Okay, not done reading so not giving it stars yet. I LOVED the first two books, but don’t like this one so far. The h is what is killing me. I think the author is trying to write someone who is super confident in herself and doesn’t care what others think, but truthfully the way she is acting is how I find people act when they do care a great deal about what others think. I didn’t like in the beginning how she complains about her car which isn’t that old. It felt like something an uber rich brat would do, and they don’t work for me in books. It’s just not a good look on anyone, but especially a heroine. Then, you see the lack of confidence as it goes on and that confusing because it’s not true to the character as written. I also didn’t like the party she threw for herself. It screamed spoiled, seflish, brat - all about me. The cost involved all to celebrate the day she was born??? It just doesn’t make her cool at all but rich and entitled and not someone I’d care to be friends with. I get sometimes throwing a party for yourself at significant times in your life to mark things just because - but she apparently does this EVERY SINGLE YEAR. It just irked me.
And, as with the other two books I read, grammar issues galore. I’m losing patience big time with this. She has been writing now for several years, with several books published and this is the third in this series. Every review for past books mentions grammar. HIRE AN EDITOR AND PROOFREADER. I get it for your FIRST book, but not you 3rd, 5th or 6th or whatever this is. This is sold in a space where you are charging money and getting paid for it. It’s professional and costs not a lot to hire both - so just do it already. Even trustworthy ARC readers who are honest and not simply telling you what you want to hear could have helped. You send them chapter by chapter to help you with things like missing words, wrong tense, etc. etc.