This book is the most thought provoking book in the Track series for me. I'm not sure if it's my favorite, but it's the one that's made me think the most. I have read the two previous ones in the series, and what I liked about those two is that we really got to experience the running part of their lives, we got to meet a lot of interesting characters and feel like we were talking with and running with being with the Defenders, and this book doesn't really allow you to experience that. This is the part where I start criticizing the book, yay.
No offense to Sunny, but his life outside of the Defenders is kinda boring. He is in my opinion the blandest person in the Newbies (Sunny, Lu, Ghost and Patty), and although the dance offers a little interesting content, his life feels more like a memoir than a realistic fiction book meant to entertain. I mean it's a memoir in the way it's really boring. Aurelia and Darryl both have a undeveloped feel to the character that makes spending 60% of the book with feel strange. He is homeschooled, which isn't a bad thing, but at least in Patty we got to hear about her school and her social life, while Sunny gives a "old soul' type rundown of each day that is monotonous after a while. Maybe that's the type of person Sunny is, but to a certain extent a book is to entertain the reader and a boring character makes you want to read the book less. Ghost was full of him and the team, and although he and Sunny both have interesting and moving back stories/experiences, Ghosts feels more appealingly described and it seems more open. If the Defenders were featured more, and Aurelia and Darryl felt more developed emotionally and characteristically, I would like this book more.
I finished over 70% of this book reading in a humid swimming pool, pedaling on a cardio machine, so maybe the condition I was reading them in. To me the book felt like a repeat of the same dialogue and words and a couple dancing noise added in. I really loved the times when Sunny went to the hospital and helped the patients, it was really moving.
I really love eccentric stuff, and the editing and crossing out added to the text really got me. I like how even though he may be boring, his characteristics and traits are so clear and cut-out and he feels like a real life person. The random edits and self-conscious rant-speaking-happy talking is really helping me envision the character.
I do like the style overall with the diary entries and the author giving his entries a voice that sounded like the awkward, shy but still bursting with things to share. I was slightly confused by the cover page because in Ghost, Sunny was described as a really lanky and clumsy kid. In the cover he looked the same as the rest of the Newbies, did they all suddenly strike puberty and have super big growth spurts or something?
The track series has always felt like a smaller book/series in the way it doesn't feel super publicized or commercially made like Harry Potter and Percy Jackson, it felt like the author had written the book just for you and not to make you laugh, even though it does. The fact that at the end of the book they added Aurelia teasing Sunny about him liking Patty and him realizing it makes it feel like High School Musical with a non superpowery Heroes of Olympus, and I kind of had a bad feeling about Lu (the next book in the series) where everyone would be all mushy and romantic and it would be super predictable like the other teen series.
There are definitely great things about this book, and I will definitely read the sequel. The missing star is for the undeveloped characters of Darryl (I guess I can understand that because he's confusing and keeps things to himself) and Aurelia, and how repetitive and slightly boring the book and Sunny was. I would recommend this to someone who's interested more in the story and message of the book, but I read books for fun.