3.5 stars — In her debut collection, Shauna Singh Baldwin effectively captures the Indo-Canadian/American experience with delightful prose and authentic cultural syntax. All the stories focus on female characters navigating language, gender and culture within Indian and Western traditions alike. The subject matter ranged a bit, though the focus was mostly on Sikhs around the world and their connections to others as well as home. As a Sikh Punjabi myself, I naturally found myself drawn to these women’s stories and voices, each one distinct in their own right. Baldwin does a great job of giving life to these characters, making them jump off the page. Though none of the male characters are as memorable, Baldwin’s attention to detail for her female protagonists is one of the best qualities of her writing.
Conversely, I found the collection front-loaded with Baldwin’s best work. The stories in the second half seemed fragmentary and sometimes rushed. The brevity of certain works is further aggravated by some of the longer stories, one of which clocked in at thirty pages (and focused a lot on its male characters) compared to the four or five pages other female (and much more interesting) characters get. Combining a few stories, linking some of the characters that appear only once, or spending a bit more time with some of the issues Baldwin occasionally skirts around (like the Air India flight 182), would have alleviated the abruptness of her shorter works and made the collection more cohesive overall. Because Baldwin’s writing is sometimes so terse, I had to re-read lines, paragraphs, or even pages to catch the quick-moving plot. While some moments felt a bit contrived (the car scene in "Devika"), others feel more natural when they are given a longer set up and more time to breathe ("Nothing Must Spoil This Visit"). For these reasons, as well as the weaker stories in the second half of the collection, I could not give this book a full 4 stars. Otherwise, I am excited to read Baldwin’s debut novel and second short story collection!