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"I challenge people's beliefs with my writing. If you come away from my stories with a new perspective, I've done my job as a storyteller." -Scott Seeger's Goodreads bio.
I know people will quote books in reviews, but I find this one more enlightening and important from my perspective. Allow me to explain, using the notes I took while updating progress in reading.
Page 46: So, he has a party with Richard Branson, Elon Musk, and some guy that helped make PayPal? Why does this feel like a worse version of Richard Castle's poker game he had with James Patterson, Stephen J. Cannell, Dennis Lehane, and Michael Connelly?
Page 68: So he can't buy a yacht unless his wife signs off but he can sell off his company without her consent?
Page 89: 80-some pages in and only now introducing a daughter?
Page 100-101 (ran out of characters so I needed to update twice): So does he have a PhD? Did he still do his dissertation after he left for New York? How does someone go from nuclear physics doctorate to businessman inventing the pool noodle? Why did he ever need to be a businessman? Why not have him be a nuclear physicist with friends in high places that would help him get a cruiser?
Also, how do you even get a naval ship into Minnesota without any government noticing? Only way I can think of getting there at all is up through the Saint Lawrence Seaway in Canada, through the Erie Canal, past the Ambassador Bridge in Detroit, through the locks in Sault Ste. Marie, and THEN get to Minnesota. Even as incompetent as Trump was, SOMEONE would've noticed before it came close to hitting land.
Page 105: Again, his wife has the right to refuse buying anything but not selling their stock?
Between here and my last update, there were several updates that had little to do with the content of the book, including text size, the word "layer" being used when talking about a Bond villian lair, the use of Trump, why Kanye was mentioned until seeing that a DJ was playing his music, and various thoughts on Gershwin's Porgy & Bess - which I was listening to as I was reading. No point in going in depth here. Let's skip to the last update.
Page 216: If you're going to write a book advocating nuclear power, maybe make the thesis statement somewhere in the first few chapters rather than 50 pages from the end.
And here's the big issue. You have this idea of being an advocate for something, but then you bury it in over 200 pages of bloated prose and mediocre dialogue. By the time you get to the point, the only thing that's being challenged is my patience, with my mind wandering off on other thoughts. And I'm not the only one feeling that way, as you can see by the several DNFs that have appeared in the review section.
Honestly, if you re-worked this into a short story, it wouldn't be too bad. Instead of a ludicrous stunt that never would've made it to New York, let alone Minnesota, how about a lobbyist that keeps getting confronted by protesters. One day, he's had enough and takes them on the sight seeing tour to confront what they're afraid of. As the excursion goes on, the dialogue goes from jumpy to question actions of the lobbyist to practical debate. In the end, it would be left open ended as to whether the protesters changed their minds - mostly because they aren't important, the reader is.
Overall, Grand Portage tries to be too grand for its own good. Slimmed down with the thesis the author wished to present a clearer focus, it could've done well. But as is, I can't recommend having anyone plow through so much fluff to get to the point of it all.