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Articles of Faith #2
The Righteous
Rejoin fantasy’s most deadly and dysfunctional mercenaries in the sequel to debut sensation THE BLACK HAWKS.
Bound by oath and honour, Vedren Chel found himself drawn to the heart of a deadly rebellion. With him stood the mercenaries of the Black Hawk Company, who were there for the money.
But their uprising was betrayed and crushed. Now, Chel and the sell-sword Rennic languish in prison, watching as their comrades are taken one by one for execution.
A daring escape will set them free, but with the forces of an entire nation arrayed against them, Chel and the Black Hawks must embark on a desperate search for new allies.
Journeying from frozen wastes to towering cities, from drug dens to lavish palaces, THE RIGHTEOUS is the thrilling and riotous second adventure from one of fantasy’s most exciting new voices.
Bound by oath and honour, Vedren Chel found himself drawn to the heart of a deadly rebellion. With him stood the mercenaries of the Black Hawk Company, who were there for the money.
But their uprising was betrayed and crushed. Now, Chel and the sell-sword Rennic languish in prison, watching as their comrades are taken one by one for execution.
A daring escape will set them free, but with the forces of an entire nation arrayed against them, Chel and the Black Hawks must embark on a desperate search for new allies.
Journeying from frozen wastes to towering cities, from drug dens to lavish palaces, THE RIGHTEOUS is the thrilling and riotous second adventure from one of fantasy’s most exciting new voices.
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First published June 10, 2021
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February 28, 2024
To hear a short pitch of The Righteous from David Wragg himself, to see if this is for you, you can click on a link here - The Brothers Gwynne
Finished listening to The Righteous on Audible, where this second instalment of the Articles of Faith is narrated by Colin Mace, who once again executed a fantastic performance.
This is a humorous and unique read that also grapples with key themes and issues that David Wragg balances really well, making The Righteous a light-hearted read, but one with a gravitas that also provides an emotional impact and allows you to forge a greater connection to the characters.
The Righteous continues with a similar tone to The Black Hawks, to those who have read the first instalment of this series, but increases the epic factor, and widens in terms of the stakes at hand and the lives at risk. But within this widening of scope and magnitude, David Wragg still maintains the characters at the heart of his story, with this increased pressure on them seen clearly in the fleshed out figures he has created, which was emphasised wonderfully by the narration of Colin Mace, who makes each character so individual and distinctive.
I would say that there is a definite increase to scale and pressure and the epic factor in The Righteous as compared to The Black Hawks. Our central figures are given greater responsibility and face disunity within their own ranks as well, only heightened by the ever-present danger of death and murder, which evidently begins to take its toll on the cast, which was great to see, as compared to many books where this constant danger does not seem to effect the protagonists at all.
The Righteous is a really enjoyable sequel to The Black Hawks with a satisfying conclusion and great character growth. If you enjoy audiobooks, I would definitely recommend listening to this, as Colin Mace brings the humour to life. I'm going to miss the gang!
4/5 STARS
Full RTC
Finished listening to The Righteous on Audible, where this second instalment of the Articles of Faith is narrated by Colin Mace, who once again executed a fantastic performance.
This is a humorous and unique read that also grapples with key themes and issues that David Wragg balances really well, making The Righteous a light-hearted read, but one with a gravitas that also provides an emotional impact and allows you to forge a greater connection to the characters.
The Righteous continues with a similar tone to The Black Hawks, to those who have read the first instalment of this series, but increases the epic factor, and widens in terms of the stakes at hand and the lives at risk. But within this widening of scope and magnitude, David Wragg still maintains the characters at the heart of his story, with this increased pressure on them seen clearly in the fleshed out figures he has created, which was emphasised wonderfully by the narration of Colin Mace, who makes each character so individual and distinctive.
I would say that there is a definite increase to scale and pressure and the epic factor in The Righteous as compared to The Black Hawks. Our central figures are given greater responsibility and face disunity within their own ranks as well, only heightened by the ever-present danger of death and murder, which evidently begins to take its toll on the cast, which was great to see, as compared to many books where this constant danger does not seem to effect the protagonists at all.
The Righteous is a really enjoyable sequel to The Black Hawks with a satisfying conclusion and great character growth. If you enjoy audiobooks, I would definitely recommend listening to this, as Colin Mace brings the humour to life. I'm going to miss the gang!
4/5 STARS
Full RTC
April 26, 2021
“‘This is grim arithmetic, my friend: we take the lives beneath of those who would take countless more above. We must make our choice, then make our peace.”’
The Black Hawk mercenaries are back and this time around they’re causing even more madness and mayhem…
The Righteous by David Wragg is an explosive, quite literally, final instalment to the Articles of Faith duology. It is a story of rebellion, of honour, of a desperate fight for freedom, and it is filled with some of the most idiotic but loveable characters you will ever meet.
At the end of the first book, titled The Black Hawks, we left some of the mercenary band, Prince Tarfel and his oathbound protector, Vedren Chel in the hands of Tarfel’s tyrant malicious brother, who I’ll say no more about in fear of major spoilers. The Righteous begins not long after those events and we discover that Chel and the sellswords are all still imprisoned and awaiting their execution. As Chel and the Black Hawks’ infamous grisly leader Rennic watch their comrades taken one by one for execution, their need for a daring rescue becomes ever dire. What follows from there is a series of great escapes, a quest for rebellion, of friendship, of thrilling battles and most significantly of utter chaos. An uprising is brewing, but with most of the nations aligned against them can The Black Hawks convince them of their impending downfall? Can they raise enough allies to stand against tyranny and secure the crown upon Prince Tarfel’s head? Well firstly, they’ll have to make sure no one actually chops his head off, which isn’t at all an easy task
If you’ve read my review of the first book, then it’ll be no surprise to you that I already immensely love Wragg’s characters. In this book once again I found our main protagonist Chel, simply adorable. I feel throughout these two books, Chel has a coming of age story arc, which is one of my favourite tropes in fantasy. On the surface he has an awkward, clumsy, not so subtle air about him, he makes monumental cock-ups, yet at every turn he strives to do the ‘right thing’ - the problem is, in this world there is no ‘right thing’. You have to have the courage to do what it takes to survive. We see Chel grow in many ways, he learns a lot (although mostly taught by Lemon and I’m not sure she’s the best teacher, but these are the times Chel lives in...) but he still retains that innocence, that desire to be righteous, the strive to make his life meaningful. Throughout The Righteous, Chel pushes himself and truly discovers what kind of man he is. He’s an idiot for sure, but with all intent and purposes, he’s a charming one.
“Chel held his gaze. ‘My father said the righteous need fear nothing but the loss of their resolve.’
‘Is that the same father who died of plague?’ came Lemon’s voice from beside him.”
Another one of my favourite fantasy tropes is found families. These eccentric misfit characters formed a family I’d happily be a part of, sure I’d die within a day, but with all the banter and fireside stories, I’d at least be laughing along the way. Wragg presented us with useless Prince Tarfel, forgetful Sab, bloodthirsty, quick-tempered Rennic, snappish Kosh, wine-loving Loveless and faithful Foss, sneaky, protective Whisper, and my beloved foul-mouthed wolfy hating Lemon. Once again Wragg does a stellar job with the dynamics between these characters. They argue, disagree, irritate each other, but still their love for one another permeates. You can see it in the way Rennic calls Chel ‘little man’ or Lemon calls him ‘wee bear’, in the way if one of the members is offended, they all take offence, yet most predominantly you see it through the way they would die for one another without hesitation. I feel as though I got to know each of these characters on a deeper level, to the point where I wasn’t even aware of how attached I was to them until I felt their absence. There is something I find so special about following characters who hold strong bonds of friendship, who share a history together, and the Black Hawks crew certainly hit that spot.
I would say that The Righteous falls somewhere between the grimdark and epic fantasy sub-genres. The world is ruthless, filled with violence, the characters aren’t all that heroic, or even successful, but hey throughout both books they do go on a quest together as they traverse through the many lands throughout the kingdom. I loved that Wragg never allowed this story to become overly dark - it is essentially a comical fantasy romp. Without giving away too much this is a book filled with batshit crazy shenanigans which, I kid you not, made me laugh so much I could barely breathe. Wragg even included some most inventive swearing, “ink-fucker” had to be my new favourite! The battle scenes alone were enough to keep me on the edge of my seat and simultaneously make me shout “WTF!” There were plenty of malfunctioning crossbows, warriors on, and I’ll quote Lemon here,“fucken skates? Fucken skatey-skates?” and a metric ton of explosions. These were high octane scenes where Wragg certainly nailed his grimdark slapstick tone once again. All I can say is, it's imperative to always remember, when you’re travelling with The Black Hawks, Chel, and Prince Tarfel, anything that can go wrong, will go wrong!
“‘Fuck’s going on, little man? Sounds like a fuck-up wrapped in a fiasco.’
Rennic was behind them, Lemon and Foss at his back, gazing out over the battlefield with practised eyes.”
However, in between the humour were somber, quiet contemplative moments too, where the characters revealed much more about themselves. This time around Wragg took care to explore the motives of each character - were they there for coin or honour? He also philosophised on the notions of power, and who should have the right to rule an entire kingdom. Is anyone ever worthy enough? Once again the worldbuilding held very little magic, and throughout it is always a mystery whether the advancement in the weaponry used in the battle scenes were powered by alchemy or sorcery? The world was entering a new age of warfare, and by the end Wragg effectively showed us what the true cost of that would be, especially if left in the wrong hands.
If like me, you’ve been craving an immensely entertaining and essentially fun fantasy read that is more heart than it is grimdark, then I’d recommend The Articles of Faith duology. David Wragg has an unforgettable voice and an equally memorable story filled with such moronic heartfelt characters.
“Lemon blinked, eyes flicking from one to the other. ‘Sometimes I don’t have the first fucken idea what yous two are blathering on about.’
‘Worry ye not, Lemon,’ Rennic grinned. ‘That feeling goes both ways.’
Foss cracked a smile. ‘Evil days, my friends.’
‘Evil days, Fossy.’”
e-ARC provided by Harry Illingworth, Harper Voyager and David Wragg in exchange for an honest review. All quotes used are taken from an early ARC and are subject to change upon publication.
The Righteous will be released on 10th June but you can preorder here: https://www.waterstones.com/book/the-...
The Black Hawk mercenaries are back and this time around they’re causing even more madness and mayhem…
The Righteous by David Wragg is an explosive, quite literally, final instalment to the Articles of Faith duology. It is a story of rebellion, of honour, of a desperate fight for freedom, and it is filled with some of the most idiotic but loveable characters you will ever meet.
At the end of the first book, titled The Black Hawks, we left some of the mercenary band, Prince Tarfel and his oathbound protector, Vedren Chel in the hands of Tarfel’s tyrant malicious brother, who I’ll say no more about in fear of major spoilers. The Righteous begins not long after those events and we discover that Chel and the sellswords are all still imprisoned and awaiting their execution. As Chel and the Black Hawks’ infamous grisly leader Rennic watch their comrades taken one by one for execution, their need for a daring rescue becomes ever dire. What follows from there is a series of great escapes, a quest for rebellion, of friendship, of thrilling battles and most significantly of utter chaos. An uprising is brewing, but with most of the nations aligned against them can The Black Hawks convince them of their impending downfall? Can they raise enough allies to stand against tyranny and secure the crown upon Prince Tarfel’s head? Well firstly, they’ll have to make sure no one actually chops his head off, which isn’t at all an easy task
If you’ve read my review of the first book, then it’ll be no surprise to you that I already immensely love Wragg’s characters. In this book once again I found our main protagonist Chel, simply adorable. I feel throughout these two books, Chel has a coming of age story arc, which is one of my favourite tropes in fantasy. On the surface he has an awkward, clumsy, not so subtle air about him, he makes monumental cock-ups, yet at every turn he strives to do the ‘right thing’ - the problem is, in this world there is no ‘right thing’. You have to have the courage to do what it takes to survive. We see Chel grow in many ways, he learns a lot (although mostly taught by Lemon and I’m not sure she’s the best teacher, but these are the times Chel lives in...) but he still retains that innocence, that desire to be righteous, the strive to make his life meaningful. Throughout The Righteous, Chel pushes himself and truly discovers what kind of man he is. He’s an idiot for sure, but with all intent and purposes, he’s a charming one.
“Chel held his gaze. ‘My father said the righteous need fear nothing but the loss of their resolve.’
‘Is that the same father who died of plague?’ came Lemon’s voice from beside him.”
Another one of my favourite fantasy tropes is found families. These eccentric misfit characters formed a family I’d happily be a part of, sure I’d die within a day, but with all the banter and fireside stories, I’d at least be laughing along the way. Wragg presented us with useless Prince Tarfel, forgetful Sab, bloodthirsty, quick-tempered Rennic, snappish Kosh, wine-loving Loveless and faithful Foss, sneaky, protective Whisper, and my beloved foul-mouthed wolfy hating Lemon. Once again Wragg does a stellar job with the dynamics between these characters. They argue, disagree, irritate each other, but still their love for one another permeates. You can see it in the way Rennic calls Chel ‘little man’ or Lemon calls him ‘wee bear’, in the way if one of the members is offended, they all take offence, yet most predominantly you see it through the way they would die for one another without hesitation. I feel as though I got to know each of these characters on a deeper level, to the point where I wasn’t even aware of how attached I was to them until I felt their absence. There is something I find so special about following characters who hold strong bonds of friendship, who share a history together, and the Black Hawks crew certainly hit that spot.
I would say that The Righteous falls somewhere between the grimdark and epic fantasy sub-genres. The world is ruthless, filled with violence, the characters aren’t all that heroic, or even successful, but hey throughout both books they do go on a quest together as they traverse through the many lands throughout the kingdom. I loved that Wragg never allowed this story to become overly dark - it is essentially a comical fantasy romp. Without giving away too much this is a book filled with batshit crazy shenanigans which, I kid you not, made me laugh so much I could barely breathe. Wragg even included some most inventive swearing, “ink-fucker” had to be my new favourite! The battle scenes alone were enough to keep me on the edge of my seat and simultaneously make me shout “WTF!” There were plenty of malfunctioning crossbows, warriors on, and I’ll quote Lemon here,“fucken skates? Fucken skatey-skates?” and a metric ton of explosions. These were high octane scenes where Wragg certainly nailed his grimdark slapstick tone once again. All I can say is, it's imperative to always remember, when you’re travelling with The Black Hawks, Chel, and Prince Tarfel, anything that can go wrong, will go wrong!
“‘Fuck’s going on, little man? Sounds like a fuck-up wrapped in a fiasco.’
Rennic was behind them, Lemon and Foss at his back, gazing out over the battlefield with practised eyes.”
However, in between the humour were somber, quiet contemplative moments too, where the characters revealed much more about themselves. This time around Wragg took care to explore the motives of each character - were they there for coin or honour? He also philosophised on the notions of power, and who should have the right to rule an entire kingdom. Is anyone ever worthy enough? Once again the worldbuilding held very little magic, and throughout it is always a mystery whether the advancement in the weaponry used in the battle scenes were powered by alchemy or sorcery? The world was entering a new age of warfare, and by the end Wragg effectively showed us what the true cost of that would be, especially if left in the wrong hands.
If like me, you’ve been craving an immensely entertaining and essentially fun fantasy read that is more heart than it is grimdark, then I’d recommend The Articles of Faith duology. David Wragg has an unforgettable voice and an equally memorable story filled with such moronic heartfelt characters.
“Lemon blinked, eyes flicking from one to the other. ‘Sometimes I don’t have the first fucken idea what yous two are blathering on about.’
‘Worry ye not, Lemon,’ Rennic grinned. ‘That feeling goes both ways.’
Foss cracked a smile. ‘Evil days, my friends.’
‘Evil days, Fossy.’”
e-ARC provided by Harry Illingworth, Harper Voyager and David Wragg in exchange for an honest review. All quotes used are taken from an early ARC and are subject to change upon publication.
The Righteous will be released on 10th June but you can preorder here: https://www.waterstones.com/book/the-...
May 23, 2021
Still cracking good fun, but took a serious twist towards the end that I really enjoyed. Turns out actions have consequences even for the Black Hawks!
There was one thread left dangling, but as I read an arc, I'm hopeful it was resolved in copy edits.
There was one thread left dangling, but as I read an arc, I'm hopeful it was resolved in copy edits.
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October 9, 2021DNF at about 60%.
Here is the thing. This story has a bunch of characters, which I like. But then... it just feels like they are never properly utilised. They are quirky and fun, but we never really get to know them properly, enough to really understand why they do what they do. We get told a couple sentences hinting at their past, but it's never fleshed out. Things happen and it still feels like the story is just starting.
I lost my enthusiasm.
I don't think this is all bad. I just feel like something is missing. Something about the creation of this is incomplete and made me feel like a half-formed idea, where the characters and the places were created, but it was never brought together. Somehow the unifying top layer just wasn't in place.
Here is the thing. This story has a bunch of characters, which I like. But then... it just feels like they are never properly utilised. They are quirky and fun, but we never really get to know them properly, enough to really understand why they do what they do. We get told a couple sentences hinting at their past, but it's never fleshed out. Things happen and it still feels like the story is just starting.
I lost my enthusiasm.
I don't think this is all bad. I just feel like something is missing. Something about the creation of this is incomplete and made me feel like a half-formed idea, where the characters and the places were created, but it was never brought together. Somehow the unifying top layer just wasn't in place.
November 6, 2021
Bigger and darker than first book, so a little less “fun”
November 8, 2021
I was left scratching my head by this. Things happen to the characters rather than them making things happen, with them basically scraping through events by being lucky rather than competent. Even the big climax at the end, the small victories earned by the characters were for naught and they were all going to lose until a bit of a 'deus ex machina', (with shades of 'War of the Worlds' to it). Ultimately made for an unsatisfying read. Shame, 'cos I quite liked the first one.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
September 27, 2021
Extremely disappointing following The Black Hawks. Utterly predictable, sometimes juvenile writing. Little to no character development for anyone but Tarfel, and his is ham-handed and awkward. The attempt at an inner struggle for morality for Chel falls flat, and both he and Rennic routinely contradict themselves and their previous character traits.
June 16, 2021
The Fussy Reader
Man, what a fucking ride! I'm going to miss these characters so much.
Characters
Chel has come such a long way in just two books. He's grown so much. But I think what I love most about him is how the people around him grow because of him. He's an unintentional positive influence on them all, especially Rennic, and I love how Chel has almost become the glue that holds the group together.
Now let's talk about Lemon. She swears so much, I mean, they all do, but Lemon swears in nearly every sentence and I fucking love it. I fucking love her! Lemon is easily, EASILY one of my favourite characters ever. And just when I thought I couldn't love Lemon any more, I do believe we learn that Lemon is ace. (At least that's how I interpreted it.) Even the cover art with all the characters. Every time I look at the book, my eyes are drawn to Lemon. She's such a magnetic character. I love her dearly.
Foss is such a gentle giant. What a lovely, soft character he is. And Rennic is so loveable in his own abrasive way. I think at heart, he's a sensitive soul, and just needs a hug.
I also love how Chel and Tarfel's relationship has grown into such a genuine friendship.
The overall dynamic of this whole group is fantastic, and one of my favourites that I've read.
I loved learning a bit more backstory to our main characters too. Some really fantastic character-building done very naturally through dialogue.
Plot
Picks up immediately where the first book leaves it and runs with it from the get-go. No pussyfooting around here. Just straight into the action. Much like the first book, the pacing is smooth and speedy. There's always something interesting happening and never a dull moment.
This got dark in that final battle. Real dark. But it didn't feel out of place. It was an interesting turn from the usually humorous adventures, and I really enjoyed that battle. I love a good battle, especially siege wars and this one was gripping and intense, and excellently written.
The ending was mightily unexpected and left completely ambiguous. The whole last three chapters came totally out the blue and left me a little befuddled as to how I feel. I was under the impression that this was a duology, but the ending is left so wide open that there’s no way there can’t be a third book in the works. I sincerely hope there is, otherwise I fear I’ll forever feel unsatisfied by the ending. I mean, it was an epic ending as far as cliffhangers go, but not so much as a finale to the series. There’s so many loose threads, so many open-ended plots, so many unanswered questions. Surely, surely, there’ll be a third book. I loved it, but I’m also left quite confused if this is truly the end.
For instance,
So, I say it again. SURELY this wasn’t the final book in the series. Otherwise, those last three chapters wrapped up nothing. Normally when I complete a series there’s a feeling of closure. Whether things end well, things end bad, or things just…end, I always feel satisfied that Yes, this is the end of the road. And yet…I don’t feel that here. It doesn’t feel like an ending, it feels like a middle, like the best is yet to come and it’ll be fucking amazing. This is a character-driven story, so to cut the readers off from so many of the characters without closure feels like a bad choice. But I’m only one reader among many, and I’m sure plenty of people will love how unconventional this ending is. One thing this story isn’t at risk of is being cliché. That’s for sure.
Setting
Even though there's no map, the world is so well depicted that a map isn't necessary. I can see everywhere very clearly in my mind. Even scenes from the first book, I can still see everywhere so clearly, which has a lot to do with how well these books are written.
Speaking of which...
Writing Style
The writing is top quality. Beautiful descriptions that don't distract from the narrative. Effortless writing style that makes for an incredibly easy read that flows smoothly.
And the use of profanity is an art form. The finest art form. I said it in my review for the Black Hawks, I'll say it again now. David Wragg is like a vulgar poet. He has such a way with swear words that it never feels gratuitous to me. Maybe because I'm a heavy swearer myself, but still, there's a fuck tonne of swearing in these books and yet it always seems to suit the tone of each chapter.
The creative use of insults inspires me to up my banter game. The writing, the dialogue, there's just something so wonderfully, deliciously British about it all.
Final Impression
I'm going to miss these characters so much. Please don't take Lemon away from me. Ahhh. It's fine. I'm fine.
...I'm not fine.
Look, if you haven't read these books yet, do yourself a favour, let Lemon into your life. Read these books. Just read them. I'm very excited to see what David Wragg writes next. One thing's for certain, I'll be reading it.
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Man, what a fucking ride! I'm going to miss these characters so much.
Characters
Chel has come such a long way in just two books. He's grown so much. But I think what I love most about him is how the people around him grow because of him. He's an unintentional positive influence on them all, especially Rennic, and I love how Chel has almost become the glue that holds the group together.
Now let's talk about Lemon. She swears so much, I mean, they all do, but Lemon swears in nearly every sentence and I fucking love it. I fucking love her! Lemon is easily, EASILY one of my favourite characters ever. And just when I thought I couldn't love Lemon any more, I do believe we learn that Lemon is ace. (At least that's how I interpreted it.) Even the cover art with all the characters. Every time I look at the book, my eyes are drawn to Lemon. She's such a magnetic character. I love her dearly.
Foss is such a gentle giant. What a lovely, soft character he is. And Rennic is so loveable in his own abrasive way. I think at heart, he's a sensitive soul, and just needs a hug.
I also love how Chel and Tarfel's relationship has grown into such a genuine friendship.
The overall dynamic of this whole group is fantastic, and one of my favourites that I've read.
I loved learning a bit more backstory to our main characters too. Some really fantastic character-building done very naturally through dialogue.
Plot
Picks up immediately where the first book leaves it and runs with it from the get-go. No pussyfooting around here. Just straight into the action. Much like the first book, the pacing is smooth and speedy. There's always something interesting happening and never a dull moment.
This got dark in that final battle. Real dark. But it didn't feel out of place. It was an interesting turn from the usually humorous adventures, and I really enjoyed that battle. I love a good battle, especially siege wars and this one was gripping and intense, and excellently written.
The ending was mightily unexpected and left completely ambiguous. The whole last three chapters came totally out the blue and left me a little befuddled as to how I feel. I was under the impression that this was a duology, but the ending is left so wide open that there’s no way there can’t be a third book in the works. I sincerely hope there is, otherwise I fear I’ll forever feel unsatisfied by the ending. I mean, it was an epic ending as far as cliffhangers go, but not so much as a finale to the series. There’s so many loose threads, so many open-ended plots, so many unanswered questions. Surely, surely, there’ll be a third book. I loved it, but I’m also left quite confused if this is truly the end.
For instance,
So, I say it again. SURELY this wasn’t the final book in the series. Otherwise, those last three chapters wrapped up nothing. Normally when I complete a series there’s a feeling of closure. Whether things end well, things end bad, or things just…end, I always feel satisfied that Yes, this is the end of the road. And yet…I don’t feel that here. It doesn’t feel like an ending, it feels like a middle, like the best is yet to come and it’ll be fucking amazing. This is a character-driven story, so to cut the readers off from so many of the characters without closure feels like a bad choice. But I’m only one reader among many, and I’m sure plenty of people will love how unconventional this ending is. One thing this story isn’t at risk of is being cliché. That’s for sure.
Setting
Even though there's no map, the world is so well depicted that a map isn't necessary. I can see everywhere very clearly in my mind. Even scenes from the first book, I can still see everywhere so clearly, which has a lot to do with how well these books are written.
Speaking of which...
Writing Style
The writing is top quality. Beautiful descriptions that don't distract from the narrative. Effortless writing style that makes for an incredibly easy read that flows smoothly.
And the use of profanity is an art form. The finest art form. I said it in my review for the Black Hawks, I'll say it again now. David Wragg is like a vulgar poet. He has such a way with swear words that it never feels gratuitous to me. Maybe because I'm a heavy swearer myself, but still, there's a fuck tonne of swearing in these books and yet it always seems to suit the tone of each chapter.
The creative use of insults inspires me to up my banter game. The writing, the dialogue, there's just something so wonderfully, deliciously British about it all.
Final Impression
I'm going to miss these characters so much. Please don't take Lemon away from me. Ahhh. It's fine. I'm fine.
...I'm not fine.
Look, if you haven't read these books yet, do yourself a favour, let Lemon into your life. Read these books. Just read them. I'm very excited to see what David Wragg writes next. One thing's for certain, I'll be reading it.
January 14, 2022
A great read - true to the original but brought everything further along and packed a huge amount in without feeling rushed. All the characters developed further, the humour remained consistent and laugh-out-loud at times, the action swift and occasionally shocking.
October 16, 2021
I enjoyed this book a lot! The best part of it for me was the characters and their friendship.
If you like to follow a group of characters, I recommend you to try this series (duology?)!
If you like to follow a group of characters, I recommend you to try this series (duology?)!
June 17, 2021
I purchase the first in the Articles of Faith duology, The Black Hawks purely because of the cover art. Pre Ordered the second in the series even before the cover reveal. But I was not disappointed. The cover on this one was just as fantastic as the first. So a shout out to artist Gavin Reece whose cover for this book sets the stage for a wild ride of a read. I you enjoy the exploits of a rag tag group of mercenaries fighting against the odds despite it not being in their best material interests, this is a must read. Lots to like. The rare duology, but ends with a nuanced note of future adventures. Hopefully David Wragg will return to this world. The tale is told through the eyes of Chel, or Bear, or Wee Man, or Vedren. It all depends who is talking to this main character. The Mercenary band is led by Rennic and his second in command , Whisper. Not all the Black Hawks made it out of book 1 into Book 2. It was a rough ending for the group, and imprisoned on orders of the new King. What followed next was a fabulous adventure tale as our group try to make the world a better place, and make a bit of coin at the same time. Truly enjoyable . if you are a fan ofJoe Abercrombie books add this series to your to be read file; or pile if you are like me .
February 8, 2022
This is the sequel to The Black Hawks and I loved it even more than the first! There was plenty of action and the snarky banter I enjoyed in book one, but this is much more balanced between that humour, and the horrible realities of war and choices made. For this reason it packed a more emotional punch.
I've gained a much larger affection for Chel and his growth. Not just his character, but his actual role within the overall group. He's a catalyst for change within the other characters and I loved exploring that. At the end of the day this is really his story, as he gets caught up in events and continues to try and do the right thing in a world that makes it almost impossible to do so.
The world is expanded more, as our illustrious rogues travel throughout the Empire trying to gain allies for their rebellion. The stakes also feel higher, and no one is truly safe - not that they were in the first book mind you - but the darkness and dangers feel more immediate here.
The characters get more depth, as their backstories are fleshed out and they are all the better for it. The plot and world feel more cohesive too. If the first book was a highly entertaining romp, this one retains that humour I loved, while also asking hard questions about choices made, and the consequences of those choices.
I have had so much fun following Chel and The Black Hawks. I hope we get more books in this series, because I really want to go on more adventures with this group. Especially Lemon! Hell give me an entire book of Lemon talking shite, it would probably be my book of the year lol.
I've gained a much larger affection for Chel and his growth. Not just his character, but his actual role within the overall group. He's a catalyst for change within the other characters and I loved exploring that. At the end of the day this is really his story, as he gets caught up in events and continues to try and do the right thing in a world that makes it almost impossible to do so.
The world is expanded more, as our illustrious rogues travel throughout the Empire trying to gain allies for their rebellion. The stakes also feel higher, and no one is truly safe - not that they were in the first book mind you - but the darkness and dangers feel more immediate here.
The characters get more depth, as their backstories are fleshed out and they are all the better for it. The plot and world feel more cohesive too. If the first book was a highly entertaining romp, this one retains that humour I loved, while also asking hard questions about choices made, and the consequences of those choices.
I have had so much fun following Chel and The Black Hawks. I hope we get more books in this series, because I really want to go on more adventures with this group. Especially Lemon! Hell give me an entire book of Lemon talking shite, it would probably be my book of the year lol.
January 25, 2022
This is an OK sequel but nothing very memorable.
The dialogue between the characters and their relationships are good but there is very little character development. We know next to nothing about them or what motivates them. The main character Chel's responsive to everything is "he is gave his oath" or "it his duty". The likes of Foss and Lemon blend into the background and have nothing to do in this book.
The group just go from place to place getting into trouble. It plays out like a video game. The climatic battle at the end was decent until the ending which I didn't think was great nor the last part with Rennic and Chel.
If there is a 3rd book then I won't be rushing out to buy it.
The dialogue between the characters and their relationships are good but there is very little character development. We know next to nothing about them or what motivates them. The main character Chel's responsive to everything is "he is gave his oath" or "it his duty". The likes of Foss and Lemon blend into the background and have nothing to do in this book.
The group just go from place to place getting into trouble. It plays out like a video game. The climatic battle at the end was decent until the ending which I didn't think was great nor the last part with Rennic and Chel.
If there is a 3rd book then I won't be rushing out to buy it.
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May 10, 2022
4.5*
Great and underrated duology.
Great and underrated duology.
June 17, 2023
Aaah it was good to be back with the Black Hawks mercenaries xD. What a sweary gritty bunch. I am mostly sold on the group dynamic with this series. I notice I kinda loose the focus on the what and why everyone is doing 🫣🤣. The motivation behind it all. Not sure why it happens. Cause I love the writing style, the sweary over the top banter and loads of traveling.
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I feel like the ending was leading to more. And the reaction to loss was intense. You'd think mercenaries only take care of their own backs. But this gang is so much more, they have a thick hide but also deeply caring hearts towards eachother. They know and see everything, it doesn't need to be spoken out loud. Lemon is my absolute fave and it all ended so abruptly. There has to be moooore.
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I feel like the ending was leading to more. And the reaction to loss was intense. You'd think mercenaries only take care of their own backs. But this gang is so much more, they have a thick hide but also deeply caring hearts towards eachother. They know and see everything, it doesn't need to be spoken out loud. Lemon is my absolute fave and it all ended so abruptly. There has to be moooore.
April 22, 2022
War is coming, and Chel and the gang embark on a mission in a search for allies. But it's no easy task, especially when the enemy is not far behind you.
I loved this sequel to The Black Hawks. It's a fun, fast paced read, and Lemon is still my favourite character.
I loved this sequel to The Black Hawks. It's a fun, fast paced read, and Lemon is still my favourite character.
January 25, 2022
superb sequel. loved the characters to bits.
April 15, 2022
Decent follow up. Plot was almost identical to the first book but expanded on the world a bit more and had an unexpected twist at the end. It also provided some nice development for some of the other characters.
January 17, 2025
Brilliantly fun sequel bringing humour and light into our grim grim fantasy sphere.
What a fun and entertaining series. In a current climate of EVERYTHING IS DARK (am I talking about the real world or fantasy publisher's focus on darker fantasy right now? Who knows?) I absolutely loved the fact we had a fun romp of a time that still wasn't a laugh a minute slapstick. It was light and humorous but still had epicness, stakes, serious themes and conversations... it didn't sacrifice the story for laughs. Round of applause on balance here. Well done.
Is this series a favourite of all time? maybe not. Did it deliver on every front the way I wanted it to? Heck yeah. Do I always ask too many rhetorical questions in my reviews? Yes. Send help.
What a fun and entertaining series. In a current climate of EVERYTHING IS DARK (am I talking about the real world or fantasy publisher's focus on darker fantasy right now? Who knows?) I absolutely loved the fact we had a fun romp of a time that still wasn't a laugh a minute slapstick. It was light and humorous but still had epicness, stakes, serious themes and conversations... it didn't sacrifice the story for laughs. Round of applause on balance here. Well done.
Is this series a favourite of all time? maybe not. Did it deliver on every front the way I wanted it to? Heck yeah. Do I always ask too many rhetorical questions in my reviews? Yes. Send help.
August 25, 2025
I read The Black Hawks in 2021, so I didn’t remember much when I started this book. It took me some time to get back into the story. Even then, I felt the plot wasn’t very original. I’ve read similar fantasy stories before.
What I did enjoy were some of the characters. They’re funny and bring life to the book. Wragg is good at writing dialogue and group scenes. But not all characters were clear or different from each other. Some felt the same, and I sometimes forgot who was who especially the ones outside the main group.
The tone is a mix of serious and funny. Some people compare Wragg to authors like Joe Abercrombie or Nicholas Eames. For me, those authors do it better. Their books had more impact.
Still, this book was fun to read once. The ending suggests there might be a third book.
Good for readers who like fantasy with fast dialogue and a team of rough characters, but don’t expect something new.
What I did enjoy were some of the characters. They’re funny and bring life to the book. Wragg is good at writing dialogue and group scenes. But not all characters were clear or different from each other. Some felt the same, and I sometimes forgot who was who especially the ones outside the main group.
The tone is a mix of serious and funny. Some people compare Wragg to authors like Joe Abercrombie or Nicholas Eames. For me, those authors do it better. Their books had more impact.
Still, this book was fun to read once. The ending suggests there might be a third book.
Good for readers who like fantasy with fast dialogue and a team of rough characters, but don’t expect something new.
March 20, 2022
While I liked Chel and the Prince, I didn’t like Rennick or however you spell his name. His violence towards the 17 year old prince really made my blood boil. Sorry, but dude is a grown ass man in his 30’s or something. 🤷🏻♀️ The other characters were alright but I didn’t “care” for them much at all. The story itself was great. The world building was great. Regardless of my feelings towards the characters, I still recommend this.
September 24, 2022
This is a very action-packed story. The plot is good, a bit darker than the first book. The character interesting and quite diverse. However, I don't understand the reasons behind their action. When I read a book, I expected it would give me a deeper understanding of the characters.
Regardless, I'm quite confident this book would make a good movie.
Regardless, I'm quite confident this book would make a good movie.
June 8, 2023
Excellent sequel that has the motley band of heroes trying to resist the forces of the would be Emperor and making things worse at every turn. A lovable bunch of characters and a fast-paced breathless set of action set pieces. The wonderful characters seem a little undeveloped, but if you want an entertaining thrillfest look.no further
June 5, 2022
A fun book and a good sequel, an excellent summer beach read.
February 5, 2023
4.5 stars
This was such a big step up from the first book in terms of scope and ambition, which bigger action scenes and a full on war. Great read.
This was such a big step up from the first book in terms of scope and ambition, which bigger action scenes and a full on war. Great read.
Want to read
June 9, 2021One more day
March 9, 2023
2.5
Hat mich nicht so abgeholt, wie das erste Buch. Die Action war spitze aber die Charaktere haben an Entwicklung zu wünschen übrig gelassen.
Hat mich nicht so abgeholt, wie das erste Buch. Die Action war spitze aber die Charaktere haben an Entwicklung zu wünschen übrig gelassen.
February 15, 2025
DNF at 39%. My biggest criticism of the first novel was its lack of character building and development. And I actually think that it has gotten worse in the sequel, which is why I have decided to DNF it. I wasn't at all invested in the plot, and the characters would constantly shift personality depending on the situation and what suited the plot. I think that Wragg had a good idea about both the plot and the characters, but neither was fully fleshed out to my taste. This series was just not for me.
My other reviews in the Articles of Faith series:
The Black Hawks (#1)
My other reviews in the Articles of Faith series:
The Black Hawks (#1)
October 21, 2021
Took me until halfway through the book to finally get a feel of who is who in this book. Even though I had read the first book last year, the different mercenaries all blended together. The second half was a lot better, but to be honest I lost interest in what happens to them by them. Which partly caused the ending to feel quite underwhelming.
Oh and Chel is one of the most annoying characters in fantasy. So that didn't help. ;)
Oh and Chel is one of the most annoying characters in fantasy. So that didn't help. ;)
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