My thoughts
Poorly written. Misspelled words, run-on sentences, incorrect use of 'to' & 'too', 'their' & 'they're ', 'an' & 'a' & 'women' & 'woman'. Names were lowercase. In 2009, there was no 'ding' to indicate an inbox because Messenger wasn't released until 2011. When Facebook was first created, it was for college students, and enrollment had to be verfied. No one named 'Guns Blazing' would be allowed to have account at that time.
What should've taken an hour to read took two days because I struggled to ignore overwhelming amount of mistakes.
The drama was on point though. This author can develop a story. The back story was top notch and connected to the first two books. No denying that! But this author needs an editor.