Well, I guess you get what you pay for. I got this for free on Amazon for the Kindle. I recognized the series because a friend read them a year or so ago.
This book was horrible. I have to say, I'm not HUGELY picky with books, I only have one other 1 star book, but UGH. Let's start with the characters.
Reasons Why I Hated This Book:
1. CHARACTERS. If this book were a movie then it would be a puppet show with cutout cardboard characters. Okay, I don't know if that was even a good analogy, but my point is that the characterization was totally not believable in the slightest way. Jordan, the protagonist, was shallow and only thought about how she could get Tim back (until the end, but that's another point). Shawna was a typical backstabbing mean girl, Kara was a typical goody two shoes, Tim was a typical guy who only wanted one thing, her parents were typically clueless, etc... you get my point.
2. JORDAN. This deserves a whole other paragraph. She was SO ANNOYING.
All she thought about was Tim, Tim, Tim. How can I get Tim back. What is Tim doing. Where is Tim. To the point that she was plain creepy and stalkerish. She drove by Tim's house to see if his car was there, she drove by Shawna's to see if Tim was there, to the local restaurant, etc. And Tim was such a jerk to her! But yet she goes on about how he's so sweet and sensitive, and she could spend her whole life with him. Well, I never saw that sweet/sensitive side. The author never made me feel bad for her when she lost Tim. There were several points where she mentions that people think she should be in a mental hospital, and I agree. Who stalks their old boyfriend to that extent? Jordan is also so spoiled. She constantly talks about how much her life sucks, but really she just has some issues with her friends. Calm down. The only point where I felt she had a right to complain was when she got in the accident.
3. PLOT LINE. Wait, there was a plot line? Where? All I read was Jordan stalking, Tim cheating, Shawna being a jerk, rinse, repeat. Seriously, though, the story was sooo unoriginal. Typical romantic comedy except it wasn't even funny. Or romantic.
4. RELIGION/NOT SO SUBTLE MESSAGE. It was quite obvious that the author was religious, and not in a good way. Don't get me wrong, I'm not anti-religion, I'm agnostic, and I really don't mind religion in books, it can add a lot. But the message of this book was: If you go Christian your life will be perfect. If you don't you'll get screwed by guys and get into car accidents. The whole last part of the book was literally like a sermon. Kara and Edgar came in to save the day by converting Jordan and they acted wayyy too mature for 16 year olds. Also, the end of the book was not well executed. Everything turned out too perfect. Shawna, the mean girl who went to all lengths getting revenge teared up at Jordan's apology. Really? Not in real life. But I guess Jordan's conversion to God made her a little warm and fuzzy. Jordan also broke up with Tim because he wasn't in God's plans. (All that productive stalking for nothing!)
5. DIALOGUE. Last, but not least. IT WAS HORRID. Ever hear a teacher or a parent try unsuccessfully to talk "teen"? That was this book. AND PLEASE! No more saying "Crud!" Nobody says that! And "Good Grief!" I kid you not. It was like somebody wrote a script and then tried to make it sound as robotic and awkward as possible. In most conversations about people, you introduce someone's name then you say he/she, her/his, etc. You don't repeat their name every. Single. Time. And whenever you talk to somebody, you don't always say their name. You sometimes say "hey" or "guess what?" or just start talking.
It was like this. (random example I just made)
Two teens are in a kitchen eating breakfast, sitting at separate sides of the island from each other.
"John, can you please pass the syrup?"
"Sure, Mary Lou."
"No problem, John."
"Mary Lou, can you please pass the strawberry bowl?"
"Sure, John."
"You know, Mary Lou, it hurt my feelings that you said that yesterday."
"I'm sorry, John. I need to work on my forgiveness. I can get out of hand sometimes. Will you forgive me?"
"Of course, Mary Lou. After all, God forgives us every day."
That painful. Okay, I was exaggerating, but still. The only redeeming thing was that she spoke well about The Beatles. But then she dissed The Twilight Zone. So never mind. Just don't read this book.