I usually only leave reviews on really outstanding novels or certain stories that stood out so much due to the poor writing. This is the latter.
First of all, I will have to say I did not finish the book, I only read it about halfway through and the rest I skimmed over.
Secondly, the sex scenes in this story were erotic for the first few times. However, there was hardly any connection or emotional link before the two main leads jumped into bed together. The sex scenes got rather stale as the story progressed because for every few pages I turned, there's another sex scene. I suppose I should have realized that I was reading erotica and not an actual story-telling novel.
Finally, the important part: the story itself. It was very basic, not compelling and it does not let you connect to the characters too much. It could be my biased opinion but I felt like all the characters were way too simple, their background, their motives, their emotions. It felt more like little kids in adult bodies, fighting in the playground that was designed as an office.
Then again, this might just be because this is an erotica and not a novel. Due to the length of this book, I did not realize I was reading erotica at first, this could have been my mistake too.