It’s very tempting to compare Dogs of Mars to Imperium Lupi instead of analyzing it like its own thing, especially if you loved Lupi as much as me. The author does cement the style developed in Lupi: multiple storylines that follow certain characters, morally-complex scenarios where the different ‘teams’ have valid but opposing views, and easy-to-read prose that every once in awhile shows something deeper. However, there are a number of things that are vastly different between both books, including some that could’ve been just a bit better in my opinion.
The book starts with a lot of fast-paced action. This means that you’re immediately caught by the plot, but character development is left aside for a while. Reading the first three parts, I often felt like I was reading a sequel instead of the first part of a series (and judging by the Epilogue, this IS the first part of a series). The characters are thrown into life-threatening scenarios and their unity is broken right away, but since we don’t really know these characters so well yet and we haven’t had time to bond with them, it was hard for me to be worried about them or their unity, at least initially. In the beginning, only Bryce and Holly get to have some quiet time where we get to see their personalities. Flashback chapters manage to flesh out the backstory and fill in some holes and questions left by the beginning. While most adventure stories (including Lupi) begin by setting up a status-quo and presenting the characters (step 1), then introduce events that upset that status-quo and send the characters on their trails (step 2), and end with the characters on a new sort of status-quo (step 3), DoM does step 2 before step 1. This is quite original, but it just wasn’t my cup of tea for the reasons I just mentioned.
However, the cast gets much better defined after that, and we end up with a bunch of colorful, unique, and deliciously imperfect X-dogs that subvert many of the super-soldier tropes. Instead of the classic one-man-army super soldier that is perfect at everything and doesn’t need anyone, each X-dog has its strengths and weaknesses, and ultimately they’re all dependent on someone. It’s in these quiet, character-centered sections of the book that DoM shows its greatest thing for me: the amazing, irreverent, and just delicious dialogue between characters. Dialogue is much more central in DoM than Lupi, and it’s used brilliantly for characterization, world-building, and comedy. I particularly loved an exchange between Oscar and Holly, where we get to know a lot about the differences and tensions between Mars and Earth in a completely organic way through their dialogue. Although the dialogue is better here than in Lupi, there are aspects of Lupi’s writing that I didn’t like at all and that came back to haunt me. The use of literal sound effects (Crack! Fssshhh! Bang! etc) and stretching out a word during a scream or cry (Nooohoho! Awoooooo!) feels very cartoony and campy for a book that’s pretty serious. This was particularly jarring for me during the death of two characters near the end and it spoiled a lot of the emotional impact. I know that it comes down to personal taste, but going through the reviews of Lupi it’s clear I’m not the only one that feels this way. There are also a considerable amount of typos, at least in my edition.
I do have to congratulate the author on making the world of DoM feel oddly realistic, blurring the line between soft and hard sci-fi. He avoids a lot of the pesky scientific inaccuracies of soft sci-fi (laser light isn’t visible unless it’s scattered by something, there is no sound in a vacuum, and moons do have atmospheres… lovely). Even so, besides the use of anthro dogs instead of humans, this feels like a pretty standard and classic sci-fi setting. Also, since the history of that world is supposedly identical or at least very similar to ours, using anthro dogs brings up a lot of very awkward questions. There’s a silver cross that gets handed down between characters. So, Christianity is a thing. Thus, dog Jesus must exist. Was there a dog World War Two, with a dog Hitler? In the end, the less I think about this world’s history, the better, and that is a shame.
All this makes it sound like I didn’t enjoy the book that much; that’s not true. I really enjoyed the story. Over time I found myself caring for the characters, especially Dexus and Sasuke. A lot of thought went into the plot, which feels like a heist sometimes, and it fits together very nicely. When Dexus cried near the end, I had to hold back a tear, and I will read the sequel once it’s out. Part of me wanted to give this book 5 stars, especially because I feel bad ruining its perfect streak, but I can only do that if a book is the best it can possibly be. And even though Dogs of Mars was a very good read, in my opinion, it could’ve been even better. I wish the author a lot of luck in his future works, and I’m eager to read them.