LOL, this was bad really bad. I kept reading, well I skimped it to be honest, just to see if it could get any worse,AND IT DID.
Story wise , nothing major happens and it is a very boring story.
It starts with them having sex the same day they meet , which is on the day she is burying her husband which is also the H’s father.
h still a virgin, H has a thing for her nipples for the first half of the story.
Then they separate for 5 months. -she runs away and you guessed it right she is pregnant.
Then they get together for 4 months, during which he leaves for a few weeks.. so basically they get together for 3 months.
They have sex, they do not talk, do not communicate, and when they do the conversation is cheesy as fuck. She says she loves him he says he will try to love her and their baby and the story ends with him saying “I adore you and the baby”.
He is not a bad hero, just one dimensional boring character and for her she is a first class doormat who is willing to take whatever he gives her.
But what is really REALLY bad is that the author actually tells you what you are supposed to feel instead of writing events and dialogues and evoking the intended feelings.Something happens, so we are told that now there is a feeling of sadness, now we are angry, then time to be happy. Even at the end when things were coming full circle, and they were meeting at the same place they met the first time ..SHE ACTUALLY TELLS US THAT. LOL I mean we can figure that out on our own, it is not like lots of action took place from page one till the end that we are going to forget .