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A Better Understanding: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet argue about more than Mr. Wickham at the Netherfield Ball. Provoked, Elizabeth insinuates that Jane does love Mr. Bingley – and lets Mr. Darcy know that he is not gentlemanly enough to tempt her affections. With two of Darcy’s usual assumptions refuted early in the story, how will the gentleman react? Will the words be enough to set him on a path to redemption following the ball, or are more hardships required before Darcy and Elizabeth can find their happily ever after? And how will Darcy convince Elizabeth that Mr. Wickham is not worth her concern?
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Published January 18, 2020
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February 7, 2020
Elizabeth and Darcy clear up one misunderstanding earlier in this book while dancing at the Ball. She quickly disabuses him of his opinion that Jane is just pleasing her mother with her attentions to Bingley. Darcy decides that he must also relate to her Wickham's history to save her and other young ladies from that man's lechery. They finally meet and just as he begins his recitation they hear screaming: her opinion is quickly changed as she witnesses Wickham in the act. Darcy adds other details.
Darcy, knowing Jane's attachment to Bingley, refuses to leave Netherfield while Bingley is in London and his sisters express a desire to shut up the estate and leave. Elizabeth begins to discover more and more about Darcy that prove he is a gentleman of honor and caring. The colonel shows up at Netherfield and his admiration of Elizabeth adds to Darcy's changing opinion as to whether or not she could be his wife...despite their differences in class standing, etc.
Jane goes off to London to buy her trousseau and Elizabeth goes along. They meet Lady Matlock and it is at the Lady's ball that some angst is added to the story.
This was a pleasant read. It is not too far off canon but the author did add several new episodes which stirred matters.
Darcy, knowing Jane's attachment to Bingley, refuses to leave Netherfield while Bingley is in London and his sisters express a desire to shut up the estate and leave. Elizabeth begins to discover more and more about Darcy that prove he is a gentleman of honor and caring. The colonel shows up at Netherfield and his admiration of Elizabeth adds to Darcy's changing opinion as to whether or not she could be his wife...despite their differences in class standing, etc.
Jane goes off to London to buy her trousseau and Elizabeth goes along. They meet Lady Matlock and it is at the Lady's ball that some angst is added to the story.
This was a pleasant read. It is not too far off canon but the author did add several new episodes which stirred matters.
May 20, 2020
There are a number of tweaks to canon here, starting at the Netherfield ball. To begin with, not only does the exchange between Darcy and Elizabeth regarding Mr. Wickham get more heated, but then Darcy implies that Jane's just following Mrs. Bennet's directive to catch Mr. Bingley. Elizabeth REALLY loses it, and her response leads Darcy to wonder if perhaps he's been wrong about Jane Bennet.
He also decides he needs to stay in Hertfordshire at least long enough to give Elizabeth more information about Wickham. It becomes humorous when Darcy's attempts to warn her always get interrupted.
In the meantime, he has more opportunities to observe as Elizabeth calmly bats down Caroline Bingley's mean-spirited attempts to subtly insult her. Knowing that Georgiana continues to suffer emotionally after the events at Ramsgate, Darcy writes her light-hearted accounts of the two ladies' verbal skermishes in hopes that his sister will find them entertaining.
And Colonel Fitzwilliam shows up at Netherfield, too. It doesn't take long for him to sniff out Darcy's interest in Elizabeth.
All the above helps to move the story forward in a different trajectory.
I do like this author's writing. The sentences flow nicely, and there are very few edit-type errors. I especially enjoy some observations her characters make. For example, Elizabeth notes the similarity in the sisterly relationships between Mrs. Hurst, who's led by her younger sister Caroline, with Kitty and Lydia, who have the same dynamic. And I LOVE that it's Elizabeth who gets Darcy out of a jam rather than the other way around.
Unfortunately, aside from Darcy's ever-present belief that Elizabeth's family is too objectionable for him to consider marrying her, there's really no major obstacle for them to overcome. His resistance lasts longer than is credible, especially since most of his significant family clearly loves her. All this makes for a pleasant story but not one that grabs the reader.
Trigger warning for implied attempted rape. There's no graphic description except of how it's prevented, and It IS relevant to the plot.
There's nothing seriously wrong with this book and lots of things that are very right. It was just too easy to put down and forget about.
He also decides he needs to stay in Hertfordshire at least long enough to give Elizabeth more information about Wickham. It becomes humorous when Darcy's attempts to warn her always get interrupted.
In the meantime, he has more opportunities to observe as Elizabeth calmly bats down Caroline Bingley's mean-spirited attempts to subtly insult her. Knowing that Georgiana continues to suffer emotionally after the events at Ramsgate, Darcy writes her light-hearted accounts of the two ladies' verbal skermishes in hopes that his sister will find them entertaining.
And Colonel Fitzwilliam shows up at Netherfield, too. It doesn't take long for him to sniff out Darcy's interest in Elizabeth.
All the above helps to move the story forward in a different trajectory.
I do like this author's writing. The sentences flow nicely, and there are very few edit-type errors. I especially enjoy some observations her characters make. For example, Elizabeth notes the similarity in the sisterly relationships between Mrs. Hurst, who's led by her younger sister Caroline, with Kitty and Lydia, who have the same dynamic. And I LOVE that it's Elizabeth who gets Darcy out of a jam rather than the other way around.
Unfortunately, aside from Darcy's ever-present belief that Elizabeth's family is too objectionable for him to consider marrying her, there's really no major obstacle for them to overcome. His resistance lasts longer than is credible, especially since most of his significant family clearly loves her. All this makes for a pleasant story but not one that grabs the reader.
Trigger warning for implied attempted rape. There's no graphic description except of how it's prevented, and It IS relevant to the plot.
There's nothing seriously wrong with this book and lots of things that are very right. It was just too easy to put down and forget about.
September 28, 2023
What if The Colonel was at Netherfield with Darcy
Richard, the Colonel, is a guest at Netherfield after the Ball. Also Lizzy is a bit more yowely at Darcy during her dance with him leading to things being discussed just before the Xmas holidays.
How will the drama change? The P&P story begins to morph into a different story. A fun read.
Richard, the Colonel, is a guest at Netherfield after the Ball. Also Lizzy is a bit more yowely at Darcy during her dance with him leading to things being discussed just before the Xmas holidays.
How will the drama change? The P&P story begins to morph into a different story. A fun read.
January 30, 2020
This is a very sweet P&P variation that starts at the Netherfield ball and quickly shed canon to have Darcy stay around and Lizzy to learn to tolerate him. Trigger warning: There is a scene of sexual violence but it is not graphic.
We quickly get to a HEA
We quickly get to a HEA
February 20, 2021
This book may just have saved my reading month. After a couple of weeks of mostly lackluster reads, this was a breath of fresh air.
The point of variation for this book comes at the Netherfield ball, where Darcy and Elizabeth's conversation during their dance takes a different turn—one that is far more frank and informative than canon. It's a theme that continues through the book. Characters communicate far more frequently and clearly, often intuiting information from situations that they might not have before. It isn't entirely realistic (and my rating reflects that), but MAN was it refreshing to read. Sometimes it's just really, really nice when conflict can come from something other than misunderstanding and miscommunication. This novel is very much about the protagonists learning their lessons through softer, less harrowing means. The one except to that is the super quick and almost handwaving way that the storyline plays out. I didn't love it, but it was nice to get it out of the way, because the heavy struggles weren't really the point. These are reasonable people learning about each other in reasonable ways. (As you can imagine, Caroline Bingley is an exception here, but isn't she [almost] always?)
I don't always enjoy a low conflict story (or low intensity conflict), but I chose to read this one from my wish list because a) it had a 4+ star rating on goodreads, b) it was short, and c) it wasn't super expensive. My expectation was a nice palate cleanser after some crappy reads, and I was not disappointed. The writing is very good, so even the convenient plot contrivances and quick resolutions didn't bother me. I loved the characters, particularly Colonel Fitzwilliam and Lady Matlock (who are great favorites with me when handled well), and thought Elizabeth and Darcy were handled well. They had actual time to get to know one another better, and for their feelings to gradually shift/be realized, and I really thought they deserved their happy ending.
A very solid 4 stars. Definitely want to read more by this author.
The point of variation for this book comes at the Netherfield ball, where Darcy and Elizabeth's conversation during their dance takes a different turn—one that is far more frank and informative than canon. It's a theme that continues through the book. Characters communicate far more frequently and clearly, often intuiting information from situations that they might not have before. It isn't entirely realistic (and my rating reflects that), but MAN was it refreshing to read. Sometimes it's just really, really nice when conflict can come from something other than misunderstanding and miscommunication. This novel is very much about the protagonists learning their lessons through softer, less harrowing means. The one except to that is the super quick and almost handwaving way that the storyline plays out. I didn't love it, but it was nice to get it out of the way, because the heavy struggles weren't really the point. These are reasonable people learning about each other in reasonable ways. (As you can imagine, Caroline Bingley is an exception here, but isn't she [almost] always?)
I don't always enjoy a low conflict story (or low intensity conflict), but I chose to read this one from my wish list because a) it had a 4+ star rating on goodreads, b) it was short, and c) it wasn't super expensive. My expectation was a nice palate cleanser after some crappy reads, and I was not disappointed. The writing is very good, so even the convenient plot contrivances and quick resolutions didn't bother me. I loved the characters, particularly Colonel Fitzwilliam and Lady Matlock (who are great favorites with me when handled well), and thought Elizabeth and Darcy were handled well. They had actual time to get to know one another better, and for their feelings to gradually shift/be realized, and I really thought they deserved their happy ending.
A very solid 4 stars. Definitely want to read more by this author.
March 5, 2020
This Pride and Prejudice variation asks what if Elizabeth provided a better understanding of certain things to Darcy at the Netherfield Ball? The complaints of Wickham, her sister's feelings, the fact that she heard his comments at the assembly, and my favorite, that not all women are like Caroline Bingley. Can Darcy recover/respond appropriately with this new information?
Our dear couple finds they can tolerably find their happily ever after - never easily though.
Our dear couple finds they can tolerably find their happily ever after - never easily though.
May 28, 2021
A sweet variance, not much in way of angst or plot. All is resolved quickly, but it makes for a nice low stress read.
Synopsis:
We open at the Netherfield ball during Darcy and Lizzy’s famous set as they argue enough to set the record straight on the following:
1.Jane isn't mercenary and Darcy can’t claim to understand her feelings.
2.Lizzy isn't interested in any haughty gentlemen from Derbyshire with a grand estate or his 10,000 because his manners are scarcely tolerable!
Voila! Just like that the air is mostly cleared and Darcy even further charmed by her saucy set down decides to not intervene with Bingley and Jane and to stay himself, at least until he can warn Miss Elizabeth the danger Wickham is, and then he’ll leave right after, and forget that unsuitable lady.
Or so he tells himself.
Wickham is even creepier than in canon but it’s resolved well, swiftly and serves the plot:
What I enjoyed:
✿The writing, dialogue, and characterizations on fleek.
✿Very witty, impertinent, & charming Lizzy.
✿Reader is privy to a lot of Darcy’s struggle & surrender. His internal deliberations are quite romantic.
✿Jealous Darcy is a fun Darcy.
✿I love a suave Colonel Fitz.
✿Darcy writing to Georgie about Lizzy’s zingers and witticisms to lift her spirits and be lighthearted with his sister was endearing.
✿I appreciate when a JAFF capitalizes on changes of events as the impetus to a character undergoing an epiphany- it was well done several instances in the novel.
What Displeased Me:
Nothing in particular, it just did not explore angst, plot, and higher stakes enough to be deemed compelling & warrant the full 5 stars.
Conclusion:
A tender, quotable, and well written JAFF. I was engaged and read straight through. My commendations to Ms Kay!
Synopsis:
We open at the Netherfield ball during Darcy and Lizzy’s famous set as they argue enough to set the record straight on the following:
1.Jane isn't mercenary and Darcy can’t claim to understand her feelings.
2.Lizzy isn't interested in any haughty gentlemen from Derbyshire with a grand estate or his 10,000 because his manners are scarcely tolerable!
Voila! Just like that the air is mostly cleared and Darcy even further charmed by her saucy set down decides to not intervene with Bingley and Jane and to stay himself, at least until he can warn Miss Elizabeth the danger Wickham is, and then he’ll leave right after, and forget that unsuitable lady.
Or so he tells himself.
Wickham is even creepier than in canon but it’s resolved well, swiftly and serves the plot:
What I enjoyed:
✿The writing, dialogue, and characterizations on fleek.
✿Very witty, impertinent, & charming Lizzy.
✿Reader is privy to a lot of Darcy’s struggle & surrender. His internal deliberations are quite romantic.
✿Jealous Darcy is a fun Darcy.
✿I love a suave Colonel Fitz.
✿Darcy writing to Georgie about Lizzy’s zingers and witticisms to lift her spirits and be lighthearted with his sister was endearing.
✿I appreciate when a JAFF capitalizes on changes of events as the impetus to a character undergoing an epiphany- it was well done several instances in the novel.
What Displeased Me:
Nothing in particular, it just did not explore angst, plot, and higher stakes enough to be deemed compelling & warrant the full 5 stars.
Conclusion:
A tender, quotable, and well written JAFF. I was engaged and read straight through. My commendations to Ms Kay!
May 19, 2020
It was an enjoyable read - an attempt to show what might have happened, had Elizabeth and Darcy been open to real communication with each other. It is low on angst, and some characters are considerably mellowed while other become either vile beyond redemption or simply grotesque . There are quite a few lines borrowed from Austen, often in a creative way. Some details did make me raise my eyebrows and so I deduct a star from the rating. On the whole, though, if you have a free afternoon, enjoy P&P retellings and need something positive, not too demanding but well-written, the book is for you.
July 4, 2020
In this Pride and Prejudice variation, Darcy decides, based on something Elizabeth Bennet says to him at the Netherfield ball, not to dissuade Bingley from pursuing Jane Bennet. He had said something arrogant about how such matches were decided among her neighbors, but instead of only being insulted, this time Elizabeth gave him just enough information that he realized he might be wrong about what he observed as Jane's lack of feeling for Bingley.
This is a romantic and compelling version of the story, and it was especially interesting in how Wickham's true character is finally revealed to Elizabeth. Very well written, and edited, though the few major "typos" jumped me out of the story a bit. I found this an enjoyable and well-written story that anyone who loves these variations on Jane Austen's most popular novel will enjoy. I loved Lady Matlock in this story, and what happens when Jane and Elizabeth are shopping in London. And then the ball, oh my! There are some clever twists in the story line that make it well worth reading.
This is a romantic and compelling version of the story, and it was especially interesting in how Wickham's true character is finally revealed to Elizabeth. Very well written, and edited, though the few major "typos" jumped me out of the story a bit. I found this an enjoyable and well-written story that anyone who loves these variations on Jane Austen's most popular novel will enjoy. I loved Lady Matlock in this story, and what happens when Jane and Elizabeth are shopping in London. And then the ball, oh my! There are some clever twists in the story line that make it well worth reading.
March 29, 2020
They Talk!
This one is well written, low on angst and a bit more realistic, in that, -miraculously- ODC actually have (has?) some conversations that clarify rather than confuse. There is a bit plot where Darcy keeps getting interrupted when he tries to convey the Wickham history but I think without that stalling technique, this would have been a much shorter book. Nicely done and, in case you're interested or not, squeaky clean. A couple of edit corrections needed but nothing major.
This one is well written, low on angst and a bit more realistic, in that, -miraculously- ODC actually have (has?) some conversations that clarify rather than confuse. There is a bit plot where Darcy keeps getting interrupted when he tries to convey the Wickham history but I think without that stalling technique, this would have been a much shorter book. Nicely done and, in case you're interested or not, squeaky clean. A couple of edit corrections needed but nothing major.
June 20, 2020
A very good, sweet, clean variation. I loved the premise of the book—getting a better understanding of things before misunderstandings got too out of hand. I especially loved the beginning pages—getting right to the point from the beginning paragraphs. Truly a refreshing change. Any book that begins with dialogue, as opposed to a chapter or two filled with narrative is a big plus for me, as I love good dialogue. Well written, but still has a few proofreading errors. I highly recommend this one.
April 30, 2023
Good book
This was a good book, but I would have liked an epilogue. I like that ms Bingley got her due. Loved lady matlock
This was a good book, but I would have liked an epilogue. I like that ms Bingley got her due. Loved lady matlock
January 6, 2023
I think this book could have been drastically improved by a few well placed time jumps. It just dragged a little for me. Not to say I didn’t like it. I love a more non-angsty story & more rational characters. Plus, there were a few surprises that I thoroughly enjoyed. I also would have liked to see a bit further into their marriage.
May 13, 2022
Well written, refreshingly low angst.
June 15, 2020
Not quite the thing.
It took a long time for the Better Understanding implied by the title of this variation to take place. Lizzy's resentment and dislike were implacable for a long time and Darcy's need to do the right thing for the Darcy name to be held in high esteem was a battle he found difficult to refute.
There are no Rosings and Hunsford, so there is no appalling proposal; the story mostly takes place at Longbourn and Netherfield, but a trip to London to assemble Jane's trousseau takes place and we meet Lady Matlock, who, in this story, is a delight. I much prefer a pleasant Lady Matlock to another Lady Catherine.
Wickham's perfidy and true nature is revealed in a shocking way, but there can be no doubt at all just whose story relates the truth regarding Wickham and his life's history with the Darcy's. But this revelation has nothing to do with Lydia.
The story was a bit bland in my opinion, but it was readable. I did not consider putting it aside as I have several new P&P variations of late. The writing was reasonable though there were a number of malapropisms that really made me me shake my head: eg, Viscous rather than vicious and retched instead of wretched.
And one of my biggest bug bears reared it’s very annoying head...drug is NOT the past tense of drag!
I do not know where this very annoying habit comes from, but i find that it is an Americanism; I am sure I have not seen it used by British or other European authors and I know it is not something Australians say! There, I have had my little rant.
I awarded 3 1/2 stars but as reviewers cannot award half stars, I had to settle for three as 4 stars makes the book better than what it is IMO. 🌟🌟🌟
It took a long time for the Better Understanding implied by the title of this variation to take place. Lizzy's resentment and dislike were implacable for a long time and Darcy's need to do the right thing for the Darcy name to be held in high esteem was a battle he found difficult to refute.
There are no Rosings and Hunsford, so there is no appalling proposal; the story mostly takes place at Longbourn and Netherfield, but a trip to London to assemble Jane's trousseau takes place and we meet Lady Matlock, who, in this story, is a delight. I much prefer a pleasant Lady Matlock to another Lady Catherine.
Wickham's perfidy and true nature is revealed in a shocking way, but there can be no doubt at all just whose story relates the truth regarding Wickham and his life's history with the Darcy's. But this revelation has nothing to do with Lydia.
The story was a bit bland in my opinion, but it was readable. I did not consider putting it aside as I have several new P&P variations of late. The writing was reasonable though there were a number of malapropisms that really made me me shake my head: eg, Viscous rather than vicious and retched instead of wretched.
And one of my biggest bug bears reared it’s very annoying head...drug is NOT the past tense of drag!
I do not know where this very annoying habit comes from, but i find that it is an Americanism; I am sure I have not seen it used by British or other European authors and I know it is not something Australians say! There, I have had my little rant.
I awarded 3 1/2 stars but as reviewers cannot award half stars, I had to settle for three as 4 stars makes the book better than what it is IMO. 🌟🌟🌟
April 16, 2020
Wonderful
This story has a wonderful balance of romance and angst, enough of each to make for an engaging tale. It begins at the Netherfield ball, and Elizabeth's dance with Darcy. Unlike the original P&P, Elizabeth speaks to Darcy about Jane's feelings for Mr. Bingley, and she also makes clear that she doesn't like Mr.Darcy very much. Both of these things are a revelation for Darcy, and have a profound effect on his subsequent actions. The first effect is that Darcy now throws his support behind Bingley when Bingley decides to propose to Jane and his sisters object. The next effect is to make Elizabeth a much more notable woman in Darcy's eyes, about the only woman who's ever been immune to his attraction.
Although Darcy doesn't succumb immediately to his fascination with Elizabeth, his interest in her is always strong, and it's amusing to witness the gradual erosion of his self control where she is concerned. Elizabeth is a more tough nut to crack, and her journey to HEA is not so easy. As usual, she has to discover the hard truth that she's put her trust in the wrong guy (Wickham), and that her ability to judge character is not that great. However, the building of the relationship between Elizabeth and Darcy is handled well, not rushed, and seems plausible. The Darcy character in this version is patient and understanding, and the romance builds on a most satisfying way.
There were quite a few editing errors, missing words and words wrongly used. Luckily, these were not enough to be distracting. The book is well written. I recommend it highly.
This story has a wonderful balance of romance and angst, enough of each to make for an engaging tale. It begins at the Netherfield ball, and Elizabeth's dance with Darcy. Unlike the original P&P, Elizabeth speaks to Darcy about Jane's feelings for Mr. Bingley, and she also makes clear that she doesn't like Mr.Darcy very much. Both of these things are a revelation for Darcy, and have a profound effect on his subsequent actions. The first effect is that Darcy now throws his support behind Bingley when Bingley decides to propose to Jane and his sisters object. The next effect is to make Elizabeth a much more notable woman in Darcy's eyes, about the only woman who's ever been immune to his attraction.
Although Darcy doesn't succumb immediately to his fascination with Elizabeth, his interest in her is always strong, and it's amusing to witness the gradual erosion of his self control where she is concerned. Elizabeth is a more tough nut to crack, and her journey to HEA is not so easy. As usual, she has to discover the hard truth that she's put her trust in the wrong guy (Wickham), and that her ability to judge character is not that great. However, the building of the relationship between Elizabeth and Darcy is handled well, not rushed, and seems plausible. The Darcy character in this version is patient and understanding, and the romance builds on a most satisfying way.
There were quite a few editing errors, missing words and words wrongly used. Luckily, these were not enough to be distracting. The book is well written. I recommend it highly.
May 17, 2021
3.5 stars
This was a pretty quick read for me - I really breezed through it and I think that's a testament to how easy this story was to fall into.
The choice to make Darcy stay at Netherfield and not slight Jane and her perceived motivations was a solid one, and I think plot wise all that ensued was on par for the believable. It strengthened Darcy's character that despite his personal feelings on the matter, he actually considered Bingley’s over his own and that lessened the conflict between himself and Lizzy in the long run which was a major point of contention in the original tale. Yes, it changes Darcy's overall demeanour and the impact that decision originally has, but I think it was avenue worth exploring.
I also quite enjoyed how Caroline’s desperate machinations at compromise being thwarted was the height of the drama and the perfect conclusion to it. It exacerbated Caroline's desperation to obtain what she wanted and I quite enjoyed seeing her efforts fail.
All in all, the recipe of this story was one and a half parts drama, a smidge of angst, a healthy dose of the theatrics and a large helping of a slowly burning yet increasingly growing affection between two passionate people - and it was delightful.
Was it anything earth-shattering to the point where I think you need to go and pick this up right now and devour it? No.
But if the synopsis tickles your fancy and you're on the hunt for a more light-hearted read, then yeah, have at it.
This was a pretty quick read for me - I really breezed through it and I think that's a testament to how easy this story was to fall into.
The choice to make Darcy stay at Netherfield and not slight Jane and her perceived motivations was a solid one, and I think plot wise all that ensued was on par for the believable. It strengthened Darcy's character that despite his personal feelings on the matter, he actually considered Bingley’s over his own and that lessened the conflict between himself and Lizzy in the long run which was a major point of contention in the original tale. Yes, it changes Darcy's overall demeanour and the impact that decision originally has, but I think it was avenue worth exploring.
I also quite enjoyed how Caroline’s desperate machinations at compromise being thwarted was the height of the drama and the perfect conclusion to it. It exacerbated Caroline's desperation to obtain what she wanted and I quite enjoyed seeing her efforts fail.
All in all, the recipe of this story was one and a half parts drama, a smidge of angst, a healthy dose of the theatrics and a large helping of a slowly burning yet increasingly growing affection between two passionate people - and it was delightful.
Was it anything earth-shattering to the point where I think you need to go and pick this up right now and devour it? No.
But if the synopsis tickles your fancy and you're on the hunt for a more light-hearted read, then yeah, have at it.
August 30, 2023
This variation of Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice opens up mid conversation during Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy’s dance at the Netherfield Ball, which was quite jarring. Once when I mentally caught up what had happened before this point in the original, I ended up loving this book and the direction that it took.
I devoured the way that Darcy and Elizabeth were able to grow in their characters and understanding one another throughout the book now that there was no misunderstanding about Jane’s feelings for Bingley, as well as the truth about Wickham was disclosed right off the bat. The way the the author wrote out the alternative story was well done, although at times blending Austen’s voice to her own wasn’t as smooth in some places. Still well done but slightly noticiable in some instances.
I somehow convinced myself that this book was a series and would continue with Elizabeth and her time at Pemberly, with Kitty moving in and what would happen with the Darcy’s relationship with Caroline, but alas, I was sadly mistaken, this is a standalone. I guess it just goes to show how much I wanted to stay in this specific world that the author created. I will continue to read her other stories when the mood strikes me for another P&P reread (I seem to get bit by that bug a few times a year.) But for now, I’ll let myself hold onto the joy that was this variation.
I devoured the way that Darcy and Elizabeth were able to grow in their characters and understanding one another throughout the book now that there was no misunderstanding about Jane’s feelings for Bingley, as well as the truth about Wickham was disclosed right off the bat. The way the the author wrote out the alternative story was well done, although at times blending Austen’s voice to her own wasn’t as smooth in some places. Still well done but slightly noticiable in some instances.
I somehow convinced myself that this book was a series and would continue with Elizabeth and her time at Pemberly, with Kitty moving in and what would happen with the Darcy’s relationship with Caroline, but alas, I was sadly mistaken, this is a standalone. I guess it just goes to show how much I wanted to stay in this specific world that the author created. I will continue to read her other stories when the mood strikes me for another P&P reread (I seem to get bit by that bug a few times a year.) But for now, I’ll let myself hold onto the joy that was this variation.
June 13, 2020
All In Hertfordshire
In this Pride and Prejudice variation, Elizabeth Bennet informs Fitzwilliam Darcy of her dislike of him and of Jane’s preference for Mr Charles Bingley at the Netherfield ball. Therefore Mr. Bingley and Mr. Darcy do not leave Hertfordshire. Mr. Darcy sticks around long enough to improve Elizabeth’s opinion of him and Charles Bingley asks Jane to marry him early on. Most of this story is light and playful. It also has a good touch of romance and humor.
Despite this, I have several complaints about this story. The first is that Elizabeth and Darcy do not come to an understanding until the story is almost over. By the time he speaks up, the story is 93% complete. There are also several errors in the book. This shows poor editing. The other issue is using large amounts of sentences, phrases etc., from the original story. The author uses so much of the original Pride and Prejudice, its almost a rewrite. Writers should use their own words. For this lack of originality I gave the story a 4 instead of a 5 of 5 rating. Overall it is an enjoyable book.
In this Pride and Prejudice variation, Elizabeth Bennet informs Fitzwilliam Darcy of her dislike of him and of Jane’s preference for Mr Charles Bingley at the Netherfield ball. Therefore Mr. Bingley and Mr. Darcy do not leave Hertfordshire. Mr. Darcy sticks around long enough to improve Elizabeth’s opinion of him and Charles Bingley asks Jane to marry him early on. Most of this story is light and playful. It also has a good touch of romance and humor.
Despite this, I have several complaints about this story. The first is that Elizabeth and Darcy do not come to an understanding until the story is almost over. By the time he speaks up, the story is 93% complete. There are also several errors in the book. This shows poor editing. The other issue is using large amounts of sentences, phrases etc., from the original story. The author uses so much of the original Pride and Prejudice, its almost a rewrite. Writers should use their own words. For this lack of originality I gave the story a 4 instead of a 5 of 5 rating. Overall it is an enjoyable book.
February 22, 2020
Maybe 4.5
Really enjoyed this version. I liked that Elizabeth made a comment that opened Darcy's eyes early and how Wickham ended up revealing what Darcy was just about to say. I only highlighted two incorrect word choices and one typo. There were a few questionable authoring decisions I am not sure stand up to scrutiny. When did Wickham ever see Elizabeth and Darcy together? How could Elizabeth and Mrs Gardiner have noticed Mr Darcy taking his leave if they were in Mrs Gardiner's room? (And surely he wouldn't have left without taking leave of Elizabeth?) And does she really want him to call her Lizzy?
Really enjoyed this version. I liked that Elizabeth made a comment that opened Darcy's eyes early and how Wickham ended up revealing what Darcy was just about to say. I only highlighted two incorrect word choices and one typo. There were a few questionable authoring decisions I am not sure stand up to scrutiny. When did Wickham ever see Elizabeth and Darcy together? How could Elizabeth and Mrs Gardiner have noticed Mr Darcy taking his leave if they were in Mrs Gardiner's room? (And surely he wouldn't have left without taking leave of Elizabeth?) And does she really want him to call her Lizzy?
April 6, 2020
This
I never thought I would love a better way of making Elizabeth aware of Wickham's treacherous self. This book has proved me wrong! The author is by far the best of her contemporaries . I can not assure all those who have not had the pleasure reading this version are in for a rare treat. Her way of describing looks does not cause a moment of thought by the reader for your imagination is not needed to see it you are wherever the parties are and observing everything going on. Austen fans treat yourselves to an excellent capture of P & P.
I can not believe I have read a P & P version that
I never thought I would love a better way of making Elizabeth aware of Wickham's treacherous self. This book has proved me wrong! The author is by far the best of her contemporaries . I can not assure all those who have not had the pleasure reading this version are in for a rare treat. Her way of describing looks does not cause a moment of thought by the reader for your imagination is not needed to see it you are wherever the parties are and observing everything going on. Austen fans treat yourselves to an excellent capture of P & P.
I can not believe I have read a P & P version that
June 7, 2020
Another published JAFF I read this weekend. It was pretty good too although some conversations heroes have I cannot see happening in the original story. Too modern somehow. But other than that it's a nice variation of an original story. Caroline Bingley here was not worst I saw but still pretty awful. Elizabeth faces the world that a lady was not supposed to witness and this encounter shatters her world. Mr Darcy is somehow naive at one moment. I wonder how he survived ton for so long. But all end well as it should.
April 14, 2020
A simple variation with the main twist being more communication between Darcy and Elizabeth earlier on, leading to a better understanding of each other. I found this book well written though a bit boring. The editing was also pretty good except for the incorrect usage of gentile (happened at least twice). Ms. Kay, the word you’re looking for is genteel!
February 9, 2024
3.5/5 - Decent, easy read
This book was a well written, easy read. There were a lot of common tropes, but it was interesting enough.
The one thing I didn't like was that Lizzy was slightly OOC. Occasionally, she'd blurt out what she was thinking, and she'd embarrass herself. She wasn't very witty or charming like in the book. Also, shs was awed by Darcy's wealth.
This book was a well written, easy read. There were a lot of common tropes, but it was interesting enough.
The one thing I didn't like was that Lizzy was slightly OOC. Occasionally, she'd blurt out what she was thinking, and she'd embarrass herself. She wasn't very witty or charming like in the book. Also, shs was awed by Darcy's wealth.
January 23, 2020
Satisfying read
So this is how things might go if Wickham had been gotten out out of the way earlier. I liked how the telling alternated between Elizabeth’s and Darcy’s points of view. Loved the failed compromise scene and what Lady Matlock had to say about it.
So this is how things might go if Wickham had been gotten out out of the way earlier. I liked how the telling alternated between Elizabeth’s and Darcy’s points of view. Loved the failed compromise scene and what Lady Matlock had to say about it.
February 17, 2020
Only one thing missing
In all honesty, this version is closer to a 5; but, as it is missing an epilogue (which I dearly live in P&P variations), I could not rate it as perfect. Epilogues provide insight into Darcy & Elizabeth’s future bliss.
In all honesty, this version is closer to a 5; but, as it is missing an epilogue (which I dearly live in P&P variations), I could not rate it as perfect. Epilogues provide insight into Darcy & Elizabeth’s future bliss.
February 24, 2020
P&P variation
Darcy found out about Jane’s regard for Bingley very early asks Elizabeth found out about Wickham Aron’s the same time. So there’s not much angst, the plot is little weak.
Darcy found out about Jane’s regard for Bingley very early asks Elizabeth found out about Wickham Aron’s the same time. So there’s not much angst, the plot is little weak.
May 3, 2020
This was a nice little read. I liked the turn of events after the Netherfield ball and how Wickham was revealed. I also like the open-ness that Darcy began to show Elizabeth. I would have liked more content after they were married.
August 15, 2020
Loved this story!
Loved this story! It is told from the viewpoint of “what if” Mr Bingley and his party stayed at Netherfield after the Ball and Mr Darcy remained as well. There is opportunity to build a relationship early on. A fun Lady Matlock is always a bonus!
Loved this story! It is told from the viewpoint of “what if” Mr Bingley and his party stayed at Netherfield after the Ball and Mr Darcy remained as well. There is opportunity to build a relationship early on. A fun Lady Matlock is always a bonus!
March 27, 2024
Great story!
Wonderful variation that is a well written storyline on the original theme. The villains were dealt with and Elizabeth and Darcy had an angst-filled journey to the HEA. Enjoy!
Wonderful variation that is a well written storyline on the original theme. The villains were dealt with and Elizabeth and Darcy had an angst-filled journey to the HEA. Enjoy!
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