Mediocre SciFi Story Poorly Told
"Solitude: Dimension Space Book One," has a mediocre story, that is poorly told by its author, Mr. Dean M. Cole.
The near-time story, follows the two (2) MC's, lone survivors of an event, that has made all life, other than plants, disappear from Earth. One character is on Earth, while the other is stranded, alone on the ISS. The planet-side male MC, belatedly discovers the orbiting female MC, embarks on a haphazard rescue mission, as the energy event centered at the CERN facility in Switzerland, is creating gravity anomalies.
There exists a kernel of potential merit in the story. However, the author's lackluster execution, lame and frankly, dumb plot devices, coupled with the least sympathetic MC character in recent memory (the male MC), makes the story difficult to buy into. Mr. Cole has improved his basic writing skills, since his earlier works, but still exhibits serious shortcomings. "Arcane," "...arcane plumbing...," "...bulbous...," and "...azure...," make multiple appearances throughout the book, making a reader wonder which edition of writing software and/or thesaurus of the "Indie Writing Guild," the author is using? The author seems lost at deciding how to refer to his characters in the narratives. First person, second person, third person, all appear within one paragraph. There is additionally needless repetition in such a short work, as "page fill," a writer's faulty reading comprehension or a belief that readers have no reading comprehension.
The plot devices require a reader's complete suspension of credulity and the acceptance of fantasy. [Spoiler Alert! Multiple Follow!] The male MC, is a veteran, U.S. Army combat helicopter pilot. He first endeavors to secure a "rumored" secret space plane, stored at Area 51. He gets there, finds the vehicle, reads the "owner's manual," and heads up into orbit. After "screwing the pooch," he parachutes into a Mexican resort, gets a little R & R, decides to obtain an advanced nuclear power cell from NASA facilities in Houston, gets it, flies to a NASA Cleveland facility, and begins modifying an experimental gravity-defying test vehicle. Oh, yeah, almost forgot-he heads over to Home Depot to get all he needs to complete a rehab of the hoped for rescue craft.
The final point of failure for this reader is the male MC. He is a selfish, self-absorbed, wrecking crew of a mama's boy (the author has a trail of Oedipal issues throughout his earlier works too), who the author centers the entire story on. The MC actually shuts an eyelid and cups his "...testicles...," with a hand, when handling the radioactive power cell. The entire rescue mission story is mainly the male MC's obsession with himself, his feelings, his needs, his abnormal personality, and not about the starving and near death, resourceful female astronaut in orbit. She's a MC that reader can root for, invest in, not the "*ick" that he is.
"Solitude," is a neutral recommendation, as some readers may enjoy Mr. Cole's fantasies, overlooking the pervasive failures and faults. The novel was fully read via Kindle Unlimited.