I was a little disappointed that the assassin turned out to be anonymous, I was expecting the killer may be one of the characters from the Teh Tarik Gang. It got me being suspicious of the characters in the Teh Tarik Gang because you cannot trust anyone as anyone can betray anyone especially in this genre revolving around mysteries, thriller and crime.
The characters were honestly pretty interesting. Let’s start with Joy, she (he) was a really fresh and an interesting character. Is really rare to see local books having a transgender character who was hilarious and her tone was funny. Next, Shan was hilarious, I really laughed at the fact he named himself as “Mr. Lee Kiam Siap” as a spammer/ hacker, you may find it hilarious if you understand Hokkien. MeiMei, who was the main female lead, I understand she was the victim, it may be more interesting to see if she has the courage to stand for herself and maybe being suspicious towards the gang? Adil (his plans were pretty interesting to read) and Loga were pretty cool. Overall, The Teh Tarik Gang conversations were really interesting to witness and to read. There were all different types of words, tones and jokes. I enjoy how diverse it is reading a Malaysian written novel, having all the different slags and gibberish included makes me proud to be a Malaysian that I am able to understand so many different types of languages and dialects. I adore the diversity that was included in this novel.
Aside from these, I still find the story not gripping enough as I felt some scenes can be more elaborated. Especially the triad and also the two supporting characters at the massage parlor. Maybe a short backstory of what happened first instead of straightaway jumping into the case? Also, I think information was too easy to be retrieved just by the computer without any security locks, pretty much too cliche at this part. Somehow, I also find some parts were confusing, Mr. Leong and Samson Leong, I assumed they were the same person?
Overall, I think some typos should be reduced as little as minimal as possible and provide more details on the story settings, justification and elaboration. I have to say, this is a really good start for a debut novel with a fresh idea, locally written (supporting local authors) and interesting characters were introduced. I have to add the chapter lengths and the story was not draggy and the pace was just nice, it did gave me the feeling of turning the pages having me to figure out who was the assassin behind the attack. Again, this is really a great start for a debut novel, looking forward to more future works from the author.
Let’s start from the story-line as a whole and the settings that took place in this book. I pretty much think the story-line was somehow fresh for a debut novel, a plus point that it was locally written. Well, the main plot is pretty much refreshing to me because I think it is new to read something that people experience in their daily life and being turned into a work of fiction. It was interesting to see the author had brought this element together (set in a massage parlor) and gave it a twist by involving the elements of murder and mysteries.
Regards to the setting itself, in my opinion it was not really detailed described, aside from the timeline stated above every chapter and also the usage of social media platforms making it seem more modernized. I felt it does not really emphasize and add up enough to be convinced that the setting was in the late 2000’s. In fact, I imagine the setting was set in the late 90’s instead. Also, the atmosphere of the scenes such as the roads, the coffee shops, the layout of the place and even the massage parlor itself gives you the feeling of vibes that were very old, dark and antic.
Moving forward, the plot. I was actually expecting a little more, giving some guess and possibilities – being the Sherlock while reading this book and figuring out who was the killer behind the murder case. I have to say I was a little disappointed that the assassin turned out to be anonymous, I was expecting the killer may be one of the characters from the Teh Tarik Gang. It got me being suspicious of the characters in the Teh Tarik Gang because you cannot trust anyone as anyone can betray anyone especially in this genre revolving around mysteries, thriller and crime.
The characters were honestly pretty interesting. Let’s start with Joy, she (he) was a really fresh and an interesting character. Is really rare to see local books having a transgender character who was hilarious and her tone was funny. Next, Shan was hilarious, I really laughed at the fact he named himself as “Mr. Lee Kiam Siap” as a spammer/ hacker, you may find it hilarious if you understand Hokkien. MeiMei, who was the main female lead, I understand she was the victim, it may be more interesting to see if she has the courage to stand for herself and maybe being suspicious towards the gang? Adil (his plans were pretty interesting to read) and Loga were pretty cool. Overall, The Teh Tarik Gang conversations were really interesting to witness and to read. There were all different types of words, tones and jokes. I enjoy how diverse it is reading a Malaysian written novel, having all the different slags and gibberish included makes me proud to be a Malaysian that I am able to understand so many different types of languages and dialects. I adore the diversity that was included in this novel.
Aside from these, I still find the story not gripping enough as I felt some scenes can be more elaborated. Especially the triad and also the two supporting characters at the massage parlor. Maybe a short backstory of what happened first instead of straightaway jumping into the case? Also, I think information was too easy to be retrieved just by the computer without any security locks, pretty much too cliche at this part. Somehow, I also find some parts were confusing, Mr. Leong and Samson Leong, I assumed they were the same person?
Overall, I think some typos should be reduced as little as minimal as possible and provide more details on the story settings, justification and elaboration. I have to say, this is a really good start for a debut novel with a fresh idea, locally written (supporting local authors) and interesting characters were introduced. I have to add the chapter lengths and the story was not draggy and the pace was just nice, it did gave me the feeling of turning the pages having me to figure out who was the assassin behind the attack. Again, this is really a great start for a debut novel, looking forward to more future works from the author.
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June 1, 2020
Before I start my review, I would like to congratulate Mr. Patel on his debut! Thank you very much for sending me a review copy, I am honoured that you thought of me. Thank you very much.
Escape from Happy Palace is a one day read for me. It took me roughly about two hours to finish it. If you are looking for a one sitting book to read in a day, then, Escape from Happy Place is for you.
There are several things that didn’t quite sit right with me but I’m taking it in a positive light. The plot is rather straightforward, Mr. Patel could definitely improve on that. Perhaps it is because I have read so many mystery and murder related book that I felt like this book is a bit of a bore at certain places. However, if looking from another perspective, this is the book that I would suggest to my friend who has never read any English book. For someone who is slowly starting. I feel like this is an easy book to read and is able to pull more Malaysians (those who just started to read English books) to dive into the English language.
Now, talk about the English language, I personally think this book is quite easy to understand. There are not many bombastic words and the sentences are rather straightforward, it gets to the point easily. I would have preferred something a bit more sophisticated or double meaning but it is forgiven. It doesn’t matter what I prefer, this is how Jai Patel writes and this is his style. I’m sure in the future he will improve even more. I’m looking forward to that.
Alright, here comes the most important part. If you’re a loyal follower of my reviews then you know that character development is the most important thing to me. To me, no plot can be developed if there is no character development. However in this one, I feel like the characters are rather flat. The chemistry between them were a bit, I don’t know, it felt slightly forced and the budding romance, was a bit too fast for me. It was good but it was rather fast paced given the fact that this book can be finished in one sitting. My favourite, is Joy. I don’t know but I think Joy is the realest of the realest. Does that make any sense? I love how Patel just showed her struggles and hardships and it is something for us to dive into and think about. Kudos on that!
Mr. Patel, once again I congratulate you on your debut novel! Please do not be discourage by my review but rather feel motivated. I look forward to your second novel, Mr. Patel!
You can get Mr. Patel’s ebook at www.jaipatelauthor.com. I think it’s time we support more local authors.
Escape from Happy Palace is a one day read for me. It took me roughly about two hours to finish it. If you are looking for a one sitting book to read in a day, then, Escape from Happy Place is for you.
There are several things that didn’t quite sit right with me but I’m taking it in a positive light. The plot is rather straightforward, Mr. Patel could definitely improve on that. Perhaps it is because I have read so many mystery and murder related book that I felt like this book is a bit of a bore at certain places. However, if looking from another perspective, this is the book that I would suggest to my friend who has never read any English book. For someone who is slowly starting. I feel like this is an easy book to read and is able to pull more Malaysians (those who just started to read English books) to dive into the English language.
Now, talk about the English language, I personally think this book is quite easy to understand. There are not many bombastic words and the sentences are rather straightforward, it gets to the point easily. I would have preferred something a bit more sophisticated or double meaning but it is forgiven. It doesn’t matter what I prefer, this is how Jai Patel writes and this is his style. I’m sure in the future he will improve even more. I’m looking forward to that.
Alright, here comes the most important part. If you’re a loyal follower of my reviews then you know that character development is the most important thing to me. To me, no plot can be developed if there is no character development. However in this one, I feel like the characters are rather flat. The chemistry between them were a bit, I don’t know, it felt slightly forced and the budding romance, was a bit too fast for me. It was good but it was rather fast paced given the fact that this book can be finished in one sitting. My favourite, is Joy. I don’t know but I think Joy is the realest of the realest. Does that make any sense? I love how Patel just showed her struggles and hardships and it is something for us to dive into and think about. Kudos on that!
Mr. Patel, once again I congratulate you on your debut novel! Please do not be discourage by my review but rather feel motivated. I look forward to your second novel, Mr. Patel!
You can get Mr. Patel’s ebook at www.jaipatelauthor.com. I think it’s time we support more local authors.
June 8, 2020
I took three days to read this and to be honest, I am enjoying this. My expectation didn't fly too high because you can't have high hope for a 187 pages book. So, what I do is to take time for myself and read.
The pacing was okay. It didn't rush to the end or sluggish. But I noticed some plot hole could be fixes here and there. Actually it didn't effect the plot so much but it would be better to entertain readers with some flashbacks and background story of the characters.
Moving on, the writing style was impressive but still need some improvement. What I'm talking about is the detail of the story. The setting, the feeling, what does the character wear and stuff. That could be a page turner for reader to keep reading because readers are imaginative. Throughout the story, the story set in a blank white canvas in my mind, to be honest.
But I want to mention the mixture of Malaysian slang into English is so fun! It makes the story so relatable. And the mamak delicacies makes me hungry, not gonna lie though.
I don't see much character development in the plot itself. But it was nice to have such a strong character. I like Adil being strategic and confident in what he's doing. Joy, Loga and Shan were amazing teammates. But I think that Mei Mei is missing out though she's the one of the reason the mystery started.
Frankly for me, it is an enjoyable story. A read when you're in a reading slump and you want to have a light read but also in a heavy genre. I guess this is the one!
I would like to thank the author himself, Jai Patel for sending a this book to me in return of a honest review, and Untitled Book Club for hosting this blog tour! You have all my appreciation ❤
Rating : 3.5/5
The pacing was okay. It didn't rush to the end or sluggish. But I noticed some plot hole could be fixes here and there. Actually it didn't effect the plot so much but it would be better to entertain readers with some flashbacks and background story of the characters.
Moving on, the writing style was impressive but still need some improvement. What I'm talking about is the detail of the story. The setting, the feeling, what does the character wear and stuff. That could be a page turner for reader to keep reading because readers are imaginative. Throughout the story, the story set in a blank white canvas in my mind, to be honest.
But I want to mention the mixture of Malaysian slang into English is so fun! It makes the story so relatable. And the mamak delicacies makes me hungry, not gonna lie though.
I don't see much character development in the plot itself. But it was nice to have such a strong character. I like Adil being strategic and confident in what he's doing. Joy, Loga and Shan were amazing teammates. But I think that Mei Mei is missing out though she's the one of the reason the mystery started.
Frankly for me, it is an enjoyable story. A read when you're in a reading slump and you want to have a light read but also in a heavy genre. I guess this is the one!
I would like to thank the author himself, Jai Patel for sending a this book to me in return of a honest review, and Untitled Book Club for hosting this blog tour! You have all my appreciation ❤
Rating : 3.5/5
May 26, 2020
A fast paced novel, I read it in one sitting. What I love about this novel is the setting is at Jalan Chow Kit (out of all places) and the Malaysian slang used in the book. It's so relatable!
However, the novel felt more like a short-long-story than a novel due to it's simple plot. There is a lack of character development, I think? I think it would be nice if the author puts in a little bit more on the character development so that the readers can feel connected to them. I am especially intrigued with Joy and Loga and would love to know more how they get themselves where they are in the book.
Overall, it was an enjoyable, light read. Good job btw, Mr Jai. I'm sure you will be better in your 2021 book and good luck!
However, the novel felt more like a short-long-story than a novel due to it's simple plot. There is a lack of character development, I think? I think it would be nice if the author puts in a little bit more on the character development so that the readers can feel connected to them. I am especially intrigued with Joy and Loga and would love to know more how they get themselves where they are in the book.
Overall, it was an enjoyable, light read. Good job btw, Mr Jai. I'm sure you will be better in your 2021 book and good luck!
June 2, 2020
Jai Patel is a local author here in Malaysia and this is his debut book.
As his first book and published content, this book wasn’t so bad. I get the overall idea of the whole “murder mystery” and the fast pacing writing gets me going.
No double-meaning words or Mariana-Trench deep literature going on here. It’s simple, it’s basic.
Just a straight local Malaysian mixed up English slang words and please be mind, the cursive words were excessive.
I found it was easy to go through reading this book in one sitting. I even finished the overall reading with total of less than 2 hours of read.
And perhaps, it was too easy.
Want to know more, read the full review here!
As his first book and published content, this book wasn’t so bad. I get the overall idea of the whole “murder mystery” and the fast pacing writing gets me going.
No double-meaning words or Mariana-Trench deep literature going on here. It’s simple, it’s basic.
Just a straight local Malaysian mixed up English slang words and please be mind, the cursive words were excessive.
I found it was easy to go through reading this book in one sitting. I even finished the overall reading with total of less than 2 hours of read.
And perhaps, it was too easy.
Want to know more, read the full review here!
June 3, 2020
If you’re looking for a light and fast read, this is the book for you. The plot is not complicated and the main characters are all likeable. The chapters are short and flows smoothly. Would have loved a back story to the main characters, so we can understand their thought process, the reasons behind their actions and also empathise with them. Except for Mei Mei, we know very little about the rest and because of that I didn’t feel the usual nervousness or suspense when they were in dangerous situations. Serious crime fiction fans might find this a little too light.
June 8, 2020
The story was too short for a thriller. The characters were interesting but it was just too fast paced. Wish the author could have given more insights into the characters. Liked his writing style and how there was so much of Malaysian flavour in his writing. A good debut novel and looking forward to more books from him.
3.5 stars
3.5 stars
May 31, 2020
If you would like to have a quick read, this is it! Personally, I enjoyed it and yes, the setting in the book reflects how truly KL is which is very relatable as a Malaysian. Overall, it was nice though there are flaws and surely room for improvement.
August 21, 2021
First of all, I’d like to thank the author, Jai Patel, for sending this book to me in exchange for an honest review. I was very interested when he emailed me about his debut novel and as a fan of mystery books, I had to say yes. So, thank you so much Mr. Patel for taking the time to email and send this book out to me.
A big shout out to my favourite book club, Untitled, for hosting this blogram tour. I’m so happy to be a part of the tour and to be able read other readers’ reviews on the book and also enjoy each and every creative content some reviewers include in their review post.
As this is his first novel, I didn’t really expect much from it. Certainly there are some parts which I am interested in and also some parts that I think could be fixed or done better in future writings. I thought the book was really straightforward with its story. It could’ve used more plot twists, some zig-zags in the mystery to make it more suspenseful and interesting. I really could suspect what happens next that easily and I love a little challenge and mind games when it comes to mystery.
I also found the involvement of Loga, Joy, Adil and Shan in the case quite weird. I figured the authorities would give more attention to investigating the crime but it turns out a group of strangers gathered forces to solve the mystery to help a masseuse prove her innocence. Reality-speaking, it’s unrealistic. This is because I know that some people in real life wouldn’t have involved themselves in such a crime scene. However, because this is fictitious, I’ll let it slide because frankly speaking, if I was living in a fictional world, I would like to get onto the case and help as much as I can, really. I mean, hello! I’d like to be Hercule Poirot for the day!
I like the plot, I really do. Although it’s fast-paced, it’s the kind of mystery book that I’d pick up due to the interesting case. However, I think the ending was abrupt. Like there could be more to it and I also feel like the whole situation with Adil and Mei Mei could also be more developed.
Overall, I really like the story. I really like the author’s writing style, which I think has potential to captivate readers in future books (which I hope to read in the future).
To anyone that’s interested in murder and mystery and would love to give this book a read, his book is now available to buy in both physical copy and digital copy (epub, mobi, PDF) which you can get at the author’s website, jaipatelauthor.com! You can also visit his Instagram for more updates on Escape From Happy Palace. Support local authors, ladies and gents!
Wishing the author the best of luck in future writings!
A big shout out to my favourite book club, Untitled, for hosting this blogram tour. I’m so happy to be a part of the tour and to be able read other readers’ reviews on the book and also enjoy each and every creative content some reviewers include in their review post.
As this is his first novel, I didn’t really expect much from it. Certainly there are some parts which I am interested in and also some parts that I think could be fixed or done better in future writings. I thought the book was really straightforward with its story. It could’ve used more plot twists, some zig-zags in the mystery to make it more suspenseful and interesting. I really could suspect what happens next that easily and I love a little challenge and mind games when it comes to mystery.
I also found the involvement of Loga, Joy, Adil and Shan in the case quite weird. I figured the authorities would give more attention to investigating the crime but it turns out a group of strangers gathered forces to solve the mystery to help a masseuse prove her innocence. Reality-speaking, it’s unrealistic. This is because I know that some people in real life wouldn’t have involved themselves in such a crime scene. However, because this is fictitious, I’ll let it slide because frankly speaking, if I was living in a fictional world, I would like to get onto the case and help as much as I can, really. I mean, hello! I’d like to be Hercule Poirot for the day!
I like the plot, I really do. Although it’s fast-paced, it’s the kind of mystery book that I’d pick up due to the interesting case. However, I think the ending was abrupt. Like there could be more to it and I also feel like the whole situation with Adil and Mei Mei could also be more developed.
Overall, I really like the story. I really like the author’s writing style, which I think has potential to captivate readers in future books (which I hope to read in the future).
To anyone that’s interested in murder and mystery and would love to give this book a read, his book is now available to buy in both physical copy and digital copy (epub, mobi, PDF) which you can get at the author’s website, jaipatelauthor.com! You can also visit his Instagram for more updates on Escape From Happy Palace. Support local authors, ladies and gents!
Wishing the author the best of luck in future writings!
February 15, 2021
This story is an enjoyable read from the start due to the story's authenticity and the carefree writing style. It's a light reading book, and shouldn't be a problem in understanding the story if the reader is familiar with Malaysian slangs. The story is heavily themed on Malaysian culture. It reflects the struggles and the challenges of the people who work in a red-light district.
I wish this story will make it into a series. Chow Kit offers an exciting background setting with its vibrant mix of characters. I feel there are still many potentials for all these characters that can be developed further, and I'm really eager to know more about them.
Book Review: Escape From Happy Palace: A Malaysian Murder Mystery by Jai Patel.
I wish this story will make it into a series. Chow Kit offers an exciting background setting with its vibrant mix of characters. I feel there are still many potentials for all these characters that can be developed further, and I'm really eager to know more about them.
Book Review: Escape From Happy Palace: A Malaysian Murder Mystery by Jai Patel.
July 11, 2020
As far as representing local settings go, Jai Patel did a great job. He painted a rather vivid backdrop of Kuala Lumpur, the heart and soul of Malaysia. The local slang, coupled with other details like local food, gives a glimpse of the Malaysian culture.
I bought this book to support local authors, knowing that the publishing climate can be volatile. But that was not the only reason - the synopsis. I was genuinely curious to find out what happens to Mei Mei in the end.
Considering that this is a murder mystery novel, however, I was expecting suspense and plot twists but the story line was pretty straightforward. It would have been better had the plot been made more complex, with multiple suspects clouding the reader's guess. Was it A who did it or could it have been B? But why did C do this if B was the culprit? Things like this would have kept the readers on edge all the way to the very end.
Another thing I noticed would be the conversations between the characters. The plot might have been tighter if the topics conversed had more substance. Certain parts felt more like fillers instead of dialogues which pointed towards a certain direction within the plot. Clues, red-herrings and twists could have made these conversations more interesting.
Having said that, the essence of this book definitely has potential. I don't think I have come across a story stemming from a massage parlor, at least not in this nature. It's a good combination of local features and an intriguing idea. As an aspiring author myself, Jai Patel's dedication is one to look up to.
I bought this book to support local authors, knowing that the publishing climate can be volatile. But that was not the only reason - the synopsis. I was genuinely curious to find out what happens to Mei Mei in the end.
Considering that this is a murder mystery novel, however, I was expecting suspense and plot twists but the story line was pretty straightforward. It would have been better had the plot been made more complex, with multiple suspects clouding the reader's guess. Was it A who did it or could it have been B? But why did C do this if B was the culprit? Things like this would have kept the readers on edge all the way to the very end.
Another thing I noticed would be the conversations between the characters. The plot might have been tighter if the topics conversed had more substance. Certain parts felt more like fillers instead of dialogues which pointed towards a certain direction within the plot. Clues, red-herrings and twists could have made these conversations more interesting.
Having said that, the essence of this book definitely has potential. I don't think I have come across a story stemming from a massage parlor, at least not in this nature. It's a good combination of local features and an intriguing idea. As an aspiring author myself, Jai Patel's dedication is one to look up to.
October 17, 2020
#EscapefromHappyPalace by @jaipatelauthor - a budding Malaysian author. Good job bro! 👏🏻 👏🏻👏🏻
It was a fast paced read that you can read this during your weekend of 2 to 3 days or less. I love that there’s diversity in the characters and yup, we’re Malaysian! Malaysian slangs used immensely here and don’t worry there’s glossary of the words - the one that I like is ‘mata’ which in Malay we also called police detective as ‘mata-mata’ 👮♂️ and yup, police is always Malay #truefact 😂 tho I never thought about it maybe because I am not interested in police and don’t wanna be dealing with them in anyways hahah. Tho I had experienced dealing with police on personal matters, so I know a thing or 2 about them. 😎
I hope there’ll be another sequel or prequel about this story as I felt like there are plot holes to cover. If not, I’ll just guess on my own and let my imagination running wild, gituh! (Like Christopher Nolan always did with his movies 🤔). Well last but not least, to come up with the first book, I applaud you Mr Jai. Keep on writing!
I don’t know why but I always thought of escape from happy ‘place’ not ‘palace’ 😂
It was a fast paced read that you can read this during your weekend of 2 to 3 days or less. I love that there’s diversity in the characters and yup, we’re Malaysian! Malaysian slangs used immensely here and don’t worry there’s glossary of the words - the one that I like is ‘mata’ which in Malay we also called police detective as ‘mata-mata’ 👮♂️ and yup, police is always Malay #truefact 😂 tho I never thought about it maybe because I am not interested in police and don’t wanna be dealing with them in anyways hahah. Tho I had experienced dealing with police on personal matters, so I know a thing or 2 about them. 😎
I hope there’ll be another sequel or prequel about this story as I felt like there are plot holes to cover. If not, I’ll just guess on my own and let my imagination running wild, gituh! (Like Christopher Nolan always did with his movies 🤔). Well last but not least, to come up with the first book, I applaud you Mr Jai. Keep on writing!
I don’t know why but I always thought of escape from happy ‘place’ not ‘palace’ 😂
June 4, 2021
Escape from Happy Palace is Jaipatel's debut novel and the plot revolves around a massage parlor and few other premises around Chow Kit. The story evolves very quickly involving the main characters when there was a man who died in the massage parlor.
Joy, a trans-women and a struggling sex worker was my most-liked. The struggles and hurdles she faces in her everyday life are agonizing. Also, I loved the beautiful and affectionate friendship between Joy and Loga. Despite their personal battles that have no connection, they still look after each other all the time.
However, being an avid fan of thriller, I find this plot is rather simple and straightforward and that it doesn't allow you to do the guessing games (much). Also, I wished there was more room for twists and turns as that's what makes a thriller intriguing.
Overall, this book is a good representation of unseen crimes happening in our country. I would recommend this if you are looking for a short escape into a quick murder mystery.
Joy, a trans-women and a struggling sex worker was my most-liked. The struggles and hurdles she faces in her everyday life are agonizing. Also, I loved the beautiful and affectionate friendship between Joy and Loga. Despite their personal battles that have no connection, they still look after each other all the time.
However, being an avid fan of thriller, I find this plot is rather simple and straightforward and that it doesn't allow you to do the guessing games (much). Also, I wished there was more room for twists and turns as that's what makes a thriller intriguing.
Overall, this book is a good representation of unseen crimes happening in our country. I would recommend this if you are looking for a short escape into a quick murder mystery.
October 24, 2020
Description: First of all, what differentiates the book’s plot – in revealing the deep and dark secrets of the ‘Sam Huan’/Three Circles clan - between some of the Malaysian so-called big-hit crime TV series or movies was refreshing, even though it seems easy to follow chapter by chapter. The professionalism teamwork that has been shown by the undercover cops – Aidil (Dil) and Shan to gather the others – Joy, Mei Mei, and Loga (I won’t call him ‘Longkang’ Loga, as I felt sorry for him to bear his nickname!). The full-packed action that the cops performed at the Happy Palace – disguising themselves as MCMC’s officers to snatch the computer from Ah Jim and Ah Weng, including the runaway chaos too, was exciting! Last but not least, I loved whenever Loga said his famous ‘ayoo!’ and Joy’s teases, as it puts a sense of humor in the book.
Conclusion: I would like to say thank you so much to Mr. Patel, as he gave this book in FOC (four months ago), and hopefully this book will turn out to be a TV hit series or a sensational movie!
Conclusion: I would like to say thank you so much to Mr. Patel, as he gave this book in FOC (four months ago), and hopefully this book will turn out to be a TV hit series or a sensational movie!
June 29, 2020
I was kind of expecting this story to be told from Mei Mei’s perspective. Overall, I feel like this had a lot more potential. I can imagine it as a short film though.
The mystery could’ve been more complex and intriguing. I do love Joy’s character and Loga as well. The romantic relationship, in my opinion, was unnecessary. I know it’s what made Adil so determined to solve this whole thing but I don’t feel like it should be the sole reason.
The mystery could’ve been more complex and intriguing. I do love Joy’s character and Loga as well. The romantic relationship, in my opinion, was unnecessary. I know it’s what made Adil so determined to solve this whole thing but I don’t feel like it should be the sole reason.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
October 17, 2020
Buku debut penulis ini. Sangat mudah difahami. Untuk yang berjinak-jinak untuk membaca buku Bahasa Inggeris sangatlah disarankan. Penggunaan kata-kata biasa apabila bercakap dengan rakyat Malaysia.
May 31, 2021
Escape From Happy Palace, a perfect book for a quick read with a hint of mystery and death.
I was rather shocked to see how thin was the book considering it is a murder mystery, as I'm used to reading rather thick stabby stab stab (murder mystery) books, but nevertheless I enjoyed it.
The storyline is quite straight forward and simple. If there is an issue, a solution will be presented and done. I wish that in future, that issues face by our heroes won't be solved as easily and that there will be some challenges. Through out reading I kept waiting for more interaction between Dil and Mei Mei, was disappointed that we are not able to see the two of them grow closer and get to know each other better. It felt rather awkward that they were suddenly in a relationship.
One thing that made me disappointed with the ending of the book was, we didn't have a proper closure on who the killer is. It being anonymous was frustrating for me.
I loved how Team Teh Tarik bonded and even kept helping each other even after the ordeal was done. My favorite character had to be Joy, she is a friend that I would appreciate to have by my side if I ever murdered someone. Her wittiness and sarcasm made smile.
For a debut book, Jai has done well on his end. A lot can be improved, writing-style wised. Can't wait to read his newest book.
ps: sorry for taking too long to review Jai, I procrastinate too much.
I was rather shocked to see how thin was the book considering it is a murder mystery, as I'm used to reading rather thick stabby stab stab (murder mystery) books, but nevertheless I enjoyed it.
The storyline is quite straight forward and simple. If there is an issue, a solution will be presented and done. I wish that in future, that issues face by our heroes won't be solved as easily and that there will be some challenges. Through out reading I kept waiting for more interaction between Dil and Mei Mei, was disappointed that we are not able to see the two of them grow closer and get to know each other better. It felt rather awkward that they were suddenly in a relationship.
One thing that made me disappointed with the ending of the book was, we didn't have a proper closure on who the killer is. It being anonymous was frustrating for me.
I loved how Team Teh Tarik bonded and even kept helping each other even after the ordeal was done. My favorite character had to be Joy, she is a friend that I would appreciate to have by my side if I ever murdered someone. Her wittiness and sarcasm made smile.
For a debut book, Jai has done well on his end. A lot can be improved, writing-style wised. Can't wait to read his newest book.
ps: sorry for taking too long to review Jai, I procrastinate too much.
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