Do you like books where the author doesn't even know what he's getting at? Do you like books probably written by the author's understudy after skimming his first book for a semblance of his style? Do you like books without character continuity? And do you enjoy a good eye-roll while reading...? If so, this is the book for you!
I really wanted to like this. i enjoyed the Atlantis series as a fun and easy to read trilogy, with a cool sci fi element, not a mindbender like The Three Body Problem (if you want a good read, read those). but silly and fun, and Departure was fun and what not. both kept my attention and were exciting...
this one though ... i just thought SOMETHING interesting was coming... i kept waiting for anything exciting. even the action was ridiculous and stale. maybe a tie in to why we are even reading this story... half way in you are willing to accept some of the action as mere fun easy storytelling... anything to take you aware from the romantic nonsense that makes no sense and doesnt work... "are you a male? and are you a female? are you in proximity to one another? BOOM ROMANCE!!! oh you dont believe it... ok... umm, next paragragh "and i thats when i knew ive ALWAYS loved her"... hmm thatll convince 'em".... 700 pages later my eyes hurt from rolling them so much.
the wild jumps to conclusion, the ridiculous coincidences... i get this is supposed to be a series, but even books in series' have some semblance of closure even though there are loose ends to be tied up in the subsequent books. (again, just go read the Three Body Trilogy) this one? nope! no answers. the whole "Looking Glass" contraption... it felt like 600 pages in, the author didnt even know what the hell he was getting it. vague allusions to something "greater than ourselves" - maybe if i write a few more pages ill figure out what hell this thing is and i can tell the reader - and that "only this ONE PERSON currently narrating can save the world", well until the next person who is narrating gets to the end of their chapter... with zero evidence and random statements that "tie it all together" - "and then it was all perfectly clear exactly what i needed to do, and that i was the only person in the world that could do it". SAD!
not only is this book, for what it is, entirely too long and scattered, it seems he just took his research from The Atlantis books and made another story, similar (plague, evil corps trying to take over the world but in their own precious conscious are saving humanity, origins of mankind, a scientist and one "super guy with lots of skills"), but not as good. SPOILERS AHEAD (although there are no spoilers bc nothing happens in this book) the allusion to the Gibraltar Trading Company, i thought was a cute nod to his previous books... no, given what we learn at the end with the human bones, its clear this one trick pony only wants to talk about this one specific tidbit of knowledge he learned a few years back. ANOTHER SPOILER - Peyton learns, in the span of like a day or 3, that everyone in her family has lied to her, they are not dead, and have been leading mystery lives without her included, are potentially evil maniacal earth killing monsters, or perhaps martyrs who abandoned her for her own good. Regardless, she doesn't know what the f is going on... yet... feels compelled to blindly trust any nonsense spewed from her "dead" dad, and her "dead" brother, and her mom who "wont tell her whats going on bc, THERES NO TIME" and bc the author doesnt know whats going on, and Peyton quote: "just won't budge another inch unless you tell her what this is about!! im serious this time, I wont budge and ill die here in this building unless u tell me right now mom and dead dad and dead brother and weird mystery lady who loves my evil dead brother. not another inch." Mom Says "this is bigger than you. not now. when youre ready ill tell you." Peyton: "okie dokie karaoke!! works for me!! Lets go Family!" #vom
As much as he tried to dive deep in to each character and build a narrative as to why they are, they sadly all fall very very flat. The reader just "doesnt care" about any of them, not to mention the more you read... the sillier it all is.
One last comment, which the editors should have noticed... it seems they pushed him too hard to get this book out so didnt bother with edits or narrative review in the last third. We start the book with chapters, and section of chapters, that have distinguishable narrative points of view. ie - now you're reading from X's perspective. now you're reading from Y's perspective. very clear who is "talking"... at the end, you have multiple points of view and perspectives within the same page, no separation, paragraph to paragraph. makes no sense. not to mention just mentioning random characters that have not been introduced before as we know who the f they are talking about...
oh ya... this is global pandemic spreading across the world, and for the most part the situation is changing on an hour by hour basis... but no mention as to flying times, and the total loss of a day from flying from UK to Australia then to wherever than to the Moon... boopadeeboop we're there!
done ranting. skip this one.