There is solid writing in this season 1, episode 1 novella and it has an intriguing concept, that Purgatory exists, in the Rangers of the Rift. We are introduced to the Limen and the Rangers such as the main character patrol their respective territory to guide the newly dead safely onwards. Holy water is important as a weapon, also coffee grounds though this is not so clear.
The main character, Emily Mars, "Skittles" to her buddy Tad, is only a junior in high school but she's a Ranger while Tad has Sight. She sees through his eyes when they are linked. "I See the Waif as he truly is: a star at the edge of collapse. Despair changing a human soul to a compact, deadened force of raw, negative emotion." But "Tad looks deeper, Sees deeper, to the tiny dollop of golden life energy ..."
So the reader feels a little confused about the signals, how seeing through Tad could be less than his Sight. As for how Emily becomes a Ranger and the circumstances through which she and Tad have become a number, we are invited to sign up for the author's mailing list to read the prequel. This has the makings, perhaps of a TV series.
The scene shifts to a dark forest, perhaps a graveyard - wait, are Rangers dead? It is not clear. And I wish it to be clearer. I wish also for the characters to fill out a bit and for the story arc to be more self-contained in this volume, not in a sequel or prequel. Sorry to be picky.