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250 pages, Kindle Edition
First published January 17, 2020
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I think the writing style was 𝖓𝖔𝖙 𝖋𝖔𝖗 𝖒𝖊. The book wasn’t that bad it just never held my attention and interest that long, it really took me a while to finish this and it’s a short story so…
One of the things I couldn’t deal with sometimes was the 𝒸𝒽𝑒𝑒𝓈𝒾𝓃𝑒𝓈𝓈. Perhaps I’m insensitive or not the typical romantic girl, who knows, but I cringed many times while reading some word choices from the characters, especially when the scene didn’t even merit it.
Another thing was the 𝓈𝓉𝑒𝓇𝑒𝑜𝓉𝓎𝓅𝑒𝓈, maybe I’m being too picky but I’m tired of how latinos are portrayed not only in romance fiction. It goes from the typical character (often it’s some kind of helper) no shaming the job but it’s always the same, almost; to the use of the language (inserting spanish words at some random times that for a native speaker just don’t sound good there). Like I said, it could be that I’m being too dramatic.
About the story itself, everything happened too fast since the beginning with the ´love-at-first-sight´ scene. Either I believe it or not, in this case I didn’t. Also, I couldn’t connect with the protagonists; I believe it was that cheesiness I talked about.
Again, this can work for others but it didn’t do it for me. Sorry.