A cargo ship is attacked by their alien enemies, not realising that petty interspecies squabbles are about to become the least of their worries.
I really enjoyed this novel. The world-building was very well done. The salient points to the plot development were all covered, but I would have liked a bit more information to help me figure things out. My biggest sense of confusion involves when these events occur. There was no mention of events that I would recognise (and how far in the past those happened), although we do learn that one of the ships was at least 150 years old, so I think it's fairly safe to assume that the setting is a minimum of 200 years in the future. I am also confused about the sociopolitical structure of human society. We learn roughly about how humanity came to be united, (although the nomenclature would suggest that this may be a tenuous alliance), but nothing really of how society has evolved (e.g. family structure, how government works, who oversees the space transport industry, etc). While these details don't pertain to the main story, they do provide context and a sense of background (which likely would shape assumptions and attitudes) for the characters.
The characters really stood out to me as being well-developed, fully human (even the alien), and vividly portrayed. I think that layer of context (to understand their culture) would have added yet another dimension to them - this was very well done in the case of Seven-Twenty-Nine and it made me wish for more on the human side. Incidentally, I loved Seven-Twenty-Nine - I wanted to hear more from him.
The pacing was excellent.
Another editing pass would really help this novel along. Plurals, possessives, and plural possessives were confused more often than they were correct. There was also some odd punctuation placement that should be corrected. Finally, "hanger" and "hangar" were used interchangeably (the place were you hang your coat is most definitely not suitable for parking your space ship). Cleaning this up would really help the book to shine.
My own personal preference, when it comes to reading any genre set in a different time or cultural space, is to see language that is specific to that setting. For example, in medieval-era fantasy novels, I like when they take their Gods' names in vain, and when their profanity comes from their own cultural touchstones. It's a tiny detail that I find enriches the world and makes it feel more real. I would have liked to have seen the evolution of slang, profanity, and language as a whole in this novel.
Another element that I noticed and would have liked to have had explained was how the human body has adapted (or technology assists) in mitigating the effects of zero-G. It was a nice idea that people can just float around for extended periods of time, but the reality is that modern astronauts have to work extremely hard to maintain muscle tone for their relatively short stints on the ISS. Not to mention the effects of fluid redistribution, reproductive concerns, and so on. This isn't a detail that has a serious impact on the story, but even a toss-off comment about being unable to return to worlds with a certain gravitational force (or some tech that helps regulate these effects) would have made this feel more realistic.
The way the author treated the horror elements of this story was excellent and it certainly made for terrifying events, so I believe the choice to reduce backstory and explanation for these elements was likely intentional. I would have appreciated more context - even if the characters didn't know, as in the case of Seven-Twenty-Nine (we learn about his culture, but the human characters remain ignorant), which was handled brilliantly. (What level of conscious intent was present? Was there a social structure or hierarchy in their culture? What about the "ghost" - was he aware?)
I also want to add, for the record, that the ending was perfect.
I really enjoyed this novel. I'm definitely going to be reading more from this author!
I received an ARC via the author.