100th book of the year 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
I was not expecting to read this book right now… but I’m glad I did because it helped me reach my goal 🤪
But for real, I did enjoy reading this book very much as it was a fun read, not too heavy or boring, just right (ok i see you Goldilocks).
Unchosen (tell me why I thought the title was actually Unbroken up until I had to search it up here and nothing was coming up until i searched by author’s name) follows Charlotte, who suffers from serious middle child syndrome.
Her older sister is the confident commander of their sector, while her younger sister is the chosen one, spewing prophesies left and right. What for, you ask? Well, it’s hard to explain, but they’re suffering from the apocalypse, basically, with evil flesh-eating monsters creating more monsters by spreading the Crimson.
So everyone ignores Charlotte. It sucks, but Charlotte has to just deal with it, until some very bad pirates (yar har har)/murderers try to take her younger sister to kill her so that the Crimson could take over the world.
Charlotte volunteers for her sister, making everyone who finds out about Charlotte being the chosen one actually believe her. Boom, Charlotte in danger of getting killed by literally everyone, and Vanessa (little sister) and Harlow (big sister) and Dean (😬 unattainable to date best friend who is also dating big sister) safe.
Charlotte has to a) not get murdered b) save the world from the evil pirates (yar har har) and her family c) keep the truth from the world. Sounds easy, right? No 🥲.
characters
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Charlotte- I like her. She’s nice. I can’t say much more, other than I enjoyed her character arc. She’s a basic YA protagonist, all in all 🤷♀️
Harlow- Let it be known I am anti Harlow. I get where’s she’s coming from but she is actually the worst 😠
Vanessa- Shes nice too but Vanessa is actually just a very useless character. She doesn’t do anything, and her character is really just there to further the plot, not really have her own personality and character.
Seth- It’s so funny how I find mediocre white men irl so disgusting but in books? I fall in love. Seth quite literally has no special qualities whatsoever but living through Charlotte’s character is very fun because i get to experience his love 😌 anyways i love Seth unashamedly
Dean- This man is so. boring. We may never know what Charlotte saw in him but I am so glad we didn’t have to spend more than 100 pages with him present. Like Vanessa,
really only there to further the plot, and just as useless.
The only other thing I have to say is that Maddox and Rielle 1000% deserved the world. Biggest tragedy.
(SPOILER: i just find it so funny/depression-inducing how the author only killed off the only lesbian couple? no one had to really die off and the author could have chosen anyone else? i understand why she did it, but it hurt and could have been done in a better way me thinks 😭)
plot
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The plot for the first 100 pages was so SLOW. I was waiting and waiting for something to happen. The first events of the book? Very unnecessary. So much of this part could have been cut down, I think, and if the ending was stretched out more instead of giving me whiplash, it would have been better.
But the plot really did pick up once Maddox and Seth and his crew came in, once Harlow and Vanessa and Dean left, at the 50% mark. The second half really is what made this book really good.
I do think the plot could have been better in its pacing, such as with bringing in Abel and Evelyn. The ending felt so short in comparison to the pages and pages of introducing the world and characters in the beginning.
world-building
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The world is also the part where I had a tiny bone to pick. I found it difficult to understand. Maybe it’s just because I’m dumb, but none of it actually made sense to me until the ending.
The Anne-pirate thing was nice. i remember saving a Pinterest pin about that lady once, I think? It was smart to bring in that historical figure, but it was messy.
The world building overall is messy. We have a lot of modern day things working, but we also have a lot of modern day things that don’t work? I found the zombies dubious, too.
They were giving heavy Medusa, which i love, of course, but why didn’t people just think of wearing sunglasses or something semi-see through-able (wow i am amazing at describing things) that will provide a barrier from the eye sight of the zombies?
A sea-pirate and zombie type crossover thing was interesting, though, and I think the world building is unique to read about. Despite some flaws, it was still well thought out, with just some errors in execution, in my opinion.
writing
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I don’t know if this book is the author’s first book or not, but it was pleasantly written. The first part was hard to get through, but once the plot actually picked up, i found the writing to get better, too. maybe i just don’t know how to differentiate between the two, but I didn’t have any real problems with the writing.
It was nice for a dystopian type beat, my favorite quote probably being Se Ratcheter (however you spell it- i do not speak latin 😍 the only thing i know is Ad Aspera Per Aspera- i don’t even know if that’s correct, too). It was giving off contemporary vibes (idk how else to describe it, tbh)
overall
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This may just be my late night musings, but i think this book would make for a good movie. I would definitely watch it. The romance is cute, if a little abrupt, but i very much ship the main couple <3 (the epilogue is everything)
Not the best, but again, a good read that isn’t too dark or twisty- you don’t have to worry about being permanently scarred for life here, folks (though do check tws, as always).
I think this book has potential to have sequels, but i’m glad it’s staying a standalone. it’s a nice tale, with a complete story.
4 stars :)